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Evergreen Immortal长青仙尊

Li Rui had lived to to seventy without any cheat or golden finger. Looking back on his life, he had... Read more
Li Rui had lived to to seventy without any cheat or golden finger. Looking back on his life, he had gained nothing and accomplished nothing. Just as he’s been worn down by the years and resigned to his fate, he unexpectedly awakened the Perfect Life System.

“Come on, tell me, how is a seventy-year-old man who’s about to kick the bucket supposed to live a perfect life?!”

【You are born with the Martial Bone, and from the moment of your birth, you are destined to become the world’s number one. You gain the talent – Martial Bone.】

【At the age of ten, you join a renowned sect and shine in the sect’s grand tournament, gaining fame and attracting the attention of an immortal teacher. You acquire the talent – Divine Skill Mastery.】

Looking at 【Gains the favor of an immortal maiden, becoming a divine couple】, he fell silent.

“Seventy years old is just the right age to start doing things!”



Many years later.

Li Rui finally emerges with the supreme innate Dao fetus, slaying ten thousand demons, breaking ten thousand evils, and ruling over the immortal realm for a hundred thousand years. He is hailed by the world as the Evergreen Immortal Venerable. Collapse
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    Интересная история про культивирующего старичка-конюха. Не соглашусь с товарищами писавшими про восхваление империи, что оно притянуто за уши, как по мне всё сделано должным образом.
    Если вам так не нравится, можете заменить слова "империя" и "император" на "секта" и "мастер секты". Когда товарищи комментаторы писали что мощь империи притянута за уши и слишком много восхваления величия императора, то просто представьте что это огромная и могущественная секта с бесчисленными ресурсами, мастерами и сильным лидером во главе. И всё ваше так называемое "пропагандирование Великого Китая" сойдёт на нет. А если вам до сих пор кажется, что это так, то открою небольшой секрет, любой рассказ о культивировании по сути превозносит могущество китайцев и их мифических существ, не специально конечно, поскольку лично для самих китайцев это скорее сказка основанная на их мифическом фольклоре, в то время как для нас это превознесение их народа. В целом это просто зависит от точки зрения 🤷. По сути в каждой стране найдутся свои легенды которые если перевести в роман, то будут превозносить героев как неких всесильных и всезнающих существ.
    Если кто-то дочитал до этого момента, то повторюсь в целом это довольно хорошая история где автор, как по мне, довольно неплохо написал старого и опытного по житейским меркам героя (он не один из тех старых монстров получивших второй шанс и постоянно твердящих о том какие все наивные дети для них и они самые хитрые, нет, это просто обычный человек имеющий мирскую мудрость накопленную за прожитую жизнь и соответствующее его возрасту сдержанное состояния ума. В общем это делает данного героя более интересным на фоне других новелл. Я написал данный комментарий несколько скомкано и не последовательно, но надеюсь он поможет, Вам, оценить для себя достоинства данной новеллы и, возможно открыть для себя новую любимую или запомнившуюся историю.
    P.S. на самом деле я оставил данный отзыв не дочитав до последней главы, поскольку на момент написания комментария история ещё не дописано и сейчас легче её отложить чем когда дойдёшь до последней доступной главы. Прочитал примерно половину доступного машинного перевода и в целом он был довольно неплохим по качеству, читать можно, так сказать.
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    Could’ve been so good if the MC wasn’t so petty and constantly holding grudges.
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      If one doesn’t have a grudge book what is the point of life?
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    Tsk, average, Rank C-
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    I hope the mc will actually act and think like his actual old age because big problem with these old mc novels is always that mc doesn't act like their age.
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    This looks like a trap 🪤 novel
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    Quote: Sasuke_come_back
    3.5-3.7 🌚

    I read this when I was looking for something similar to "I Shall Be Everlasting In the World of Immortals."

    The first 50 chapters are not bad, quite passable.

    The world is also not bad, there is no traditional "cultivation" here, but only body tempering (Qi energy, golden bones, various mortal techniques).

    There are no flying immortals in the world, and there is no usual "Qi cultivation, Core Creation, golden core," etc. Only mortals, and that's not bad.

    The characters live for a maximum of 300 years, at least until chapter 120, I did not read further.

    The MC cheat is a show-off in front of influential and powerful NPCs, a rather worthless shield created for the sake of the plot. Yes, there is no plot here, as if nothing interesting is happening in the world, until chapter 120 there is a story about how the MC survives and moves back and forth inside one small area (the size of one state).

    NPCs are at least 2.5D but fall short of 3D, shortcuts are everywhere and NPCs don't grow except for 2-3 key characters.

    I dropped it on chapter 120 because I was tired of reading about "the greatness of the Empire, a powerful super cool Emperor, cool army, a single Empire holds the country 10,000 km away like a fist, all sects obey the Empire, officials are above any sect disciples," etc. for 5 chapters!! 🤮

    The author is a fanatic obsessed with praising the ancient Chinese empire of Tang/Ming/Shit that crosses all boundaries, and tells an info dump of several chapters, and this information is completely unrelated to the next 10 chapters!! Stupid beginner loser, can't write!

    Or it's China's hidden propaganda, not nationalism, but no less disgusting shit.😠


    i also find this when im searching for the I Shall Be Everlasting In the World of Immortals RAWS and yeah the author is fueled by ccp if you read it
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    Lazy writing, no plot and worth less showing off to NPCs
    Any daoist worth it's mettle would find showing off to mortals pathetic 💔
    Click for some good novel recs :))
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    3.5-3.7 🌚

    I read this when I was looking for something similar to "I Shall Be Everlasting In the World of Immortals."

    The first 50 chapters are not bad, quite passable.

    The world is also not bad, there is no traditional "cultivation" here, but only body tempering (Qi energy, golden bones, various mortal techniques).

    There are no flying immortals in the world, and there is no usual "Qi cultivation, Core Creation, golden core," etc. Only mortals, and that's not bad.

    The characters live for a maximum of 300 years, at least until chapter 120, I did not read further.

    The MC cheat is a show-off in front of influential and powerful NPCs, a rather worthless shield created for the sake of the plot. Yes, there is no plot here, as if nothing interesting is happening in the world, until chapter 120 there is a story about how the MC survives and moves back and forth inside one small area (the size of one state).

    NPCs are at least 2.5D but fall short of 3D, shortcuts are everywhere and NPCs don't grow except for 2-3 key characters.

    I dropped it on chapter 120 because I was tired of reading about "the greatness of the Empire, a powerful super cool Emperor, cool army, a single Empire holds the country 10,000 km away like a fist, all sects obey the Empire, officials are above any sect disciples," etc. for 5 chapters!! 🤮

    The author is a fanatic obsessed with praising the ancient Chinese empire of Tang/Ming/Shit that crosses all boundaries, and tells an info dump of several chapters, and this information is completely unrelated to the next 10 chapters!! Stupid beginner loser, can't write!

    Or it's China's hidden propaganda, not nationalism, but no less disgusting shit.😠
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    I was here too 10

    If it had romance I might have tried it, I mean it does sound like it might dabble in a little, but... no tag. Can't do it mate, no deal. Ehehe~ 6
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      Yup, immortal life without spouse is boring.
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        Pathetic fools
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          Oh! It's fellow Daoist Beauty immunity Expressionless Stone hearted Dense Mountain Dao Companion Sword.
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            Cultivating the unfeeling sutra is the only way to nirvana
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              Хэйтеры романтики выражают свою поддержку культивированию Дао Отсечения Чувств и ставят минусики последователям Дао Сердца.
              Я же являясь последователем Дао Сердца желаю поддержать своего коллегу Лаоса плюсом 😆
              Но вместе с этим настоятельно рекомендую не отбрасывать в сторону священные писания не относящиеся к нашему Дао ибо из них можно подчеркнуть вдохновение для питания и совершенствования нашего разума и сердца Дао.
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    I was here

    Yeah no, if it had comedy i might have tried it, i mean it does sound like comedy but no tag.
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