Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World by _Drakon

Written by shitty ass ai....😂😂😂

Title: Evolving My Undead Legion In A Game-Like World
Verdict: A necromancer’s slow death by inner monologue.

There comes a point, dear reader, where “world-building” becomes “world-burying.”
I trudged through 200+ chapters of ruins, menus, and unending self-reflection....only to realize the true undead were not his summons, but the pacing itself.

The author loves thought more than progress. You can practically hear the neurons sizzling as the MC spends three chapters debating whether to check his own stats, another three on how his undead might perhaps, maybe, potentially evolve… and then doesn’t.
A philosopher trapped in a grindfest. A necromancer allergic to cultivation. A corpse with commitment issues.



The system dangles complexity like rotten meat.....ranks, awakeners, cultivators, monsters, all sharing the same names and none sharing logic. One might think the author is conducting a psychological experiment: “How long will the human spirit endure confusion before snapping?”

And still, I kept reading. Because buried in the mire lies potential..... the concept of evolving an undead legion has bones, fine bones. But the flesh? Overwritten. The blood? Diluted by exposition. The mind? Lost in the ruins by chapter 40.

I ranted, I cursed, I philosophized..... then I stopped at chapter 286. Not out of hate, but fatigue. Even the Dao cannot transcend endless status screens.

So if you, bold reader, wish to test your patience, go forth. Perhaps you’ll find enlightenment among the zombies of repetition. Or perhaps you’ll join me, lying under a heap of info-dumps, muttering,



—Daoist Inkdrunk Wanderer,
currently genderbent into a tired necromancer, evolving patience instead of undead.
drink poison, they said. It’ll make bad novels easier to digest, they said.
Still waiting for reincarnation… preferably into a story that moves past chapter four.

I have read until chapter ten, and I only have one thing to say about this.

As a professional poison tester and AI connoisseur, I can confidently say this is definitely made by ai with human editing or the other way round, honestly I am more inclined to believe the first case...

The author clearly sucks at proofreading his own works, considering this isn't even translated, here is a segment for you to see.

"On any other occasion, they might have, but today, there was no place for mockery, they all feared that they might fare any better than the student who had fallen."

Notice it?

'they all feared that they might fare any better than the student who had fallen.'

Might fare any better than the student who had fallen???

Serious?

That is pure broken english that completely makes no sense, I get what the author is trying to say, but using such language without actually checking leaves me at a headache, mind you this is just chapter one, the nine other chapters left with with the same stroke.

A accurate manner to have written this paragraph would have been:

"On any other occasion, they might have, but today, there was no place for mockery. Neither of them had confidence that they would fare any better than the student who had just fell."

Fallen just doesn't fit this?

Are they trying to use past tense? Future tense? Grammar is all over the place.

Moreover, the use of fare in this manner is already wrong.

By not changing anything and simply fixing his usage, the line should be "they all feared they might NOT fare any better"

His usage is essentially saying they are scared they will be better than her, when I am sure this is the writers intended usage.

This triggers me a lot as I am very sensitive to broken english (price of being a English major ig)

Anyways heed my word, and I swear upon the holy trinity when I say this, do not read for your sanity and mental health.

Gosh, I need a break now.

Looks garbage 🗑️ who gonna poison test this crime

This looks like your average fast food

Poison tester?