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Naruto: The Wind Calamity by Devil_Hex

The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the... Read more
The MC transmigrates into Narutoverse in the body of a civilian orphan. Luckily for him, the transmigration results in chakra being unlocked. Follow the story of the MC as he grows in power and stabilizes himself into the world of ninjas and trains to be the strongest.

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Warning:

1. The MC won't be op for a long time. All his power would be gained via hard work and training over years (so if u want an op mc right from the word go, this one ain't for you)

2. No harem (probably no romance either)

3. There will be a lot of killing (maybe gore too, not sure if I can do gore right though)

4. The story will start slow. Quite a few of initial chapters will be around training, orphanage and academy life, instead of directly becoming a Genin.

5. MC is a careful person, he won't put his life at risk unless there is no other choice.

6. I haven't read (nor will be reading) Baruto. So Baruto plotline won't be considered much in here.

What to expect:

1. Smart and consistent MC

2. Lots of training

3. MC manipulating the plot to his advantage

4. A lot of original arcs.

5. Plot will mostly stay the same (at least till Shippuden), but I won't repeat any scenes/dialogues that took place in the manga (as I'm assuming you've already read it).

Disclaimer: I don't own Naruto or it's characters (except the original characters I create). The image used in the cover isn't mine and belongs to R. J

P.S. It's my first fanfic, I'm hoping it turns out good. All reviews and constructive criticisms are welcome. Grammar and English should be fine, but I'm not sure how good the dialogues and scenarios will be. Hopefully I'll improve as this fanfic progresses forward. Collapse
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    This novel is probably the novel I've enjoyed reading the most in the last year or two. But with that said, I can't help but notice how over the top the author can be when it comes to making other characters glaze/fawn over MC

    Like, a whole half of a chapter (heck, even on occasion, a whole chapter) would just be a glazing fest for the MC. Now it would be fine if this only happens sometimes. But it happens very often. I can't help but find it corny and cringe sometimes.

    A whole half of a chapter could just be like:
    "Did you see what MC did today?"
    "No"
    "Then let me tell you how cool he is by just basically retelling what happened in the previous two chapters!"

    And then the characters be like:
    "How is that even possible?!"
    "Is he even human?"
    "He sure is demonic!"
    “He is just too talented!”

    [End of chapter]
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      + 132 -
      Basically what happebed for 10 chapters after he fought snake guy in the chunin exams
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        + 52 -
        That's what made me comment this 😅
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      + 61 -
      I have to agree oru2x
      There's too much of these "shock" dialogues in recent chapters.
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    + 40 -
    if someone wants to read ahead- https://kemono.su/patreon/ user/83817280 (no space)
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      Mtk
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      You're more than a bro, you're a father
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      Mtk
      + 10 -
      Kemono stopped updating?
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        + 10 -
        the updates are inconsistent, it uploads like in like every month or two till the latest chapter.
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          Mtk
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          Sure? So sad, I really like this novel.
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          Mtk
          + 20 -
          It has been updated
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    + 10 -
    #panic# 652 is missing
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    Hello, everyone! Does anyone know how many chapters author is planning to write in total? Or, perhaps, by the flow of the story, can you give a rough estimate on how many chaps there will be? This novel is a gem and I have read it till the +-2 years ago ongoing, so I'm really tempted to read what's available, but I don't want to abandon this novel again to wait for chaps stacking up again.
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      I think more than 1000 maybe even 1500 ...
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        + 11 -
        Every novel nowdays is big, well want
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      + 11 -
      Imo 1300~1600 is a safe bet, if author follows canon route and ends with the moon arc (I assume author will adapt that much) plus a couple of his original plotlines.
      I don't think it will end before 1300s unless shippuden storyline is drastically changed, or author gets burned out.
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    + 20 -
    There are some hints through the story that the mc is arrogant by nature.
    Does he get any major ass whooping due to arrogance?Just curious.
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      + 30 -
      I don't think so... he either wins in the end, or is indifferent to the result.
      He has never really lost so far
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      in a way yes though the opponent suffered more so he goes back to training and comes back
      stronger with a little aloofness added to the arrogance though according to me it is mostly a front
      to taunt enemies and lower their guards even if for a second for those who are at or around his
      level and the rest of the arrogance is something possed by nearly all S rank ninjas
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    Can u guys tell me what unique about ths MC?
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      1.Smart
      2.Hardworking
      3. Knows when to engage in a fight and when to not
      4. Not op from the start
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      + 23 -
      robotic ig
      that's the "unique" thing imo
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    + 10 -
    Я начал читать этот фанфик, не ожидая от него ничего особенного, потому что в названии присутствуют стихия ветра. А она мне всегда очень нравилась.
    Но неожиданно мне фанфик очень зашёл. У гг нет систем, особенных плюшек с нарочитой гениальностью. Всё постигается упорным трудом и усердием. Всё увеличение происходит постепенно, а не прыжками в несколько глав, с помощью рояля в кустах.
    Лично для меня это минус огромный, но ближе к концу (а я прочитал все 599 глав), автор слишком увлекается рассказами, как и что в данный момент тренирует ГГ(техники, печать и т.д). Приведу простой пример. Кто-нибудь помнит в ранобэ "реинкарнацию безработного", как ГГ в начале нюхает и поклоняется трусам? В середине книги автор написал «гениальную» арку из огромных 10 глав, только с подобным контентом. Так вот здесь автор сделал противоположное и прописывает на протяжении 80 глав, как ГГ тренируется, почти не выходя из дома! Потом даёт ГГ глав 10, чтобы он что-нибудь выполнил(миссию допустим) и начинает тренироваться по-новой. Из-за чего сюжет буксует и не двигается совсем уже 200! Я не знаю, что будет дальше, но меня это уже очень напрягает.
    Из-за подобного моя оценка 3.5/5
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      Мне сами тренировки нравятся намного больше, чем миссии, если честно. Автор проделывает хорошую работу, чтобы создать привлекательную, глубокую и интересную систему техник. Процесс становления сильнее и глубинного анализа различных навыков - именно то, что меня и привлекло в этом фанфике, в купе с медленным, но уверенным ростом
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    This is very good for a fanfic, till now by far the best naruto one (the others were trash tbh that ive read, even outsiders resolve i put there it was just way to boring in the beginning (which is kinda funny considering the author and that i like novels with alot alot of struggle alot yet he somehow managed to make it very boring for me regardless))
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    Recommended -
    Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
    by Elbowsnapper
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      Your review(honest) on it? and can you share the link?
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        Just google it...
        It has 7 chapters (I'm currently at 5)
        (by average standards it should be about ~50 chapters)

        - It has system
        - Regarding the plot, it's interesting and I've never expected such a starting point for MC, and the developments look good so far.
        - Regarding the writing, the first 2 chapters were absolute dogshit. The dialogues were very bad, they were awkward, weird and just lame. Author was trying so hard to make MC look "cool" or some "smartass" but failed epically. The jokes sucked. Chapter 3 showed improvements and 4 was okay.
        - Regarding MC, he's arrogant, prideful but a beta in a sense... a "lame deadpool" as called by another reader


        Edit: I just saw your newest comment, so you must have already read it oru2x
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    Best Naruto fanfic till now satisfied ...(other one is tenseigan... something)
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      Medium Meld: Revised Edition (Naruto/Gamer, OC)
      by Elbowsnapper
      its on rr, this thing is goated
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        Thankyou for the recommendation...I shall try reader
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        + 130 -
        Dude recommending a dropped novel with 7 chapter evil
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          gloom Sad...
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          + 11 -
          it's dropped ? fk I'm halfway through troll25
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            + 10 -
            Its been months since last chapter
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              Yea author concluded it as "part 1" of his novel, and said "part 2 will come"; But there's no indication of him continuing it, I looked at his social media, patreon, his website.... he's working on other novels, nothing on this one
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      I wouldn't say it is the best, but it's a great fic with very reasonable progression( not OP after 20 chapters)

      Naruto: The outsiders resolve

      It's by the author who wrote HO: A magical journey. Author learnt from their previous work and improved the progression aspect of their work and dialogues as well.
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        I shall try this too welldone
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