Chapter 6: Cold Homecoming

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    Things are of course about to go wrong
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    His sister had been born in this village. And she had died here.

    that's so sad man... crybaby
    one of the few times i would be fine with little sister trope, the author is too cruel, he killed it before it began
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    Welp, I feel like there foreshadowing, so...
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    Saying that while frowning doesn't feel like everything is going to be alright.
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    Don’t kill the dad!! we already have enough of that kind of plot to be honest.
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    I wish for to be a time skip of 6 years where he's 18 and can make rational decisions
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    butwhy noooo freak the good dads always die what pls don't author!!
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      “Nothing, Arthur. Nothing’s wrong. For once… I feel things are about to go right.”

      It doesn't help that he added his own death flag. sigh
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        boast it's ok the author didn't kill him
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          At least put a spoiler tag man
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            My bad i apologize hokage
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    Maybe it's his father's card?
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    Good dad. I was expecting the cliche "plot twist haha the father is a butt and is going to take the special thing and the child will have to run away and somehow manage on his own" but no, the dude's a good guy, the child's got a good dad, good stuff, wholesome stuff, no cliche plot twist, good start. Looking forward to see where this is going.

    Also, kind of looking forward to see if the dragon is just the deus ex machina plot device or if its actually plot relevant after the first 10 chapters
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      Spitting facts 🗣🗣
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