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The Last Orellen by sieley

This story is no longer on hiatus. Thank you to everyone who waited for its return.
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This story is no longer on hiatus. Thank you to everyone who waited for its return.


According to prophecy, the ninth-born child of Lord Orellen will have the sort of power that changes the world. But in a land ruled by magical families, no one welcomes the possibility of a dangerous new player. Fearful even of their allies, the Orellens come up with an extraordinary and deadly scheme to protect themselves.


If the most powerful people in the world wish to kill the ninth-born, they will have to find him or her first. And that's not going to be easy when the Orellens have called upon dark magic to create hundreds of heirs. The boys and girls are given new bodies, new names, and even new magical talents before they are scattered across the continent. Only one among them is the real ninth, but all of them will have to grow up in a world where they are fugitives.


Kalen, once fated to die, is now an Orellen heir in hiding. And he is determined to survive, even if he has to master his strange new powers to do it.




The Last Orellen is a long, character-focused epic fantasy with progression. It's set in a vast universe, and it's about a boy's journey to become a powerful magical practitioner. Reviews are deeply appreciated. Please do not repost my work elsewhere without my written permission.




What type of reader is this book for? You might enjoy The Last Orellen if you like...


Clever and resourceful protagonists.


Big fantasy worlds. Multiple cultures, lots of characters, many different types of magic--this story is expansive rather than closely focused on a narrow storyline. 


Old-school epic fantasy.


Progression fantasy that takes its time. Our main character will be progressing through magical ranks, but this is going to be a lengthy story. If you're more about the journey than the destination, this might be the book for you.




Currently, the story is updating approximately once per week. Short chapters may appear more frequently. I will be back on Discord shortly.

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    This feels like an actual book and not some power fantasy harem crap. Still early in chapters but it’s got great potential, I hope more people start to read it. joy
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    plot progression is very slow
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    [s=me lampooning][/s]
    After reading all kind of web novels about gods destroying the planet and like universe
    I went to watch the tv series Loki but I just couldn't help but be like what kind of god can get pushed around like paper and get beaten up by normal people and the dude super power is only low level illusions like it's not like progenitor of illusion (sg) who can make whole universe in his illusion.
    Watching Loki saying he is a god is kind of a turn of for me
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      there are low level gods and high level gods. so low level gods can be weak. and who is to say that the average power of people in loki is quite great
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      He isn't actually a god
      Its like foundation establishment people calling themselves gods to mortals
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      You should probably start consuming more of other forms of media to get a better sense of scale for each individual work.

      It doesn’t make much sense for Loki to be able to blow up planets in a universe centered on superheroes like Captain America.
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    Guys we are holding a relay novel event for all fellow daoists in the Unofficial Ranobes dc server so i want everyone to play


    What is **Relay-Novel**? It's a fun event where the novel is passed on to participants and they add another chapter based off the previous, summary will be written by an AI to start.

    Comment below if interested
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      What, where ?
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        Fellow daoist
        Congratulations on your ascension, now that you are part of the top legion, we invite you to this heavenly sect, where you can discuss tue dao with fellow like minded individuals



        (The UNofficial Ranobes dc server)
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          Thanks for the link. I am joining.
          Also We should request panic to make an official server.
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    It's not bad but it does not make want to wait or continue reading it. wiseacre
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    Gott-höchste
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    #panic# New chps on wuxiaworld
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    Any pitfalls in this to be worried about?
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    Yoooo!? What happened to the chat group!? Its gone!
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      actually an official discord server will be better ya know..tho i am sad for the loss of chat function too
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        Bor u got the unofficial discord server link of ranob? I forgot where i lost saw it.
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    Good shit
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    Finally something new on home page
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