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Chapter 7: First Day

I made my way to the training field just as the sky burned orange with the rising sun. The city guard trainees had already begun to gather, some standing in loose groups, others warming up. Among them stood Sergeant Cole, inspecting them like a hawk. He spotted me and barked.

“Kid! You here for training?”

“Yes, sir,” I replied, trying to keep my voice steady.

He frowned. “That’s not how you greet your superior.”

Then he marched up, back straight like a steel rod, and demonstrated.

“Keep your back straight. Raise your right hand sharply, fingers extended and joined, palm facing down. Tip of your index finger should touch the rim of your visor, or your eyebrow, if you don’t have one, slightly to the right of your eyes. Like this.” He performed a crisp, razor-sharp salute. “UNDERSTAND?”

“YES SIR!” I replied, imitating his gesture as best I could.

“Better. Again!”

“YES SIR!” I repeated, saluting again, this time a little sharper.

“Good. At ease.” He stepped back and nodded. “Maintain your salute until a senior officer returns it or says ‘at ease.’”

“Yes, sir.”

He studied me for a moment. “You look a little nervous.”

I hesitated. “Yes, sir. My stats aren’t very impressive. And… Ben told me about the recruits and the frontlines.”

“Hmph.” He folded his arms. “Don’t compare yourself with them. They’re militia at best. You? You’re being trained as a proper soldier in a battalion. With some luck, and if you’re smart, you’ll survive.”

He paused, glancing toward the eastern wall. “I started like you. Pulled off the streets, no backing, no talent. But with discipline, I reached low Tier 3. I retire next year. After that, I could walk into any decent town and become their guard captain.”

I stared at him. I hadn’t expected a personal story from Cole.

“As for casualties,” he added, his voice colder now, “your condition yesterday told me you already know what happens to the weak and careless, even in town.”

I swallowed hard. He was right. The bruises on my ribs still ached. Fear of the streets was a big part of why I joined the army. Not for glory. Not for patriotism.

For survival.

“Yes, sir.”

“This town’s training isn’t army standard, but it’s a good starting point.”

He began listing the program.

“Physical Conditioning: You’ll be drilled in endurance, strength, dexterity, and basic fighting. That means running, lifting, balancing, and sparring, until you drop.”

“In Stonegate, you’ll learn real military standards.

Weapon Proficiency: Spear first. Then short sword. Formation, combat, and stances.

Archery: After you pass the three-month stats evaluation exam. Drawing a bow of regulation weight. Hitting targets at range.

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We train fighters, not thugs. You want to live? Take this seriously.”

He turned and pointed toward the forming group. “Now go. Join the trainees.”

“Yes, sir!” I saluted him and jogged off to join the others.

The morning training began with lifting logs, carrying barrels, and long, punishing laps around the yard. Just a few minutes in, I realized something:

My body was pitiful.

By the one-hour mark, I was wheezing, soaked in sweat, legs trembling. Some of the other recruits, especially the hardened ones, were doing extra reps just to show off.

At around one and a half hours, my vision blurred, and I collapsed.

A pair of guards dragged me to the shaded side of the yard. “Rest,” one of them muttered. “You’ll be no good if you die on day one.”

It took me nearly three hours to stop trembling from the morning session. Lunch helped, hot stew, eggs, and fresh bread, but my limbs still ached like someone had pounded them with a hammer. I found a quiet corner near the edge of the barracks, shaded by a low wall, and sat down to breathe.

Not just breathe.

Focus.

From Earth, I remembered something, meditation and rhythmic breathing, tools used by runners, fighters, and martial artists to recover faster, control stress, and sharpen the mind. It wasn’t magic, but maybe it could give me even a small edge.

I sat cross-legged, closed my eyes, and inhaled slowly through my nose.

Four seconds in.

Hold for four.

Exhale for six.

Repeat.

My heartbeat gradually steadied. The burning in my legs dulled. I focused on the rhythm, the cadence of my breathing, the subtle sensations in my limbs as oxygen flowed and muscles unwound.

Breathe in strength. Breathe out pain.

Breathe in focus. Breathe out fear.

After ten minutes, I felt clearer. Not stronger, exactly, but lighter. More grounded.

I glanced at the sun. Midday.

Evening training wouldn’t begin for another six hours.

And I had nothing to do until then.

After recovering a little, I began thinking, if I’m serious about surviving the army, I need more than just raw strength. I needed coordination. Reflexes. Speed.

Good hand-eye coordination could make the difference between dodging a blow and eating it.

And thankfully, I remembered a few simple exercises from Earth that could help build that. Nothing intense, just drills to sharpen reaction time, balance, and awareness. Things even my tired, bruised body might be able to handle.

The sunlight shifted. A shaft of light passed through a gap in the barrack wall and fell on my outstretched hand.

I stared at the glow across my skin, the warmth soaking into the cracks of my knuckles. There was something honest in it. Something real.

My body was weak. But my will didn’t have to be.

I stood.

Not because I had recovered. But because I refused to quit.

I picked up a fallen broom handle someone had left leaning against a wall.

Stick Drill.

I held the stick upright, then pushed it forward slightly and let it fall.

Turning my back to it, I tried to spin around and catch it before it hit the ground.

Miss.

Miss.

Catch, barely.

Again.

Over and over, I practiced, challenging my timing, sharpening my awareness.

Next, I found a loose leather pouch in the trash pile and filled it with cloth scraps. I tossed it against the wall of the barracks, catching it as it rebounded.

Wall Toss.

I started slow, then added angles, distance, speed. Misses were common, but each catch improved my reaction time. I could almost feel my body rewiring itself.

Finally, I gathered a few smooth pebbles. Small, palm-sized.

Juggling.

I started with one, then two. Catch. Toss. Swap.

My coordination was a joke, but I kept at it.

By the end of the hour, I could keep two pebbles in motion for a few seconds at a time.

Evening training began sharply at 6 p.m.

We returned to strength drills, sparring stances, and weapon-handling basics, mostly wooden sticks for now. After another ninety minutes, my body gave out again. The guards let me retire early.

My bones felt like sandbags. My hands were blistered. My shoulders ached.

And the worst part?

Bathing.

There was no running water. I had to fetch buckets from the well, lug them back to the washing station, and scrub myself clean. Every motion burned.

But clean and fed, I finally returned to my tent.

That night, after dinner and the hellish bath, I returned to the same shaded wall and resumed the breathing.

This time, it wasn’t just for recovery.

It was peace.

In a world where I had nothing, no power, no protection, not even stable memories, I still had this:

My breath.

My mind.

My will.

Someday, I told myself, this might be more than just recovery.

Someday, this might be power.

And as the rhythm carried me into sleep, I believed it.

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    Sigh 😔 AI written all over it. gloom
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      In what way? it feels more like the classic RR writing style.
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        I work for an AI company and this is clear AI rewrite (meaning original text was modified to look better using AI), remember how the sergeant tells him that he is low tier 3 in next chapter MC has to be reminded by ben that the sergeant is low tier 3 and he acts like this is new information, he also forgot about tiers and how they relate to real world which he himself explained in 4th chapter. Which happened because AI only stores specific tokens(limited memory)so not all information is retained unless a Pro version is used. You can find what your chatgpt has saved up in setting - personalization - memory.

        Basic way to tell is AI over describes simple things with adjectives. you can find such adjectives by noticing small sentence just made off 3-4 words that are just adjectives for what was said before and kind of feel useless information.

        e.g. - I found a quiet corner near the edge of the barracks, shaded by a low wall, and sat down to breathe.

        Not just breathe.

        Focus.

        e.g. - Not for glory. Not for patriotism.

        For survival.
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      Near perfect writing existed before AI. I'm not going to say this is AI free but I'd like to believe it's human written.
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        Not to be rude I just got into reading only read two novels how do you tell it's ai or not because I have seen commenton other novels saying it 100 percent ai I can't tell
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          Depends on the novel and writing.

          They perfectly use commas and dashes, sometimes abuse it. But many writers have already perfected the basics so this isn't a solid way to judge.

          Soulless. Dialogues that are tasteless and have nothing to add.

          Translation. With the rise of AI translating novels is just a few clicks aways. But sloppily using AI to translate can oftentimes strip the stories original meanings without proper translation. Sometimes outright cutting paragraphs (I tried using AI to fix sloppy dialogues).

          I'm not sure if there's a universal way of judging if it's ai or not. This is only my opinion and how I see it.
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          Honestly, to me the ai generated content feels "souless". I can't describe it but I know.
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