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Eternal Life Begins with Taking a Wife长生从娶妻开始

Transmigrating to the Immortal World, Shen Ping has been cultivating as if he was walking on thin... Read more
Transmigrating to the Immortal World, Shen Ping has been cultivating as if he was walking on thin ice for more than twenty years, but he didn’t have cheats and had ordinary qualifications, so his cultivation progressed slowly.

When he finally decided to give up completely and become a loser to enjoy the world… Come on, chicks!

But…

Right after his night of satisfaction, he looked at his lovely wife who was curled up like a kitten in his arms.

[You have diligently cultivated with your wife for one night, gaining talisman-making experience +10]

[Current wife affinity 60]

[Bonus: 0]

[Talisman Master: First Order Lower Grade (1005/1000) Breakable]

He then realized that the way he opened the world of immortals was a bit wrong! Collapse
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    What a high quality "translation" this has. I've seen MTLs more readable than this
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      Verdade, mas é legivel, ja usei o tradutor do novelhi, o melhor que tem pra traduzir do chines pro ingles, por que no banco de dados deles eles tem já salvo termos certo onde google tradutor não tem, pro exemplo, Nucleo Dourado na novelhi, e Pilula Dan dourado do google. Entre varios termos a novelhi ja tem salvo certinho. Unico problema é que fica ruim de lê e tem que traduzir capitulo por capitulo.
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    #panic# att plis
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      Answered.
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      only we
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        #panic#

        has more than 560 chapters already available satisfied satisfied naif quiet 29
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    • 4.3
    4.3
    Surprisingly decent. It’s funny that a story that encourages an MC to collect women and treat them like pokemon is much better at developing characters for them than the vast majority of other Chinese fics. MC also isn’t one to cast off is weaker wives and f#ck off to a new map. The fact that he actually develops genuine feelings towards them makes him more realistic than almost every xianxia MC.

    Story wise it isn’t bad. MC is cautious without being retarded like Sign In story MCs. He avoids fights because he doesn’t like getting hurt or killing which is plausible given his position and he can easily develop without doing so.

    However, story is starting to get dragged down by too many different and weird euphemisms for sex. Dunno if it’s a TL issue or an author (or maybe both). Chapters are getting butchered (size wise) by the TLs. This is standard nowadays but damn the latest chapters are reallly bad for this. Feels like TL quality is also slipping a bit?

    TLDR - Surprisingly realistic characters for a Chinese novel, believable growth for the average person transmigrator as well. Bit of a hidden gem and I think it deserves better ratings, especially compared to the sea of shit we usually deal with.
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    2.0
    Not only it is unbelievably boring but also the mc is a huge pussy scared of his own shadow and treats his girls as if they were items, just don't bother my fellow harem daoists.
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    It’s good, but why is the mc infertile?
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      He's not infertile later he has a whole lot of children.
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    #panic# there seems to be chapters missing after 194
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    Hello, do anyone have an novel pretty much the same as this one in terms of the romance and harem? And I don't want anything that seems familiar but is completely different. And I know that Mc buys three of his wives, but he still takes them time to build their relationship and still builds his relationship with Yu Yuan. Basically, what I want is an harem story that actually focuses on their relationship when getting into a harem, rather than it just being melodrama bullshit about jealousy or they barely interact anymore when they confirm their relationship.

    I really want a novel that has something like this one does, for example, After dinner, Shen Ping smiled and said, "Yun'er, Ying'er, go take a shower. I have a surprise for you."

    Wang Yun subconsciously asked, "Husband, do you have a new move?"

    Shen Ping's face darkened. "What are you thinking about all day long! Go quickly!"

    After taking a shower, his wife and concubine obediently crawled into the blanket. Shen Ping took out two brand new female cultivator robes from his storage bag, causing the two women to be stunned.

    "H-husband, is this a magic robe?"

    "Yes, I bought it for you. Change into it quickly and let me take a look."

    Wang Yun and Bai Yuying were instantly excited. They couldn't care less about their naked bodies and came out of the blanket to change into the robes. Their temperament instantly changed.

    As their beautiful hair was tied up, his wife and concubine looked like immortals.

    "Thank you, husband!"

    "Husband is too good to us!"

    Joy appeared on the two women's faces as they kissed Shen Ping's cheeks shyly. Shen Ping said seriously, "Let me check the quality of the material of this robe for you." As he spoke, he pounced forward like a wolf in a flock of sheep.
    It's a shot interaction, but I simply love that they are showing geniune affection and feelings towards each other and have regular sex with each other.

    Another example includes, "Husband, what are you thinking?" Just as he was thinking, Wang Yun, who was curled up in his arms, opened her eyes.

    Shen Ping came back to his senses and smiled. "Nothing. Can't sleep anymore?"

    Wang Yun nodded and said apologetically, "You have worked hard day and night and has to squeeze out time every day to accompany me and Sister Ying'er, but I can't help you. I've been with Senior Yu for the past few days. I think Senior Yu is quite interested in you. Why don't you consider marrying Senior Yu? I'm just a mortal. I'm really not worthy of being your wife."

    Shen Ping said gently, "Yun'er, don't think too much. I've said before that you're my first wife and will always be the first."

    Wang Yun was extremely touched. She did not expect that she was still so important to her husband until now. What she had said in the past was not perfunctory, but true. "Husband, I still want to…"

    He looked at his loving wife. How could Shen Ping bear to reject such a request?

    And all this stuff happens in the early chapters, I hate it when supposed harem novels barely have any romance 100 chapters in or it's the bullshit that they get together at the end.
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      Divine Emperor of Death seems what you are looking for.
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    #panic# bro can you please update the chapters, there's more than 100 chapters available on webnovel with fast passes.... pressure pressure pressure
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      Have you find any other site to read those locked chaps bro?
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    Very very boring
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    I've read the whole raws (305 chapters) and i could say its quite good for its genre, the character development of his wives are given attention, the novel is basically a slice of life, unfortunately tho, i think the author is increasing the pace gradually, it used to be a slow daily life, now its a slow monthly and yearly life LOL, its like the author is just rushing to end the novel, i may be wrong.

    (my vocab/grammar is dying from all the MTL).
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      Isn't that because of higher cultivation realm ? I mean, cultivation is harder as you progress. In many novels it may not be obvious because of protagonist's luck, opportunities etc. But this one so far looks like it will be slow paced cultivation (so far 30 chapters in). So if the author wants the story progress then the timeskips needs to get longer.
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        Little spoiler but in a span of 50 chapters he went from
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          And the cheat system is less mentioned ....
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