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My Fate System by MellowGuy

My Fate System
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[You have used 100 Lost Souls to summon an undead.]

‘Change probability,’ Nikolai used... Read more
[You have used 100 Lost Souls to summon an undead.]

‘Change probability,’ Nikolai used his powers of fate and increased probability. The giant black box in front of him began rotating, and golden cracks appeared as another undead joined his army.

[You have obtained the Dullahan of Wrath (Lvl. 1)]

Nikolai grinned and clenched his fist in excitement. With this monster joining his undead army, he’ll have an easier time getting the Legendary Skill.

[Warning!]

[Consume one Living Soul or suffer the consequences.]

The system stole his joy and sought to remind him that he was no longer human. Nikolai sighed and looked at himself in the mirror. He stopped being human the moment he awakened. Now, he needed to devour humans to stay alive.

Humans and gods alike hated him. Collapse
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    hungar
    + 2 ⋅ 1 -
    Unique indeed

    The level of hate that everyone has toward mc for no reason at all ... I mean the antagonist wants to kill him , and i don't know why nor the author i guess , i only read until 15 because I can already taste the plot armour, the system concept is neat but flawed to extreme levels , tell me how do you quantify fate to numbers... And always giving him choices of 30 sec. Is this actually a game world?

    The instant he kills or affects someone of high renown/power/influence he will receive fate , but only a fixed number . No way man , what would happend is that you don't affect a single person , 1+1 = 2 ; 2+2= 4 people affected and so on , the amount of fate stolen would unquantifiable . I don't want to read anymore because to make this work we need to skip over such holes.

    I don't care what happens in 10 or 100 ch if i have to sift through logic to get there .
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    Jackinferno2
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    Summary of the words of the author:


    If you are impatient to reach the point of the nigromancy, this novel is not for you.

    You will have an interesting reading. Not by the trick that MC has, but because the development of the story is unique.

    The protagonist retreats over time and obtains the ability to manipulate probability. Using the knowledge of him and the new blood line of him, he will learn the art of nigromance. The system will act as support for the NigRomancy and the invocation / creation of the undead
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    Natsu-gildarts
    + 12 ⋅ 4 -
    Acc o WN

    The author's review

    I think some clarification is needed, so here's my review! The synopsis mentions necromancy, but the system doesn't have that function. The protagonist goes back in time and gets the ability to manipulate probability. Using his knowledge and his new bloodline, he'll learn the art of Necromancy. The system will act as a support for Necromancy and summoning/creating the undead. If you're impatient to get to the necromancy point, this novel isn't for you. I don't want to mislead you. The necromancy is crucial to the story, so I'm not going to throw that in just yet. :) I promise, however, that you'll have an interesting read. Not because of the cheat the mc has, but because the story development is unique. :)


    Also, the novel's excellent in all aspects: Worldbuilding, character development, grammar, impossible to see through plot. MC's smart but not too much, strong but not OP. Update stability: You'll get at least 1 chapter a day.
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      ID:entity:Kelvin
      + 5 ⋅ 5 -
      Here you go folks that's like what he said it's pretty decent to read.
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      Natsu-gildarts
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      If people are avoiding it because of the necromancy thingie, don't worry. I'm up to date with it and there's no semblance of it.
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      Jackinferno2
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      Copye a bit of the author's review for my review
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