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Chapter 141: Opinion about the first half of this volume.
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There's still about ten chapters before the end of Lilith volumes and it will be there you guys will finally get revelation about her past and etc.

Anyway, the first half of this volume was full of fights and it's the first time in my two years career as a part time writer that I wrote so many fights.

I couldn't even show them all. For example The witches fight or Setsuna vs Neun.

But no matter. I would really like to have your opinions on those fights.

The Vol 4 was mainly about politics and this was was mainly about fight.

Vol 4 and 5 lacked smut but no worries. From Vol 6 onwards the regular smut will come back.

Anyway. I need opinions.

1)How were the fights themselves?

2)Where you able to correctly visualize them?

3)Did they make your blood pump?

4) What do you think of the power levels of Sol's women. After all I have been bragging about their power until now.

5)What did you think of the WoF. I kind of based it on the Espada. But pretty sure everyone already guessed that.

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    ShiroYasha
    + 8 ⋅ 1 -
    Painfully slow pacing. And while side characters plot and get stronger behind the scenes, MC only f#cks his women and gives empty promises. It's been 140 chapters and he still didn't have his awakening ceremony.
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    abhinavk
    + 10 ⋅ 4 -
    very slow plot progress
    meaningless battles and stretching it with no progress and no victory for protagonist
    Protagonist got thrashed like a bug in this arc and antagonists got major boost while mc and his faction**sighs** don't even ask
    Honestly this arc was extremely frustrating
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    schloan
    + 21 ⋅ 1 -
    honestly extremely underwhelming.
    we read about all the prep and what-not and for what, mostly meaningless battles here and there with no real progress made for the protagonist or his faction. the antagonists meanwhile got a boost so major i wonder if you haven't shot yourself in the foot.
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    nit_kash
    + 14 ⋅ 0 -
    Author san, you are doing a good job with the novel. Varied and interesting characters but too much focus on other people is ruining the effect. I understand the importance of world and background building but in my opinion it defeats the purpose if it creates disruption and disconnect with MC and because it's his story. I see growing trend among authors investing too much time on making compelling side characters that you start ignoring MC. Sol has no growth in this arc and remaining chapters will focus on Lillith.
    My humble suggestion would be to shorten the build up, shorten the backstories, let MC grow and do his thing and stop pandering to feminism all the time that MCs women doesn't need his saving. Let MC save himself first.
    Till date you have created a plethora of suspense cliffhangers and potential plots but hardly any progression of the story.
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    Legendary Gear5
    + 8 ⋅ 0 -
    My only problem with this novel is its unbearable slow speed i didnt read this for 4 months and I come back and the only thing that’s happened is sol getting slightly stronger but still less than an ant. And a bunch of political stuff and dead nobles
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