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Chapter 2: Drafted

Michael was left in a small crib with only the blanket he’d been swaddled in before he’d been taken on his first night. He couldn’t see anything in the room, having only the vaguest idea of the shapes that surrounded him, or when something was light or dark. He couldn’t turn his head, nor could he move his limbs beyond weak flailing that pushed lamely against the blanket that covered him. He screamed and cried until he eventually fell asleep from overwhelming exhaustion.

He awoke to the feeling of warmth from a small sliver of sunlight falling across his cheek. He thought for some time that he was back in his hospital bed, but his inability to see and the lack of his family’s voices quickly dissuaded him of that. He had died, gone to something between life and death, and been reborn somehow. He could see that now that he’d calmed down. He had been taken from the people that he guessed were the parents of the body he was in. He heard their cries again. He managed to keep himself from screaming as he remembered everything that had happened, but his instincts were telling him that was what he needed to be doing, and his resistance eventually crumbled.

Shortly after he began crying, a door nearby opened and he heard the sound of footsteps approaching, but he couldn’t properly move his neck to look in their direction, nor could he see much beyond the edge of the crib. A light was turned on, or perhaps lit? It seemed slower than a light switch. The outlines of two people reached the edge of the crib, and he could hear some quiet conversation. The voices weren’t muffled this time and now he was certain that they were speaking in a language he didn’t recognize. He’d lived in a lot of places in the US, and had heard plenty of Spanish, Mandarin, Creole, Farsi, and even some Japanese from the shows his kids had watched, but it didn’t sound like any of those.

One of the outlines leaned close enough that he could make out some of their features. It was a man in his mid-thirties or perhaps early forties, with a serious expression on his face. He held a finger to his lips and made a soft shushing sound.

Michael tried to stop crying, and eventually forced himself into a quiet sob instead, though it was difficult.

The man gestured to the shape next to him, and that person placed a cross shaped object on Michael’s skin. It was cold, metallic, he’d guess. The shape placed a finger on the cross and said a phrase and the cross seemed to become a touch colder.

The middle-aged man leaned forward again.

“You should now be able to understand me. Blink twice if that is the case.”

Michael felt immense relief at hearing something he could understand and struggled to make himself blink twice, barely managing it.

“Good. Your control is higher than the last one. Though it’s been quite a few years. Do not attempt to communicate back to me. You will find it far too much of a struggle and it will be a waste of both of our time.”

Michael remained silent aside from his muffled sobs.

The man nodded. “My name is Vance. You are likely confused as to what has happened. I will explain everything to you once. When I am done, the translation focus on your chest will be removed and it will not be used again.”

Michael didn’t like the sound of that, but didn’t really have any way to respond to it.

“You have been found out. A diviner has recognized you as a Lifetaker. A man from a foreign world that has taken a life that was due to one of the citizens of Stent. This makes you a murderer.”

Michael barely held himself together at that, hearing the wailing of his body's parents build up in his ears again.

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“What you have done is not uncommon in this world. We know that you may have had no intention to do what you have done, and because of this we shall not hang you as is normally done to those who murder children. Instead, you are to be drafted into our military. You will serve a ten year contract with the term starting after the end of your training.”

Michael managed to tear himself away from the vortex of guilt he was feeling long enough to attempt to raise an eyebrow and find himself incapable of doing so.

“You will not be training as an infant. You will be fed an alchemical mixture that will age your body rapidly. Your training will begin in around a month when you are able to begin walking and talking on your own. In roughly a year, you will physically be around sixteen years of age and ready to serve. If you attempt to desert, or escape, you will be hanged.”

The man coughed a bit and stepped away to drink some water before returning.

“You’re lucky, the diviner who examined you noted that you had high potential and the family of the person whose life you took are veterans. You will be sent to the Stent Military Academy rather than simple infantry training like the common criminals that act as Penitents such as thieves and rapists. You’ll still be an irregular, but you’ll be an irregular with better training.”

The man mumbling the spell yawned for a moment and shook his head to wake himself up.

“There’s a transport heading away from here at the end of the month, carrying some other recruits and some supplies. I’ll be having an alchemist provide you with your first few infusions later today, and your eyes and ears should be strong enough by tomorrow to begin language training.”

The muttering man reached for the translation focus, but the other man stopped him, holding up a finger.

“Because you made an effort to be quiet, I’m going to warn you of something. You will be hated for what you are here in Stent, but you should consider yourself fortunate. Other places would have simply left you to the elements or bashed your head upon a rock. Do not take our grace for granted.”

He nodded at the other man and the focus was removed again. He heard them speak briefly to one another, no longer in English, as they walked away.

He was alone, with fuzzy vision and an inability to keep himself from crying any longer. He’d taken a life. Taken all the potential of a child in a world he had no claim to. He didn’t know, hadn’t been aware of what he was doing, but that didn’t change the result. He was no better than the drunk driver that had killed his son.

Shortly after he’d cried himself out, a woman came into the room holding a flask with a leather nipple. She smelled of herbs and blood and said a few things in a language he didn’t understand before shoving the nipple into his mouth. He figured that she must’ve been the alchemist he’d been warned of, and drank. He expected it to taste foul, but it tasted strange rather than bad, kind of like thick warm Gatorade with a grassy undertaste. He realized that there was milk mixed into it as well, likely to keep him sustained. After he finished it, the alchemist picked him up roughly and patted his back from bottom to top until he belched. She then left and another woman entered. He was then changed, cleaned, and left alone again. This was repeated every few hours until night had fallen and he was left alone. He wasn’t a real infant to be coddled through sleepless nights, no one would be sacrificing their own rest for him.

In between the alchemist and nurse’s visits Michael considered his options. Stent’s system seemed relatively fair in a lot of ways. Making ‘lifetakers’ as they’d called him, serve their time doing labor for a decade seemed reasonable. He didn’t like the idea of being a soldier though. He’d been a desk jockey his whole life back on Earth. He’d never even been in a fight. The closest thing he’d done was wrestling with his kids. He could run, or kill himself, but the idea of wasting the life he’d stolen seemed worse to him than stealing it in the first place. No, he would serve. If he did, he may be able to help some people. He would live the life he’d taken to its fullest, because doing anything else was disgusting to him.

In the middle of the night while he was dozing, his body started to feel tremendous pain. It was like there were little fires spreading in his limbs. He screamed as it flared up, but very slowly the pain abated to an ache rather than a sharp pain. It was an ache he recognized from a long time ago. The summer he’d turned fourteen and shot up seven inches he’d had very similar pains, though much less intense. He should’ve guessed there would be a high cost for the kind of rapid growth he was expected to go through.

It was painful, but he’d been through worse during his cancer treatment. He’d felt what it was like for your blood to be on fire, to have his skin tear like paper. Still, his body was driven more by instinct than his own will at this point, and it reacted the way it had since he’d arrived in this new world. He cried.

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    Unfortunately I was right, guess he deserved what he’s about to be served.

    This civilization seems way more advanced in the soul then ours and has most likely run in to many such cases of body snatching in it’s earlier days and is now able to detect it with certainty. Remember that all the previous cases would most definitely not be from nice tempered cancer patients,(many bad people in history are put to death that didn’t want to die.) so I deem there action justifiable and above all understandable.

    So let’s hold off on them being called backwards or savage.
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    Nvm this is worse. Imagine hoping for a child but it turns out a complete random dude became your baby. I'd be horrified too, much less depressed my baby is gone. The mc was clueless that he'd end up replacing a life but I still understand that there are consequences.
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    I don't mind the fact that they treat him like this. It is unfair and all but this can be expected from backwards civilization will be around middle ages.

    What pisses me off is the MC. I was looking to see a good guy in the story since it is a while since I read such story but not in these circumstances.

    Mc is a victim. He did not chose to reicarnate( he wanted to live but in the original world/ whether it had some effect on this is to debate about) or kill the kid. In fact, he doesn't even know what and how it happened. Yet he all takes it like it was his fault and he now owe the debt of life. Fu#k that. It is not his fault and it is not something he should be quilty about.

    Drunk driving is self-inflicted. This is completely beyond control.

    I would be so f#cking evil if they tried this shit on me. Truly, this is how villains are made eyetwit

    So far, the story is interesting but I hope Mc won't take all the bullshit as if he really murdered the kid.
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      If you were a parent expecting a child. What would you feel if some random, foreign dude, replaced your baby? Would you, as you claim, reason that the invader is not at fault and forgive him? Would you tell your wife, that had carried the baby for months, that the invader is not at fault and thus he should not feel guilt?

      The statement you made baffles me. You also point out that it's a backwards civilization. Should they not feel pain and sadness just because they're backwards? They're poor? Should this also reflect on your views towards third world nations? "Oh man this dude just infiltrated our world and killed a child. Kinda sucks that he was imprisoned and recruited for the army. He definitely won't do anything untowards our world with all these powers and stuff".

      I don't know if you're looking for something kind or something that fits your twisted idea of something "kind".

      I would like to figure out your thought process for this.
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    nice bossgif
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    It seems as though this world particularly hates reincarnators like Michael. I find that strange.
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    Honestly f#ck those guys. Couldn't the diviner tell intent?

    "You died, reincarnated, killed a infant, so were gonna strip you of 15 years of life, a family, and make you murder more. We're the good guys for not hurting you".
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      If you were parents and you got to know that your son's soul was killed by some dude that is not even from this planet, wouldn't you get mad too?
      This is unreasonable but when someone loses somebody they get unreasonable. And unlike other people of this world at least they are letting him out with some service, 10 year is not a lot considering he will still be 26-27 when he gets out.
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        Yeah that’s true, I guess since it was first person perspective I put myself in his role. I’d be so mad.
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    I really don’t like the reasoning for this treatment. I understand that it looks fair at a glance, but this is the equivalent of somebody falling from a plane onto a child. Neither party asked for this and to deem it a manslaughter implies that the possessor intended to carry out the act of possession, which is 100% not what happened.
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      i also think the analogy to a drunk driver is fallacious
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      He gave pretty good analogy of drunk driving, neither party asked for it but it happened and now one must serve.
      Most likely there was a Isekaied person in the past who done something really terrible that everyone hates them.
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        Even in the case of drunk driving, there's culpability on the part of the drunk driver. In driving under the influence, he "asked for it", in your words. In the case of possession, the equivalent to "driving" is... well... the "act" of dying, and while a heavily intoxicated person might choose to drive, nobody chooses to die unless they commit suicide. Michael did not commit suicide.

        In terms of culpability, it's the equivalent of either a guy crash landing a plane into the side of a house, accidentally killing a child, or a guy lethally tripping and falling onto a child. It turns the matter of "lifetakers" less into a moral dilemma and more a choice where public opinion can be swayed to whichever way is convenient via presentation.

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          Let's also take a look at homicide laws.

          US Law:
          To quote the FBI:
          Deaths of persons due to their own negligence, accidental deaths not resulting from gross negligence, and traffic fatalities are not included in the category manslaughter by negligence.


          Michael's "killing" of a child, if he actually did kill a soul, is an accidental death not resulting from gross negligence.
          To quote Justia:
          The defendant is not guilty of (murder/ [or] manslaughter) if:
          1. The defendant killed someone by accident and misfortune or while doing a lawful act in a lawful way;
          2. The defendant was acting with usual and ordinary caution; AND
          3. The defendant was acting without the necessary mental state for(murder/ [or] manslaughter).
          A person acts with usual and ordinary caution if he or she acts in a way that a reasonably careful person would act in the same or similar situation. The People have the burden of proving beyond a reasonable doubt that the killing was not excused. If the People have not met this burden, you must find the defendant not guilty of (murder/ [or] manslaughter).


          Michael killed the child by accident and misfortune while performing the lawful act of f#cking dying of cancer in a hospital bed. He was acting with whatever the usual and ordinary caution was for somebody crossing over to the afterlife. He was not feeling malice or murderous intent towards the child's soul.

          Therefore, even if his actions resulted in the child's death, Michael committed no crime in the USA.
          See these links:

          justia.com/criminal/docs/calcrim/500/510/

          ucr.fbi.gov/crime-in-the-u.s/2017/crime-in-the-u.s.-2017/topic-pages/offense-definitions
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            EU (France):

            From the Le Tutour Avocats Site:

            The French Criminal Code defines manslaughter as causing the death of another person through carelessness, negligence, inattention, or failure to exercise due care or safety (Article 221-6 of the Criminal Code). This is an offence that may result in criminal penalties, but also gives rise to rights to compensation for victims and their relatives.


            Michael, in dying and trying to move on to the afterlife, was not carless, negligent, or inattentive. He exercised whatever due care is necessary in the process of dying. Again, he's absolved of manslaughter.
            Even if there's another lower crime that he is guilty of in this jurisdiction, that warrants a lesser punishment than 5-20 years in prison, which is already better than spending ten years in a penal battalion that's almost certainly used like Russian ones in Ukraine. Instead, Michael is "specially" being "spared" from execution as an act of "kindness".

            Le Tutour Avocats:
            letutour-avocats.fr/en/sub-domaines/manslaughter
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          where public opinion can be swayed to whichever way is convenient via presentation.
          That’s usually how it works though. Transmigrators are perfect scapegoat to distract from other problems. Plus the phrase “You have been found” implies that even if they didn’t find you during birth it can happen later. You don’t like someone or some native king or noble did some heinous shit, say he was taken by transmigrator.
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      True but then again, you are in a different world ruled by a different power unlike that of earth. You are subjected to their rules and their authority. Unfair? Maybe for you, a foreigner/isekai. But for them? Their culture and their laws, they see you as an alien.

      The dude did have a point that he was given grace. It's kinda weird if you think about it why the heck would you harbor an alien lifeform.

      Also, any form of law against taking another's life by inhabiting their body from birth may not actually have been invented yet. You can splice the laws but it's not that simple and it definitely won't connect with the mcs situation. You're gonna have to invent a new law dawg.
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      Many bad people are put to death that didn’t want to die, how many of them have done the same thing and was able to travel to this world by taking a life. (Even if they didn’t know what it was they were doing in that space.) So don’t judge them to harshly just yet.
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    Interesting. A world where the MC that’s decades old is not made to be drinking milk from another woman’s breast and coddled like a child.

    The unconventionality of it reminds me of Bog Standard Isekai, another book that doesn’t follow the usual trope of other books of its kind
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