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Chapter 1514: Burning Rust

The dome of the Serpent King's palace entirely collapsed, falling under its own weight in a colossal cloud of dust. Two enormous, dark figures rose from the cloud, vaguely visible as they tangled together in a furious struggle.

…Down on the streets of the city , Nephis was making her way to the crumbling palace. She was fighting against the human flood, the radiance of her skin shining brightly in the dim twilight of the early dawn. Her incandescent sword had turned into a blur, followed by a trail of crimson haze. She had long lost count of how many enemies she cut down, how many bodies she sundered, and how much time had passed since the start of this nightmarish battle. No matter how many vessels of the Soul Stealer she destroyed, their number never decreased. Instead, it only grew. More and more of them flooded from all sides, rushing to pierce her flesh with their swords, their spears, their arrows, their nails and teeth. Their power had grown, as well. There were more Awakened warriors surrounding her now, and more Ascended. Their powers were like a constant hail that relentlessly assaulted her, lethal and unpredictable, growing more perilous with each step she took.

But something else grew with it, as well. Her will. Slowly but surely… Nephis was shaking off the burden of doubt that had covered her heart like rust, at some point. Little by little, its weight had added up, until she became pressed into the ground by it without even noticing.

Here, in the throes of this macabre slaughter, there was no place for doubt. There was only combat. Steps, lunges, and feints. The movements of her sword, the movements of her body. The measured ruthlessness of her mind, the cold lethality of her skill. The empty eyes of her enemies, the perilous sheen of their weapons, and the inevitable moments of their deaths. This was clarity. This was the stark world where only pain and will existed. She was always tormented by harrowing pain. Pain burned everything away, leaving only will. And Neph's will…

Was to kill them all. …Her blood was in that river, as well. Nephis moved with dreadful speed and chilling precision, rending the flesh of her enemies like a radiant, flawless, fatal machine. Lifeless corpses fell to her feet — men and women, young and old. All severed and mutilated, their bodies gaping with horrible wounds. She cut through countless humans, erasing them from existence with her sword. Their bodies came undone under its blade, forming a gruesome path. A river of blood flowed where she had passed, paving the way.

…Her blood was in that river, as well. Nephis moved with dreadful speed and chilling precision, rending the flesh of her enemies like a radiant, flawless, fatal machine. Lifeless corpses fell to her feet — men and women, young and old. All severed and mutilated, their bodies gaping with horrible wounds. But she wasn't unscathed, either. Just then, an Awakened warrior used a strange Aspect Ability and bypassed the steel wall of her defense. His cleaver landed on her shoulder, biting into the chainmail. Her armor held, and her bones held, as well. But the impact slowed her down, allowing an Ascended champion to ram a spear into her back. The chainmail broke. The white tunic beneath it was pierced. The spearhead plunged into her flesh. Snarling, Nephis sent the Awakened flying with a kick and twisted, her sword cutting through the shaft of the spear and the Ascended's head. The bloodied spearhead dissolved into a rain of sparks, and the radiance suffusing Neph's skin dimmed a little. Instead of blood, white flame flowed from the wound on her back, mending the torn muscles and broken skin. A moment later, the wound was gone. Only the pain remained. Nephis gritted her teeth, the same flame burning in her eyes. 'Come, all of you!'

She plunged into the frenzied mob, calling upon the fires of her soul. Soon, a hurricane of incinerating flames spread through the human river, devouring all who could not resist it. Those who could were cut down by the spirit of light dancing in the midst of the blinding inferno, her sword merciless and unrestrained. The distant palace drew nearer. Nephis had unleashed the flames to burn her enemies, but she couldn't maintain the blaze around herself constantly. Her reserves of essence, no matter how deep, would run out too fast that way. In the end, she released the control of the flame, leaving a burning street in her wake.

The hungry fire spread, devouring the broken buildings.

The endless, relentless assault of the hollow-eyed vessels continued, unchanged.

More and more enemies broke through her defenses, leaving terrible marks on her body. Her bones were broken. Her flesh was cut. Her armor became shattered and torn, full of holes… until it crumbled completely, disappearing into a whirlwind of sparks and leaving only a tattered tunic to cover her radiant body. A sharp sword slithered its way to her chest, piercing her heart. Nephis swayed slightly and stared at the man who was holding the sword, a white inferno burning in her eyes.

Then, she reached with her hand and grabbed his throat, crushing it in an incinerating grasp.

The sword slid out of her chest, followed by a gust of flame. At the same time, a battle axe landed on her shoulder, cutting deep, and a beak of a war hammer struck her head. But no blood poured out of the fatal wounds. Only fire. Nephis moved, severing the bodies of everyone around her. She did not fall, did not stagger. She did not even slow down.

If anything, it seemed as though she had become even faster, even brighter, even deadlier. Washed by the white flame, the harrowing wounds disappeared in the beautiful radiance.

Nephis was not going to die yet.

No… perhaps, she was only getting started… Losing all restraint and not caring about the pain and the damage dealt to her body anymore, she lunged at her enemies, forcing them to reel back. "I…"

Her sword tore through their bodies, leaving only death and scattering ash in its wake. "Will show you…"

Terrible blows rained on her body, but all the gruesome damage they dealt was washed away by the white radiance. "The horror…"

All around her, the streets of Twilight were being devoured by the spreading blaze. "Of the Immortal Flame."

Nephis was like an undying, insatiable monster of flame that had taken the form of a slender young woman. Now that she had discarded her doubt and her fear, the true horror of her Aspect was finally unleashed. No matter how her enemies cut and pierced her radiant body, nothing seemed capable of bringing her down. Her own sword, however, was like an incandescent omen of destruction and ruin, inevitable and inescapable, cutting down everything that stood in its way.

Countless lives were melting in front of her merciless blade.

Her mind was like a white void. Pain had become will. Will had become flame. Doubt had become ash. Nephis cut a road of blood and scorched bodies through the human flood, refusing to go down. Why would she? These swords, these spears, these arrows, these nails and teeth… she would withstand them all. Using her Dormant Ability did not diminish her essence, and so, she would continue to kill, and maim, and burn until Soul Stealer came in person to put a stop to her.

As long as there was fire, she would light herself on fire. She would endure its harrowing blessing. She would persist. For now.

Of course, even the undying were not invulnerable. No one was. Nephis was going to make a fatal mistake, eventually. Fatigue and mental strain would accumulate, draining her strength away. Then, she would be caught and pinned down, or obliterated entirely. But until that happened…

She would continue to burn.

Burn brightly in the dim twilight of the endless dawn.  

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    1521: Sharpest Arrow.

    In the courtyard of the drowning fortress, a harrowing dragon growled and took a step back, its massive body shuddering. His silver eyes had lost their sinister light, turning glossy and unfocused.

    A vicious battle must have been taking place in the dragon's corrupted soul.

    The maddening whispers thundering in Kai's head finally grew silent. He swayed, then took a labored breath and limped toward Sunny.

    His friend was laying on the cold stones, barely alive. His body was a terrible painting of torn flesh, white bones visible through its mangled mess. Eerily, he was still not bleeding at all... usually, Kai would have been reassured by that fact, but right now, it looked like Sunny was already a cold corpse.

    But he wasn't a corpse. Sunny was still moving, struggling to stand up. Even after battling a Defiled Saint tooth and nail, he was still unbroken, trying to continue to fight.

    As Kai approached, he heard his furious whispers:

    «Kill you... I'll kill you... shut up! I'll tear you apart!»

    Strangely enough, his hateful gaze was not directed at the archer. Instead, Sunny was glaring past him, seemingly at an empty spot.

    Kai felt his heart tighten.

    «What is happening to him?»

    Sunny had always had a wild personality, and there was that time he had turned a little feral in the Dark City... but he was never truly mad. Now, however, it seemed as though his friend had entirely lost his mind.

    «There must be a reason.»

    He had warned Kai to stay away before, had he not? That meant that this strange condition Sunny was in had a purpose. To resist the authority of the Dread Lord, most likely... somehow. It had to be a part of some cunning scheme.

    He would deal with it later.

    For now, Kai had a more serious problem to solve.

    The abominable dragon was still alive. And while that man, Mordret, seemed confident in himself, there was no telling who would prevail in their dire fight.

    The result would be clear in seconds.

    But... Kai looked at the dragon with a lost expression.

    The Dread Lord, Mordret... both of them were monsters. He still remembered what the scion of the Great Clan Valor had done in the Second Nightmare. The harrowing massacre he had perpetrated in the Kingdom of Hope was not something a sane person would ever commit.

    Even if he did win, was it really fine to let the dreadful authority of Kai's voice fall into the hands of someone so depraved?

    «...Wait a little more, Sunny. I'll come back for you, soon.»

    Turning away from his friend, Kai gritted his teeth and pushed himself off the ground. Soaring into the air, he strained his core muscles to draw the string of his bow, and at the same time, summoned the sharpest arrow he had in store.

    That one was not capable of producing devastating blasts, or robbing Nightmare Creatures of their strength. Its enchantment was rather simple — it burrowed much deeper than other arrows would, piercing flesh and bone like butter.

    The drawback was that the arrow was flimsy and fragile. It was disobedient and slow, too, so hitting anything with it was a tough task. More than that, its tip would shatter against any kind of armor... therefore, it wasn't easy to make use of the insidious enchantment.

    But now that the abominable dragon was nearly paralyzed by the battle happening within its soul, Kai had a chance. Of course, the battle could end at any moment...

    It could even end right now, leaving him defenseless in front of the terrifying dragon.

    Nevertheless, he brought himself right to the dragon's maw, and looked into the dragon's silver eyes.

    Then, Kai activated his Ascended Ability and uttered a command... He wasn't addressing the Dread Lord, however. He was addressing himself.

    [KILL HIM!]

    Suddenly, a fierce strength filled his broken body, and a cold, frightening will flooded his mind.

    Raising his bow, Kai aimed carefully... and sent an arrow flying straight through the Dread Lord's radiant eye.

    The distance was too short for it to stray off course, and there was no armor in the way to make the tip break.

    The insidious arrow slid into the dragon's eye, pierced through it, and burrowed deep into the creature's brain. It had been shot from a Transcendent bow of the Fifth Tier by the hand of a Master, and so the havoc it wreaked inside the Dread Lord's head was truly gruesome.

    His body had been battered in the battle against Sunny, and his soul had been weakened by the battle against Mordret of Valor.

    The dragon shuddered and let out a terrible groan.

    ...Blasted by that groan, Kai was thrown back and crashed into the pile of stone rubble far below.

    Above him, the Dread Lord convulsed, a fountain of silver blood shooting from his open maw. His head drew an arc in the air...

    And then, the mighty dragon toppled and fell heavily to the ground, his silver eyes growing dim.

    This time, forever.

    Barely conscious, Kai heard the Spell whisper into his ear:

    [You have slain a Corrupted Tyrant, Hideous Ruler of the Empty Sky].

    [You have...]

    Consumed by pain, he didn't hear the rest.

    He did, however, hear a terrible scream.

    Turning his head, Kai saw a human figure rolling on the ground in agony. It was Mordret, the scion of Valor... missing a hand and covered in blood. There was something terribly wrong with that lunatic, though. His face, which had seemed to be incapable of showing earnest emotions, was now twisted by a terrible grimace, an eerie darkness devouring his eyes.

    Letting out a stifled groan, Mordret clutched at the stones and crawled to the nearby puddle. Reaching it, he thrust his hand into the water... no, into his own reflection... and tore something from within his chest, then threw it away.

    The thing looked like a soul shard... no, a piece of a mirror.

    Hitting the ground, the mirror shard suddenly rippled and turned into a vague figure. That figure then turned into a perfect copy of Mordret.

    A Reflection, created by ripping one of his cores out of his soul. There was something terribly wrong with that Reflection, though.

    As Kai watched, stunned, the visage of Mordret was twisted and deformed, tendrils of vile darkness sprouting from within it. The ghastly creature suddenly looked incredibly threatening and sinister, a frenzied smile blooming on its bloodied lips.

    It was as though he was watching a seed of Corruption bloom, turning the human into a Nightmare Creature right in front of his eyes.

    Still on the ground, Mordret whispered a quiet curse.

    «Ah... that... was truly unpleasant.»

    He did not look capable of fighting the Defiled Reflection, though, in that wretched state.

    Kai was laying in the rubble, his body broken and mangled, so he was not much better. Sunny was still wreathing on the ground, trying to stand up, but he was the most corpse-like of them three.

    «I must protect him...»

    Kai tried to move, but a surge of pain sent him crushing back down on the sharp stones. A short yelp escaped from his lips.

    With unwanted tears in his eyes, he looked up and saw the vile Reflection walking toward his friend. Its missing hand had sprouted terrible glass claws, and its jaw was unhinged, twisted fangs growing through the mangled flesh.

    «No!»

    Before the creature could reach Sunny, though...

    A slender rapier pierced its chest, and a radiant hand grasped its head.

    In the next moment, the Reflection was illuminated from inside by a pure white light. Smoke rose from its open mouth and charred holes where its eyes had been just a moment ago, filling the air with the revolting stench of burned flesh.

    Then, a net of cracks covered the creature's body, and it shattered like a glass sculpture.

    Behind it, the figure of Changing Star was revealed, looking down with an emotionless expression.

    Sparks of pure white flame danced in her cold grey eyes, and she somehow seemed both the same and different from the last time Kai had seen her, back in the Nightmare Desert.

    Turning her head slightly, Nephis looked at the corpse of the harrowing dragon and remained motionless for a few moments.

    Then, she said, her voice strangely devoid of feeling:

    «We won.»
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      1522: Break of Dawn.

      Driven to madness by wrath, Sunny was forcing his mangled body to move. His mind was muddled by fury and pain, and no matter how hard he tried, he couldn't stand up, for some reason.

      An inferno of dark, malignant rage was consuming his aching heart.

      «No, no, no!»

      The dragon... the hateful worm... was laying dead on the wet stones, stolen from him. Silver blood was pouring from his opened maw and obliterated eye, slowly spreading across the ruined courtyard. If only there had been more time... if only no one had interfered in their fight... Sunny would have been able to slay the Dread Lord himself. He knew he would.

      But the dragon was gone.

      And now that he was gone, Sunny's suffocating fury needed a new target.

      «Kill, kill them... kill them all... I'll kill them...»

      He could sense several shapes through the shadows. The loathsome fly that had stolen his prey, the crippled fiend who had come from the water, and a macabre abomination that had been spawned by a tainted shard of the fiend's soul.

      And the most odious of them all... a pale young man wearing a nebulous black mantle, who was looking at him mockingly with a derisive smile.

      «Look at you, fool. Mad as a hatter. How pathetic... how familiar... how distasteful...»

      The abomination was staggering toward him, piercing him with the demented gaze of its rotten eyes. Glass claws were growing from its stump, and twisted fangs were growing from its bloodied maw.

      He grinned.

      «Good, good...»

      He couldn't stand up, for the moment, so the creature was graciously delivering itself to him. Sunny was going to enjoy tearing it apart.

      But before he could, a slender rapier pierced the abomination's chest, and a radiant hand grasped its head. The creature glowed with incandescent light, being incinerated from within, and then shattered like a broken mirror.

      He howled, his hoarse voice full of indescribable rage.

      «No, no!»

      Another... they stole another from him! Thieves, traitors! He had to kill them, rip them, savage them, break them!

      As Sunny growled and tried to push his mangled body up, someone approached and halted a mere step away. He looked up and saw a breathtaking young woman looking at him silently from above, her beautiful face devoid of emotion. Her silver hair was moving slightly in the wind, and radiant sparks were dancing in her cold grey eyes.

      «I'll... destroy you...»

      Sunny tried to summon the shadows to rip the young woman's body apart, but his muddled mind failed to contain the intricate patterns of the manifested forms. The vicious shadow hands crumbled and dissolved before taking shape.

      The young woman studied him for a few moments, then kneeled and put a hand on his head, caressing his hair.

      Her touch made Sunny shudder.

      «I have to... kill her...»

      The visage of the smoke streaming from the abomination's burned eyes flashed in his mind and disappeared, drowning in the sea of madness.

      But, somehow... even though Sunny wanted nothing more than to see the young woman die, he hesitated for a moment.

      It was then that she spoke, her voice sounding both strange and familiar.

      «Sunny...»

      He gathered his strength, preparing to lunge at her.

      «Dismiss your crown.»

      He had not thought that a more profound rage existed, but when he heard those words, his entire being ignited with a harrowing fury. The thought of surrendering his crown filled Sunny with a boundless ocean of frenzied wrath, deep and dark enough to be unfathomable.

      That wrath was far more scorching than the rage he had felt toward the odious dragon, and vaster than even the hatred he felt toward the thieves who had stolen his prey.

      However...

      The authority contained in the voice of the young woman was absolute.

      It was nothing like the cold commands of the dragon, which had been oppressive and domineering to the point of being irresistible... but only nearly so.

      There was a boundless abyss between nearly and absolutely.

      Drowning in fury and at the same time filled with horror, Sunny felt his very soul respond to the young woman's order, following it obediently, as if he had no will of his own. He felt broken and violated, which only made his bloodlust and desire to kill explode more.

      Despite that, though, he still could not even attempt to disobey.

      «She... she ordered me.»

      The Crown of Twilight dissolved into a whirlwind of sparks. And with it, Sunny's frenzied wrath disappeared as well. Leaving behind only horror.

      Confusion, too... and pain.

      Finally, the pain he had been ignoring caught up with Sunny, making him shudder and let out a tormented groan.

      He was consumed by agony.

      But then, the hand resting on his head ignited with a soft glow, and its comforting warmth chased the pain away. A wave of cleansing white flame spread through his body, mending his broken flesh and healing his harrowing wounds.

      The sense of relief it brought was overwhelming. Which only added to Sunny's confusion.

      Soon, he was left laying on the ground, disoriented and feeling lost. Everything that had happened since he activated the [King's Resentment] enchantment of the Crown of Twilight was like a blur, but the memory of it remained, etched into his mind.

      «...What happened?»

      Sunny felt incredibly tired, but he forced himself to raise his head.

      Nephis was kneeling in front of him... wearing the Starlight Legion Armor, for some reason. Her striking grey eyes were calm and cold.

      Behind her, the corpse of the Dread Lord towered above the ruined courtyard of the floating fortress. Kai was laying on a pile of rubble, heavily wounded. Mordret was there, as well, staring at the dead dragon with a grim expression.

      The world was dark, with only a few rays of pale sunshine pouring through the veil of ashen clouds.

      There was something else, as well... a black crow was perched on the remnants of the broken wall, staring down at them.

      Sunny looked at Nephis, a storm of emotions raging in his heart. Noticing that he had regained his senses, she nodded simply and rose.

      Turning away, she walked toward where Kai was laying, his ivory armor painted by blood. Soon, soft radiance flowed from her hands, healing the archer.

      At the same time, Mordret sighed deeply and looked at Kai with a hint of resentment.

      «Why did you do it? I almost had him.»

      Kai met his gaze somberly, and then said in a hoarse voice:

      «That was why I did it.»

      The Prince of Nothing remained silent for a moment, then grinned with dark amusement and turned to Nephis. Waving his bloody stump in the air, he asked blithely:

      «Don't I get healed?»

      Her answer was cold and even:

      «...Wait for your turn.»

      Sunny observed it all, too tired to move, and too numb to think.

      Soon, two figures climbed over the pile of rubble that the wall of the fortress had turned to. They were Effie and Jet.

      Effie was walking while supporting her weight with a spear, while Jet was carrying unconscious Cassie. When she appeared, both Crow Crow and the Quiet Dancer rushed to her side.

      The wind tore apart the veil of clouds, and finally, the light of dawn illuminated the drowning fortress once again.

      Sunny looked at the sky pensively.

      A strange thought surfaced in his mind.

      «We... won.»
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        Thx you Pro100zver25
        MMMMMMMMMMMMMM [Fated] start to work now huh, I see I see. So let's think about it: Sunny suffered most brutal fight ever and would have won if it was 1v1 but because of Kai he lost, then he didn't even get any reward for it. I understand the situation but Nephis made me lost all hope in her(Sin of Solace was right you can't have relletionship or be friends with a person that can litteraly tell you to do anything and you can't refuse). And I still think that Sunny probably going to die, or be seppareted from cohort in some section of dream realm after Nightmare is over(but that's just my thoughts, if you disagree can't blame you)
        Edit: I forgot to say Sin of Solace speak fax, in this arc Sunny is pathetic and it hurts to know.
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          I agree!!! This is literally "Stolen Victory"
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            And the funny thing is that Sunny works harder than any of them in this arc, he's lived through an unknown number of time loops, and he legitimate suffer the most in the third Nightmare, and he still loses. That's just sad forwhat
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          middle I think you missed the some point
          1st there was no telling if sunny would win or not and if he did have won but at what cost he could lose more than win as he is not rational
          2nd nepis didn't give a heavy comend but a normal order( that we all give in normal conversation like hey pass me the pizza ) sigh but because of the shadow bond it become a command
          boast And see things as positive site who knows it whold be a good thing as it finished like this
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            Yeah you right. But I still think it's unfair that Kai got memmory or even echo for this. As for the situation with Nephis I think I over react on this one, but I just think this command thing is going to happen more often in future(but it could be just my imagination). And I know you didn't say anything about it but I still say it again Sunny in third Nightmare doesn't feel like Sunny(He feels like a guy that went through unknown number of time loops and just tired of this shit, and also was affected by beign mad. Who whould have thought). So I just wrote my first comment to cry about how [Fated] start to bully Sunny again. 23 gloom
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              This whole ark is proof that nobody can force Sunny to do something he doesn't want to do, shadow bond may make him a slave to someone, but unless that person orders Sunny to kill himself, Sunny will find a way to screw his master.
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                Good Point!
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                You right about that, The mad prince was a slave to dread lord but he still wreaked havoc and played everyone to setup for lost from light to win
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              Brother when wasn't that [FATED] attribute didn't bully him it did all the time from the beginning of the day one and continuously go on but that what's make Sunny a Sunny fighting his own Fate and successer of Weaver man he will be master of fate in future
              And I like that Kai got the memory or Eco it will impower him more and make him prepare for the last battle well as you he was frozen in time and didn't gain anything as Effi and Zet and don't worry about sunny not getting any thing he can get in future the nightmare didn't finish man and I can't wait to them become Saint and go to walking world kef
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            Honestly, tell me, if she hadn't been in command, would he have gone crazy forever? Maybe that's why the crazy prince was like that because he didn't have Nephis to help him, and if you stop to think about it The Lord of Dread preferred him to be crazy, otherwise he would have ordered him to take off tails and most likely, when Kai t He took the shadow bond he made so Modric wouldn't take it,And let's face it, it's clear that at some point Sunny and Nephis will become more aware of how they feel about each other. And I'm sure he won't tell her and the command "say what you feel" or something like that will To help
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        Love u bro
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        Dang so only the Mad Prince and Cassie's corrupt version left.
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          Mad Prince dead
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            There were 6 plagues,
            Now there is only one Plague.
            Torment in Verge. The Citadel of Truth.
            Or a more suitable name Verge, the throne of the Defilement.
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    This is pretty good so far. The writing style is pretty great. Mind telling me where I can find the rest?



    I haven't released them yet. I'm stacking chapters up. At this point, I just wanted to know if there was interest.
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      Hope you got your answer
      Now....


      MOREEEEEE
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        I really appreciate that. When I get to 50 chapters, I'll start publishing them online. Everyone who read the first chapter, thank you. I'll take it down soon, but I really appreciate the feedback.
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      How long have you been a writer?
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        I had a story on Webnovel called Ember's Crown back in 2020 It was okay, and I still believe in the story and want to rewrite it, but I didn't think my writing was up to par so I spent time working on the actual craft of writing by reading a lot more and now I'm nearly ready to get back into it.

        As for this work, it's called Captured Sky. The main webnovel inspirations are Reverend Insanity and Shadow Slave.
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          It really shows in your writing that you have spent a long time working at it
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          How good is
          Reverend Insanity


          Out of 10?
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            9/10. I think the story is great, the plot and characters are wonderful. The story writing is even more better (I love how the author inserts moral stories so perfectly). The reason it's not 10/10 for me is because in the end, it's just another cultivation level. It sometimes gets boring and repetitive, but definitely worth reading for the thrill and excitement. It's the kind of novel that have multiple climaxes and will surely satisfy you(r sadistic side).
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              not really moral stories, lol. more like life lessons.
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            8,9 or 10 depending on who you ask. If you're asking me, nothing is a 10, but it's a solid 9.9.
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      Which is the name of the novel?. Where do you will publish it?
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        Captured Sky. And I'm building a website to publish it, but I'm also going to use Royal Road and Web Novel.
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          I think it is a very good novel. I liked the little touch of suspense.
          When you publish it, send me a link to read it.
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      Where are the starting chapters?, I
      wanna read
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      What you guys talking about, if you don’t mind me asking?
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    When and if, oh hero who puts the next chapters in the comments, posts the comment containing the chapters, let me know please, like this comment or reply
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      Alabado sea el prozzover
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      1519 and 1520 are in 1512 comments
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