1 year ago

New Eden: Live to Play, Play to Live by Galanar

In a world of constant competition, one man aims for the top. In this new genre VRMMORPG, he plans... Read more
In a world of constant competition, one man aims for the top. In this new genre VRMMORPG, he plans on becoming the strongest at all costs.

The classes, the races, the starting zones, everything is a mystery in 'New Eden'. This game is coming out without a shred of details. The only thing that was promoted was the freedom of skill choosing.

Our protagonist Alexander, gamer tag Astaroth, has always dreamt of becoming an E-Sports athlete. His parents supported his dream, but they are no longer of this world. He fully intends on making it in this new game, if not for him, then at least to honor their memory.

With no idea how he wants to play his character, Alexander chooses the most mysterious starting race. Will this be his road to success or his downfall? The game assistant certainly thought the latter.

"Do as you wish, young adventurer. I only wish to add this. Do not come back with complaints when you realize you have made the wrong choice," the elf said, looking at him with clear hatred.

"We will see about that," Alexander flatly replied. "I love challenges," he added.

"Very well!" the elf harrumphed. "Have the adventure of your lifetime, as short as it will last," he sarcastically added.

Ahead of him lies an uncertain path, filled with trials and hardships.

But one thing is clear in his eyes. He will become the strongest player in the game, even if he must step over mountains of corpses to do so.

Over are his days of working hard for nothing, it's make or break now!

***

I now have a discord where you can talk with other readers and me. There are also channels to discuss new weapons; characters; classes; or monsters that you might want to design and see incorporated in the story. I will always give credit to the person that created said thing, rest assured. Collapse
  • Views: 19 039
  • Total views: 603 791
  • Comments: 19
  • Total comments: 70

Links

Information
Users of Guests are not allowed to comment this publication.

Comments 19

  1. Offline
    + 00 -
    "Do as you wish, young adventurer. I only wish to add this. Do not come back with complaints when you realize you have made the wrong choice," the elf said, looking at him with clear hatred.

    "We will see about that," Alexander flatly replied. "I love challenges," he added.

    "Very well!" the elf harrumphed. "Have the adventure of your lifetime, as short as it will last," he sarcastically added.


    Why is the npc hostile right from the beginning?
    Read more
    1. Offline
      + 30 -
      The NPC was an elf no? Choosing an Ash Elf might be the reason as the two races of Elves might be on hostile terms.
      Read more
  2. Offline
    + 22 -
    I stopped at chapter 67 there, the dialogues and interactions with the characters are too forced for me.
    ethsky
    Read more
  3. Offline
    Hmm… seems like this would be a rather good virtual reality novel and if quality is and remains good basing off desc, anyone mind sharing their thoughts on the novel?
    Read more
    1. Offline
      + 20 -
      the idea is good in general but the dialogue is too cringy and seem way too forced between the characters.....MC is too stupid sometimes and act like 15 year old instead of 25
      Read more
      1. Offline
        + 00 -
        Ahhh welp based off ur info I think this novel seems pretty bad it had potential but its just fallen to ruins
        Read more