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Naruto: Systematic Shinobi by 0_Jordinio_0

Waking up in the body of a standard Genin, a village invasion on the horizon and a count down until... Read more
Waking up in the body of a standard Genin, a village invasion on the horizon and a count down until to a full out apocalypse only a few years away, what's a lad to do?

There was only one thing he could do, cheat.

Thankfully, this game system that instigated all of this in the first place, was quite helpful in that regard. Gamer Insert. Collapse
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    I'm crine why do I read more naruto fanfics than the original story
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    Finaly!
    It's alive again)
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    It's a masterpiece actually.
    It has Good story, action, no bullshit cheats but pure grinding and intelligence, it also has good bromance (basically brotherhood, no gay), and author also is capable of writing good romance here and there.

    Sadly oh sadly, what kills it is overly horny mc and author, by it mean is his mindset as you can't really say mc f#cked too many girls till I read i.e till chapter 205

    Bro if you want to write a only R18 Naruto fanfiction write in a different novel. I would also read it but why put it here and ruin the good story?

    If author just add a good few badass wives (harem) for mc it would have been pure masterpiece (atleast close to!)

    sigh the way author writing is like he will make mc f#ck every girls in the Naruto world... It's not necessary! Just write a seperate novel for that! 🙄

    Anyway other than that at the beginning of the novel, mc used to cuss a lot which was annoying but it got fixed after few chapters but mc still curse here and there whoknows

    And lastly the release chapters are tooo slow. I love authors way of writing slowly and there are character/relationship development and all that but since you can't release too many chapters together (I get it he has troubles and also he writes too many books) . Author should simply write in a way that he can move story quicker!
    Oh god it's been over a 100 chapters and still the Chunin exam never ends! sigh
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    If you're looking for some overpowered mc(grinding) in naruto with erotic experience then it can be considered a good one as it specifically targets r18 content in naruto.
    But there still are loop holes.
    Good Read!! joy
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    The story is 9/10 but a naruto lover it just throws my mind for a spin with the smut in this novel. Like obviously the author has done his research and the characters are exactly like in the anime but as soon as the smut content starts the conversations, their mannerisms just go off the rails and the beautiful emersion is broken crybaby
    The story is awesome 👌 just can't deal with the bad flirting especially since it does not match the culture or vibe of the amine society. bow plz try a little euphemism or honest innocent love in ur other works
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    Junk food that goes bad after 100
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    First time that I will not read a novel because of how it has been written (I even read mtl). It is so bad... This is an example
    Every sentece there is at least 1 cuss word. And this is till the second chapter... If anyone had managed to read more, please let me know if author stops this kind of writing.
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      Wait that's it?? I was expecting...
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      It would've been fine if its only character dialogues but even the narration are full of cuss lmao
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    Honestly for male power fantasy this is pretty good. Total Gary Stu uses his knowledge of Naruto and grinding mind set to get strong quick. Along the way he impresses bitches and clowns on dudes.
    It sounds stupid, and it is, but it tells a coherent story that moves along briskly and is pretty consistently entertaining. So long as you know what you're in for there's a lot to enjoy here.
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    Okay. I recently read this on webnovel and i got to say, its at least a 6.5-7/10 the writing quality although not that good is enjoyable the mc is obsessed with the grind and will sometimes behave and speak like a gym rat, also he is fairly horny and there will be r18 scenes. The story is actually quite good and the progression is smooth, the powers that he gets are actually interesting but i think its obvious that its not anything special its just a fairly good fanfic to pass the time dont expect the same quality as daichi:the gamer ninja or yami the gamer kage
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    This is here? Lmao

    This is a quest, which means that the author writes and offers decisions that the audience chooses, which shape the plot and characters of the story. Hosted on fiction live if you like quests I think it’s better to participate instead of just reading what is there.

    Actual review is that it’s standard fare for the author. MC obsessed with the grind, getting stronger, and getting b#tches. I think the author would self-identify his protagonists as “sigma-grindset-chads” shamelessly. So it’s overall pretty simple. If that sounds good, you’ll enjoy it.

    He also posts his stories on qq (which has tons of R18 fan fictions and some surprisingly good ones if you like that genre)
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