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Naruto: The Wind Calamity by Devil_Hex

The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the... Read more
The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the transmigration results in chakra being unlocked. Follow the story of the MC as he grows in power and stabilizes himself into the world of ninjas and trains to be the strongest.

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Warning:

1. The MC won't be op for a long time. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over years (so if u want an op mc right from the word go, this one ain't for you)

2. No harem (probably no romance either)

3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)

4. The story will start slow. Quite a few of initial chapters will be around training, orphanage and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Genin.

5. MC is a careful person, he won't put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.

6. I haven't read (nor will be reading) Baruto. So Baruto plotline won't be considered much in here.

What to expect:

1. Smart and consistent MC

2. Lots of training

3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage

4. A lot of original arcs.

5. Plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or it's characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover isn't mine and belongs to R. J

P.S. It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully I'll improve as this fanfic progresses forward. Collapse
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    Suzuki Fujin - generated by author

    another edit from author and a fan
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      Amazing cat
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        Author did say his one wasnt perfect since he cant get the AI to do it exactly how he wanted it so take the fanmade one as cannon since its more inline with the novel description, even the author said so.
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          I'm only at 5 chapter, but 6 swords... Really? Why?
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            The swords couldn't be erased oru2x author said, ignore them... he has 2 iirc
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      The first image looks a bit feminine
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    • 4.5
    4.5
    Like other reviews say, a solid Naruto fanfic (author goes deep on training arcs though).

    But there's one thing I find a major letdown, is that MC has no emotions, no morals, no sentiments, he's just dead emotionally... Even Sai (when he was introduced in canon) had more emotion than Fujin.
    It's like MC is playing a game, he treats others as just NPCs. He gives no fks about anyone. MC would cross any line if he can gain something (the only reason he's not doing anything is because he isn't strong enough to get away with it). As of the latest chapter he spent more than a decade in that world but he has literally 0 attachments, no friends. On rare occasions we see him happy on learning a new jutsu and even rare among rare cases, anger too; And that's as far as his emotions go.
    Okay so he went inside a manga, so ig it's normal he thinks of others as just fictional characters, BUT it's been a fking decade and he hasn't developed in any way since the beginning of the novel. His character is stagnant.
    From some of the comments I've seen, people find this a good thing for some reason. But imo this is the worst part of the novel.
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    You know the thing, the story writing is pretty good. But the fact he doesnt try to change the story sucks.

    Among all fanfic, this is the most likelike Naruto(his dialogues).
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      Seriously bro, that guy never changes it
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    The fact that all characters say, "Leave it...", when monologing to themselves is so stupid. -_-
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    guys anyone got as good as this fanfic ? that make really sense in story . cat
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      I Can Become Stronger Just By Teaching
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        I'll try it
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      Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
      by Elbowsnapper
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    Best Naruto Fanfic I have ever read, please recommend me some good fanfics
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      I Can Become Stronger Just By Teaching
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      Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
      by Elbowsnapper
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    My only problems with this fic are:
    1- The way the author makes the characters dumb so that the MC can be the intelligent manipulator. (A guy from a "peaceful" world arrives in the Naruto world and he deceives and manipulates ninjas who have lived in physical and political wars, and no one simply realizes that he is deceiving everyone and it is simply absurd.
    2- shadow clones, seriously bro, in the manga it says that it is impossible to train with shadow clones, only in very specific cases where the ninja has a practically inhuman healing factor, like that of Hashirama and Jinchuuriki, the amount of information would fry the brain of any other ninja, and the MC is obviously neither. but the MC simply makes several clones and leaves them training and studying for days and days, bro you could just make the MC a genius without needing this stupid nonsense, in history there are several examples of ninjas who reached Rank S at a young age, damn* Minato himself is a clear example.
    3- the powers, the development of the wind element and fuuinjutsu are fantastic, even the new hiraishin sensor method is very good. but the rest is meaningless, eight gates, hidan's jujutsu, mind reading, etc... simply for what bro?

    So to add that the MC doesn't develop emotional relationships with anyone, the guy is a damn robot with no emotions.
    If you ignore most of these things the work is really good.
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    Oh finally they put this on Ranobes… Well still it's free to read no matter where the site, but still… This is definitely top the chart when it comes to Naruto Fan-Fic. welldone
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    • 4.8
    4.8
    Out of all the Naruto fics, this one has to be the most consistent one, be it in the story with new plots and canon interference to grammar... I guess having a native english speaker as the author does makes things different. cat

    The rest are chinese with bad translations that make you more confused than ever crybaby, so i suggest you give this one a chance. The development may seem slow but that's the objective. I read till the newest chapters and can say that the MC didn't get OP from one day to another like those system bullshit ones do.

    Definitely one of the only readings that actually kept me entertained and didn't make me drop after a few chapters. welldone
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      Do you have any novel recommendations
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        Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
        by Elbowsnapper
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    1.0
    Forgettable garbage and botted rating.
    Don't waste your time.
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