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My System Allows Me to Copy Talents by Bloom07

A genius footballer from a young age, he loses all his footballing talent after a horrendous... Read more
A genius footballer from a young age, he loses all his footballing talent after a horrendous injury.

But despite that he perseveres through the odds and overcomes his tragedy. Finally when he could make his dream come true after getting scouted by a professional team, he faces yet another trouble.

Having lost his final hope of making alive, Takahashi Hiro takes his life by committing suicide.

But to his surprise, instead of dying he wakes up in his younger body. Having returned back to time, he again dreams of being the greatest footballer.
This time with the help of the system which allows him to copy talent of any footballer, will he make it as a pro? Will he be the G.O.A.T?

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Notes: Characters in this story are fictional, The story might progress slowly, A huge emphasis has been paid to emotion of the characters, The story will not focus solely on football and system and it will focus equally on the lifestyle of the protagonist and the people closer to him. Collapse
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    It's an English novel but the protagonist's name is japanese?
    Football isn't even related to anime weeb shit.
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    one of the best sports novel!
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    4/5 I feel this novel is better than The greatest of all Time. The biggest difference is that the system is not that present in this novel and its to its benefit. The story pacing is better and it is more lighthearted and i found that it fits better for this kind of story. I compare it with the anime Major.
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      Nah what are you talking about. GOAT novel is miles above this novel bro. Like, there's a chapter when he says that a kid (forgot how old he is) keeper was on par on professional 💀 that shit just crazy.
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        The age thing is sometimes a bit far fetched but the romance and other relationships in goat is just bad. The mc is also less relatable. Too many point i was thinking "Why?" The biggest reason i say i like this novel more is the story pacing and tone.
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          I agree romance in goat is bad. But that's not the focus of the novel. It's the football. Aside the romance, it's an amazing novel.

          Btw has this novel improve in terms of quality tho? Like when I see the sentence about a kid was on with professional, I dropped immediately.
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            I can see why our opinion differ. For me i like the weak to strong with game elements and personal interactions while the football aspect is less relevant for me. Like tactics etc.
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          GOAT's MC not being relatable is something I agree with. He just felt a bit inhuman after a while.
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    • 2.5
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    The story just feels a bit jarring, the settings in Japan but it kind of fails to make believable enough, just characters with Japanese names, using honorifics aren't even consistent. Breaking the flow of the story just to give bits of explanation on their culture is annoying when it isn't even needed.



    The whole childhood arc could had been timeskip, author sucks at writing elementary kids. MC being an adult only seem relevant during his inner monologues otherwise he acts like a kid too most of the time.
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    #panic# update please gloom
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    This and GOAT novels are two of the top sports novels I've read since I started reading web novels. ❤️❤️❤️❤️
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      Really should read Player Manager. It's on a completely different level to those two.
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      The Hitting Zone is far better than both, while these 2 novels aren't bad their MCs seriously aren't portrayed very well.
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    Great Sports Novel Its already next to GOAT novel.

    these two are great!
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    #panic# update pls
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    #panic# it's not updating
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      Thanks! peepo045
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        Again not updating #panic#
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    Messi
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