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The Last Orellen by sieley

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According to prophecy, the ninth-born child of Lord Orellen will have the sort of power that changes the world. But in a land ruled by magical families, no one welcomes the possibility of a dangerous new player. Fearful even of their allies, the Orellens come up with an extraordinary and deadly scheme to protect themselves.


If the most powerful people in the world wish to kill the ninth-born, they will have to find him or her first. And that's not going to be easy when the Orellens have called upon dark magic to create hundreds of heirs. The boys and girls are given new bodies, new names, and even new magical talents before they are scattered across the continent. Only one among them is the real ninth, but all of them will have to grow up in a world where they are fugitives.


Kalen, once fated to die, is now an Orellen heir in hiding. And he is determined to survive, even if he has to master his strange new powers to do it.




The Last Orellen is a long, character-focused epic fantasy with progression. It's set in a vast universe, and it's about a boy's journey to become a powerful magical practitioner. Reviews are deeply appreciated. Please do not repost my work elsewhere without my written permission.




What type of reader is this book for? You might enjoy The Last Orellen if you like...


Clever and resourceful protagonists.


Big fantasy worlds. Multiple cultures, lots of characters, many different types of magic--this story is expansive rather than closely focused on a narrow storyline. 


Old-school epic fantasy.


Progression fantasy that takes its time. Our main character will be progressing through magical ranks, but this is going to be a lengthy story. If you're more about the journey than the destination, this might be the book for you.




Currently, the story is updating approximately once per week. Short chapters may appear more frequently. I will be back on Discord shortly.

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    This novel is a masterpiece in making. I cannot stress upon this enough but this story, imo, will flourish like no other in the future after more chapters come out.

    First of all, this is a proper novel. Not general Chinese crap. A proper novel. Read it only if you've got patience or you've read novels by English authors. It kinda gives Blood Song and Wheel of Time vibes though not yet comparable to them.

    Secondly, you can treat the first 9 chapters as Prologue. These chapters introduce to us the MC and how he was made. You have to force yourself through the POV changes in the first 9 chapters but after that it's only our MC's POV. The true story, the engaging part, starts from chapter 10.

    As far as writing is concerned, it's impeccable. It's artistic. Someone who knows English wrote this. Much effort has been put here and it's evident.

    The world revealed so far is extensive. The power (hinted) of those in power is off charts. So MC would become OP at some point.

    Our MC is a child. He grows both in power, age started at 5 now 12 and in EQ as well as IQ.

    With just 30 chapters I cannot write a detailed review but I personally have become a fan of this novel.

    Do read it. Don't get discouraged by the first 9 chapters. Highly Recommended for those who want to relieve themselves of shitty WNs.
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      after reading your review i want to read this novel and im also curious about the novels you have mentioned "Blood Song" and "wheel of time". i don't generally read novels from english author so can you give me a briefing about it?
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    Is the mc ruthless
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    Rank C+
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      i wonder if you ever find a novel worthy of S rank?
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        reverend insanity
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          how many novels did you gave S rank? i want to read them
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            Well... in my whole life I've read at least 100 S rank novels, but they change from time to time because my taste changes over time, you know?.

            I only remember a few S rank novels because most of them I read more than 5 years ago, so I'll have to look them up on my list.

            Currently I can recommend some B or A rank that I remember, is that ok?
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              that is perfectly fine for me, as i might finish them quickly.

              that is perfectly fine with me as i might finish them quite quickly
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                ystic Journey, Devil's Path, Nightmare's Call, Tree Aeons, Symphony of Evolution, I Am God, I Am Loaded Passive Skills, custom made Demon King.

                some novels there may only be Rank C, but somehow it struck me, example, I read it when I was going through a dark moment and it cheered me up somehow, but you can read it without fear Because the majority there is rank B or A, oh, yes, if you see any indication of mine with the +or- it is because of the potential that the novel has, for example, if a novel has an A classification with the - it is because the ending it was unsatisfactory or no longer has potential, a novel rated + means it has potential (sometimes it's not so good, but it's evolving). ( ╹▽╹ )

                Of course, my ratings may change from time to time, depending on how many chps I've read or my taste at the time.
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                  thank you, for i will enjoy this even though i have read some of these for those i haven't, i will see if its enjoyable.
                  oh and thanks for the reminder.
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                  What is the full title of "I am God"? Can't seem to find that anywhere
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                  I am the beginning of civilization.
                  although it has few chapters, but it has many chps in Mtl, It is readable, so I advise you to read it first in webnovel and then in Mtl.

                  Note: It's worth it, maybe you'll like it (I read about 200 to 300 chps)
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                  The one by DaoistGy5WgI or?
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                  Yes!, Himself
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    I read first 3ch
    The overall feel and quality of the novel is awesome, i can feel it's going to be hella long.
    The writing is artistic to say the least.
    It's just not my type of novel.
    I may pick it up later but not now
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    Please do not repost my work elsewhere without my written permission.

    ahaa
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    Is it any good satisfied
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      Sayılır
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