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Transmigrated into One Piece world with a Gift Pack by FanficMortal

An ordinary soul from Earth mysteriously transmigrates into One Piece World. What's more, he was... Read more
An ordinary soul from Earth mysteriously transmigrates into One Piece World. What's more, he was presented with a Gift Pack from God.

Follow his journey, from being a slave to an extraordinary existence that everyone fears. Collapse
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    The author is so bad, fcker op worshippers spamming the novel rating. Sucker
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    I wish his personality was like Escanor. A 3/10 fanfic. I didnt like it very much. I wish it was connected to a different world instead of the HxH world. HxH is an unfinished universe. It's bad to set an ant as your main target.
    If his personality were arrogant and proud like Escanor, I would definitely say read it, but its okay if you dont.
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    It was a cool fanfic, as far as my enjoyment is concerned, i would give it 4 out of 5 stars. The mc is op, but i enjoy reading those kind of novels so that's right up my alley. No harem, which i like a lot, just one romantic interest.
    I had a fun time, would recommend, just don't expect too much, it's just a fanfic, turn your brain off and enjoy.
    Praise the sun Yolks52
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    Me: *looking at the title* Hmmm looks interesting 🤔

    *Checking how much chapter is available and saw title "Madara vs Marines" *

    Me: wtf is happened in that world?? In just 200+ chapter Madara is 'summoned' and fighting Marines 😂
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    It is mediocre. Everything is quite casual and it reads like it is a translation in a few sentences every chapter or so. The grammar is okey with the worst I’ve seen is some missing words (like to, for, the, etc...) and punctuations every couple of paragraphs. I’m 80% sure this is a translation though it is a bit hard to tell as the translation is somewhat decent.

    Back on to the review, all I can say is it is mediocre and it falls off a bit at chapter 100 or so and the first world hop is when it really drops. I had some hope for this being decent but with the writers name and it being from webnovel I’m not that let down.

    6/10
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    Trash
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    Escanor in one piece basically
    Multiverses travel seems to be a thing later on too as by the latest chap (195) he’s already been to hxh and back.
    This is a very simple and straight forward power fantasy. There are no plot twists, nothing unexpected, it’s a straight highway just like others have said.
    If you don’t mind that then it’s a good read with no grammatical errors… at least that I noticed. But don’t go in expecting a diamond in the rough.
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    Wtf, it's so boring currently at chapter 28.
    I'll read till chapter 50, if it's still boring at that point, I'll just stop.
    Edit: dropped at chapter 42.
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    Meh~
    This is how the story felt like.
    Think of a straight highway, that's how this story is. A simple story where there are no turn of events and everything goes in a way to facilitate MC. Even if he makes a stupid decision author will cover it up saying it was a system task.
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      I agree with this guy. Overall a pretty bland guy does the thing so numbers go up set in One Piece novel. I feel the knowledge of One Piece required to enjoy the novel is relatively high as obscure characters and terms abound. Some is explained but the author generally assumes you know at least something about the setting, terms, and locations of One pIece. On the upside its written in English and comprehensible.
      Not the worst, but hard to give a strong recommendation for. A good time water for people who prefer their timewaster novels to not be MTL/poorly translated.
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        Any good fanfic recommendations?
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          I enjoyed Seras' Ghost in the City (ongoing), or Pokemon Trainer Vicky (canceled). Hard Enough by Viva01 is pretty good too. I'm not sure if 'Player Manager' by Ted Steel counts as fanfiction, but it has its charms for sure. I also enjoyed 'Hear the Silence' by EmptySurface over on Ao3.
          That covers a pretty wide gamut imo. Hopefully you find something you like in there,
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            Alright ty for recommendations
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            Ghost in the City is a pretty good one. I’m not really sure if things based of Tabletop RPG’s should be considered Fan-Fic but with the 2077 being out and a few video game characters being somewhat regular in the fic I can see why it would be labelled as such.
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    Haah~~
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