My Three Wives Are Beautiful Vampires by Victor

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2Emperor

2Emperor 12 Aug 2023, 09:51

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Well after reading more than 700+ chapter this is my opinion:

[The fight scene is amazing, it make you feel excited knowing that the MC will win not only because he is OP but also cunning. But. BUT! The story sucks. This is story about a pervert and hypocrite MC, claim he is only interested in strong woman but will not touch a married woman, only to destroy their marriage life so he can f#ck that woman. Overall, I love the fight scene but hate the MC. I don't know what the author think, i mean seriously, "having a non-stop sex for a year" just this line alone is enough to show just how much of a virgin the author is. The only reason i read this is because I got nothing to read. 1/5]

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  theanimemail 11 Sep 2023, 06:34 ➥ 2Emperor
  
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  so, you're telling me that Story Development, Writing Quality, World Background, and Character Design are all 0.5*. Really? At least try to make the review slightly objective,
  
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  Kenneth 12 Aug 2024, 17:59 ➥ 2Emperor
  
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  Sex for a year
  Wtf😂😂
  
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kodex 10 Aug 2023, 00:56

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anyone know off a novel similar to this

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Hazidom 7 Aug 2023, 01:27

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I have read this novel from start until it's most recent update and I have to say that I am disappointed. If I were to put it into a rating I would say that the current novel is a solid 3 out 5 due to the excess of slice of life, power leveling, and the ever growing harem that started as an okay concept. Now? It is just a band of women thinking with their groins instead of anything else.

Okay, let me be more fair. This novel would been a solid 4.5 out of 5 if the author stopped at the end of the
the Diablo War Arc
but for unknown reasons they continued on which is proving to slowly but surely ruin the novel. Why do I say this? Well, I have posted some comments on some chapters later on, around the 740 mark, about how even if the author tries to branch into a more massive world with Primordial entities and extraterrestrials it would all be bland and boring all due to one factor; Victor the Gary Stu.

From the start of this novel Victor was a good character to watch grow and develop because even though it was still pretty hefty of the plot armor as to why he was such an anomaly there were still entertaining aspects of watching him grow. This pace kept up steam for a good bit but slowly the author (in my eyes at least) started to become more of a fanboy of the MC itself or treating it as a self insert since things shifted after Victor gets transported to Hell. After getting into Hell the author stated that time is more loose there and the deeper one goes the more time dilation compared to Earth. Normally this would be fine but for some reason the author forced the progress of the War Arc for no real reason besides the classic benefit of making the MC look cool. There was so much wasted potential all because the author, at least from what I assume, wanted to catch on the trend of having an OP character/self insert that can do nothing wrong and can because stronger than anything they can go against given time. Besides that side tangent, Victor gets 'trapped' in Hell for roughly 700 years and, this is yet another thing that made the growth and potential of Victor be useless and boring, during that time he practiced after taking over Hell. Now that does not sound too bad, right? It wouldn't if not for the fact that the author built up Diablo as this mega big-bad that threw the whole world into chaos only for him to be destroyed in a chapter, nay, a couple paragraphs- by the Gary Stu MC.

After that the author tries to establish more world building but that is an extremely hard thing to do when he has already made his MC the King of Hell with the power that even made the author's rendition of the Biblical God wary. There was so much effort and intrigue that lead to a fantastic climax of a war between Victor and Diablo only to be puddle splash. The story after the War Arc is just watered down garbage constantly gushing about how women want to be dicked down and used by Victor or some uBeR PoWeRfUl wOmEn getting the hots for Victor.

TLDR; The novel was great up until the end of the War Arc but turned to shit after the author started treating the MC as a Gary Stu. I would recommend only reading until the end of the War Arc.

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Ashlynx07 5 Aug 2023, 17:52

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Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

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Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

No, please no. Anna is so mediocre to be even considered. She is just slightly better than any normal Vampire noble. We already have too many mid shits with no merit in his harem who do nothing but sex ( they are more like concubines than Wives). Victor should cherish himself more and have some borderline between wives and subordinates / Mother etc. Well Its just my opinion.

well, it's my opinion that I want Anna in the harem, ok. And about Anna being mediocre? bruh it was clearly mentioned that even for someone with progenitor's blood, her talent is far highest and, you're saying she is just slightly better than any normal noble vampire? Even Leon with progenitor's blood considered far more talented than a normal noble vampire. And According to the Author, Anna's talent is on the same level as Agenes and Natashia or maybe even Scathatch. She is just a newborn vampire and can't just suddenly have a power up, she is not the Main Character(Victor) lol. And about the problem with Victor's maids and Scathatch's adopted daughters, Dude, it's a f#cking harem novel, and Scathatch's adopted daughters were with Victor from the start and even low-key liked him, and suppose if suddenly some other guy came and claim them, then it will be nothing more than NTR to me, I know that's not how Ntr work, but for me, In harem novels that's how ntr works (i wouldn't have mind if this was romance novel). About Maids, Victor wanted personal maids completely loyal to him, and suppose if he would not have a relationship with them and they would've ended up falling for other guys, how they would have been able to maintain their loyalty completely only towards Victor? And it's not like he treats his maids the same as his wives, you can think of it as he has master-servants relationship with them, for example: he gives his maids direct orders about any matter whereas he discusses and takes his wives' opinions on the same matter., And About Victor cherishing himself more, lol who in the universe is luckier than him? it's not like he sleeps with any women without potential, His harem is full of Talented monsters, even his subordinates are monsters. And its my personal view, that he is gonna be a f#cking god and live for eternity, so what's the problem if he has a little bigger harem and its not even the largest harem I've read.

Well i don't know if it is right of me to reply you again it looks like we are having discussion in review section. Please pardon the disturbance. I just think Scarlet sisters are cheap alternative of Scatach and Ruby. Imo people just can't like Toyota after having Rolls royce ,can they ? So i just think Author shouldnt have served them to vic. And about Maid/subordinates, they pledged their loyalty so there's no need to have sex w/ them or treat them better just to maintain their loyalty, yk some rulers treat servants like toys still have their loyalty. So a King shouldnt lower himself just to have mere servants loyalty.

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⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪 5 Aug 2023, 13:59

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Quote: ⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪
Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

Quote: Ashlynx07
Quote: ⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪
Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

No, please no. Anna is so mediocre to be even considered. She is just slightly better than any normal Vampire noble. We already have too many mid shits with no merit in his harem who do nothing but sex ( they are more like concubines than Wives). Victor should cherish himself more and have some borderline between wives and subordinates / Mother etc. Well Its just my opinion.

well, it's my opinion that I want Anna in the harem, ok. And about Anna being mediocre? bruh it was clearly mentioned that even for someone with progenitor's blood, her talent is far highest and, you're saying she is just slightly better than any normal noble vampire? Even Leon with progenitor's blood considered far more talented than a normal noble vampire. And According to the Author, Anna's talent is on the same level as Agenes and Natashia or maybe even Scathatch. She is just a newborn vampire and can't just suddenly have a power up, she is not the Main Character(Victor) lol. And about the problem with Victor's maids and Scathatch's adopted daughters, Dude, it's a f#cking harem novel, and Scathatch's adopted daughters were with Victor from the start and even low-key liked him, and suppose if suddenly some other guy came and claim them, then it will be nothing more than NTR to me, I know that's not how Ntr work, but for me, In harem novels that's how ntr works (i wouldn't have mind if this was romance novel). About Maids, Victor wanted personal maids completely loyal to him, and suppose if he would not have a relationship with them and they would've ended up falling for other guys, how they would have been able to maintain their loyalty completely only towards Victor? And it's not like he treats his maids the same as his wives, you can think of it as he has master-servants relationship with them, for example: he gives his maids direct orders about any matter whereas he discusses and takes his wives' opinions on the same matter., And About Victor cherishing himself more, lol who in the universe is luckier than him? it's not like he sleeps with any women without potential, His harem is full of Talented monsters, even his subordinates are monsters. And its my personal view, that he is gonna be a f#cking god and live for eternity, so what's the problem if he has a little bigger harem and its not even the largest harem I've read.

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  elengee 23 Aug 2023, 17:37 ➥ ⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪
  
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  Amen.
  
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Igerficomfyz 5 Aug 2023, 07:01

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Truthfully this no longer the yandere novel we wished for , it has changed , now when a new powerful woman enters the scene , everyone agrees to make her victor's wife like bitch weren't you possessive enough to kill other woman who approach victor and then there's a major problem with victor , he's reached the max of character development and all that is left of him is horny and power . Goddamnit at the beginning he was an enjoyable character to read , still in the process of developing but now he's just bland and everything he does is explained for his spoiler alert great beauty . And another thing that is unsettling is that every woman he takes interest into somehow and for some reason had great hidden potential. If you're familiar with the yandere (like yuno from future diary ) would she accept to give her beloved to another woman even if it profit's him nah of course not , she would try to kill said woman. All in all this novel has degraded as time went by . Now every chapter or so they mentioned how the woman are bewildered by victor's beauty and how they lose control and want to f*ck him . And the worst part is spoiler alert Eleonor such a useless bitch in heat I could rant all I want but I know it won't change a thing and that's sad

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  Arjun135 7 Aug 2023, 17:13 ➥ Igerficomfyz
  
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  You are right bro.its degradation chapter by chapter.now it's almost like Pokemon collection series another episode.he goes out find an interesting Pokemon (heroine) then he collect it.then again the same cycle it's just keep getting worse.he should have stopped his Harem at the 3fmc and their mom and possibly some other heroine like that black fox and that Japanese general that much was fine but no he has to go and s**t there well anyway .i already dropped it.if someone is interested in yandere read it it's very good up to deablo arch later it's kept getting worse so take risk on your own Accord. 😔
  
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Ashlynx07 4 Aug 2023, 12:32

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Quote: ⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪
Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

No, please no. Anna is so mediocre to be even considered. She is just slightly better than any normal Vampire noble. We already have too many mid shits with no merit in his harem who do nothing but sex ( they are more like concubines than Wives). Victor should cherish himself more and have some borderline between wives and subordinates / Mother etc. Well Its just my opinion.

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⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪 4 Aug 2023, 08:23

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Really love this series, please continue with how it is going...... and um hope Anna will be in harem too hehe~

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  Arjun135 7 Aug 2023, 17:15 ➥ ⁣𓆩‎ᗪℯ𝓿ꪱ͛ł𓆪
  
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  Another horney guy
  
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AudioBook Collection 4 Aug 2023, 04:57

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Ashlynx07 3 Aug 2023, 14:54

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Am i the only one who thinks -

Scatach's whole family and Maids such as Eve,Maria and Bruna as Victor's wives were extremely unnecessary

. Hedonistic and nymphomaniac mindset of several wives gradually become slightly annoying

. I am severally Disappointed on character Maya. She's nothing but a bitch (literal) in heat and bitch really thinks she just has to make a mind and Victor will take her as his wife. Victor should just ignore her Smelly pu#y. Author shouldn't just give Victor to any Horny bitch there are more Great characters ( personally I'd prefer someone incredible from the Witches or lilith etc.

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