Magic System in a Parallel World by MyLittleBrother

This is the first novel I've seen a "Good chapter" comment got so many down votes

Truly, there's always a first to everything.

En lisant le résumé j'ai pensé que cela n'avait pas l'air très original et que ça ressemblait beaucoup aux autres romans. J'espère qu'il a une certaine singularité sinon j'arrêterai au bout d'une dizaine de chapitres.

It's bummer from the very start MC not being able to use magic in public and giving away all his secrets to the nurse

I have red till chapter 178. it definitely isn't for everyone but i think the setting is pretty good the main side characters are likeable the power system in this world is also good. However if you dont like an mc that heavily relies on his system this isnt for you. Also there is some light harem but nothing that will ruin the novel just a general attraction that some female side characters have. You are either really gonna like this novel or your are really gonna dislike it. A fun read to pass the time

WRITING: 3.5/5 (not anything special but he rarely has errors and the dialogues dont tire you)


Overall 4/5( a good read to pass the time if you dont mind the classic transmigrated with an all powerfull system cliché)

How typical, common and cliche, just reading the summary alone doesnt interest me anymore cuz theres ton of this everywhere. I've had enough with his other two works. DC and QO with DC being unfinished which leave a bitter taste in my mouth cuz its really the first cultivation novel ive read

MyLittleBrother(author of this novel, cultivation online and dual cultivation) trying to do the 'not randomly leaving the novel you're writing in the air and write a new novel challenge (impossible)'

Infuriatingly pathetic mc can't do shit by himself
Want me to teach you X, well, you have to Y
Want me to help you with W? sure, after you Z!
And over and over and over, also he's training magic (and the title baits you with a magic system) but guess what? he can't use magic in public because the previous owner of his body wasn't a mage! my god how can you cuck the novel right from the start like this?! i'm really wondering wtf happened to MyLittleBrother, sure his other novels aren't earth-shattering, but hey at least they're fun to read and kinda hook you, this one? none of that, i wasted 2 nights expecting it to get good and never happened (5 star perfect score novel on webnovel btw, PERFECT SCORE).
Ieaving incredibly disappointed.
also F#CK naive-clueless mcs.

1. I got a dig bick

2. You that read wrong

3. You read that wrong too

4. You checked

5. You smiled

7. You are wandering why you are still reading

this

8. You saw that mistake, right?

(On 7)

10. But did you see that I skipped 6?

10. You checked

11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped

9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw

13. I also skipped 2

14. You got tricked

15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!

Trash novel.

It starts out pretty decent but soon results in MC becoming a leading contender for the Darwin awards.

Speaking of awards, this one should most certainly be awarded the cursed [Naive MC] tag.

If the novel were satire it would probably be hilarious, but the author didn't frame it as such.

I anticipate that the further the story goes on, the worse the tropes will get.

***Cliche ****
It's okay for newcomers, for "pro time wasters" it's not worth wasting time.
I have read other works of this author.

His mcs are soft rice eater with "heavenly talents"
Starts with female companions who are illogically passionate about him.
And for plot and storyline- he goes around circles ( while mixing scenes from other trends)-




And for the love of God,
Plz stop abusing lilith.
Now I vomit just by reading the name of it