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    Nice, not so nice but nice
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    Hey what a crappy ending, well at least it has a clear conclusion. MC is invisible but all the relationships and other secrets and stuff are abandoned never to be explored more, truly a pity.
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    I never really understood who Dao is. Who is Dao? And who is Jiang Xun? And what happened to Mu Lingluo?
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    Not sure how I feel about this. I agree with the others in that the ending felt a bit abrupt. Can't put my finger on it right now, so I'm going to take some time to think about it.

    My initial reaction though is I think disappointment?

    Granted, I've read through this twice (ish. Stopped at 766 when that was the last chapter available, and have just re-read it from the start. Before I started my second read through, I'd forgotten a good chunk of the story, but it came back as I read more).

    However, before my second read through, I had the feeling that this would be a novel that I'd come back to a lot in the future. Novels I really like tend to make me want to read them again, even after I've just finished them, which tells me that some part of me wants to remain immersed in the world.

    Something about the ending, that I can't quite put my finger on, has severely dampened this desire for me. Not sure why.

    As I said, I'll give it some more though, but these are my initial thoughts after just finishing it.
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    Ah quite a bad novel at least compared to TTP. Lack of planning made it feel like a train wreck similar to naruto shippuden. 5/10
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    Anyone else feel like this ended prematurely ?
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      Most of them feel like this atleast this one had a proper ending
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    Well it feels like it ended early lol
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