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The Systemic Lands by MisterVii

Michael must survive a fake world, he and other people from Earth have been teleported to.
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Michael must survive a fake world, he and other people from Earth have been teleported to.

Struggling to survive with his weight and fear. Michael must try and figure out the mysteries of this new world he is stuck in.

The other people transported to the empty stone city, the monsters outside, and the mysterious System Store are all threats or opportunities in equal measure.

The Systemic Lands is a Dark Progressive LITRPG. Taking a grittier approach to the survival progression story, when the main character isn't a super athlete ready to go at a moment's notice.

The unique setting moves away from any of the standard tropes of a LITRPG setting and takes on the air of a true mystery. While a slower start as Michael gets his bearings, there is clear progression, stats, and power levels. Avoiding the info dumps of boxes, The Systemic Lands excels at people using knowledge of game mechanics to try and figure out how things work.

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    Mc is a good person inside but stays neutral at times. Power progression is slow, but it fits the novel. The mc isn't gonna be fat for long and doesn't think like a fat person either if you're wondering since that was a concern to me at the beginning.

    This is a top tier novel in my books, the depth of character for a novel is great, characters feel like they're real people especially Michael. The imperfection of his character as a person and the choices he makes make the novel feel real. It felt very tedious to read this novel at times because I can relate to the people in the story. This novel is different and might feel repetitive after chapter 50 to some. It's very different from the typical novels on this site, a lot of other novels feel like copy and paste novels when you put them side by side with this one. I had to drop at around 200 because the mc is too nice and loathes human experimentations, he has too many boundaries that he's afraid to break even though he's very bold, his character is somewhat contradictory. anyways this novel is not for me, but I feel like it would be someone else's favorite soon so give it a chance
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      doesn't think like a fat person

      Fat persons think different?
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        Food?
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          Like every jp mc?
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          Hahahaa
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        I'd assume that obesity would make life very sedentary and encourage lazy habits. But I'm not obese so who knows lol
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          Look like cause and effect mixed up. Obese appear with lack of movement or some illness. So most time you should be lazy at first to be fat.
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            That's completely wrong, obesity itself is an illness. There was a study done to prove this. On two identical twins, one being obese and the other normal size, gut bacteria was taken from the obese twin and implanted into one rat from a set of identical twin rats. The result was that the rat that was implanted with the bacteria also became obese after having that bacteria even though both rats were consuming the same number of calories.

            But going back to my earlier comment, I was saying that whether your fat because of eating or whatever reason there might be. The increased difficulty of movement for a fat person encourages lazy habits. I'd also imagine fat people think differently because of the discrimination they face. It would affect their self-esteem and mindset. I just did a little research and according to University of Pennsylvania researchers, fat people are stereotyped as “lazy, incompetent, unattractive, lacking willpower and to blame for their excess weight.”
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              When i wrote "illness" i meant situation when person do everything right (calorie control, physical activity, gym) and still get more weight or don't lose it. So when i wrote about "lack of movement", it was about situation when income and consume energy not balanced and excessive get stored but it can be loosing with increasing energy consume.
              How much excessive weight we are talking about? +30 kg or +100? It's all obese but different stages and have different reasons.

              I'm can't disagree with your comment if we talk about illness and really bad cases like extremely obese on body mass index. If we talk about mild obese it not so bad neither in social aspect nor health. When i answer your previous comment i was think about second option because mc could run in the start of story and only negative aspect of his body was unprepared to physical activity.
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        skyvino
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        I cant see my DD when PP?
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      + 01 -
      He changes, pick it back up
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    apenas vá em frente welldone
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    + 43 -
    Where is the sigma male tag🗿
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    Read 10 chapters... And the conclusion is this - Remember those countless short stories in this genre, and third-rate characters, somewhere on the periphery of the protagonist. Arrogant, greedy, causing negative emotions. The fate of which is to die, and cleanse the world of dirt. Well, the main character of this story is such a character. Kill just because you're fat and the weak link? Please. And then a few chapters to justify themselves with stupid excuses. With a character like that, you wouldn't want to deal with anything, especially taking on your team. He is sure to stab you in the back, puffing his pig snout and remaining pleased.
    The backstory justifying such a sociopathy is completely absent from him. An ordinary office, overweight employee who spends his free time reading novels. After a couple of days in another world, kills more than two people. Okay, let's say the first murder was justified. But the rest? Greed, greed... Everything is mine, everything belongs to me (oink). And he is all so special of himself, content with the fact that the extras moved only after ten days (not believable). Well, that's all for now, let's see what happens next. But like I said, the protagonist is just a nasty character who will even kill his own mother for promotion...
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      Ok, to play devil's advocate this is pretty much how a speedrunner would do his playthrough. He kills off unnecessary risks and doesn't worry about morality.
      If you think about everything looking like a game and he's taking an immense risk every time it makes sense for him to try to reduce it. You're talking about morality but you don't know what you would do if you got in situation like this. Probably die.
      P. S. Seeing how he's the only one who found slimes seems strange but it's actually not. 1st batch had not so many people and most stayed in the plaza, with not much of people knowing about basic RPG knowledge due to age so idk. There is some plot armour but if there's none people complain about MC being bullied.
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    I just finished it and really enjoyed this one a lot. Does anyone have any recommendations for one that is similar?
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    Am up to the current chapter (80) and am very much enjoying things. There is very little filler and only a few chapters here and there which switch between multiple different characters POV and give you some insight into them. It's a good way to do things imo, as they are extremely infrequent, which doesn't take away the focus from MC, and the multiple different ones in each of these types of chaps means you get a good view of what multiple people are like/doing without spending too much time on any of them.

    As others have mentioned, the MC does become kinda sociopathic, but his reasoning behind his actions is always explained and does make sense, given the circumstances. He is smart, able to recognise things that he can't/shouldn't do, able to stay focused on his path but also acknowledge that he makes mistakes and sometimes doing things in a different way might have been better.

    The system itself is pretty minimal tbh and is really only accessible when at the store. It does give some very basic information to the users, such as how to use the store and how skills work, but theres no explanations for anything, so no clue what the stats actually do. They have to work them out by themselves. There's no jobs, missions/quests, titles, levels etc.

    Overall I would highly recommend this novel. Its so good to have an MC like this where, even if you don't agree with their actions, you can clearly understand why they took them and agree with their reasoning behind the decisions made.
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      Gott-höchste
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      protagonist is still fat?
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        Nope.
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        He now has abs
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    Good. MC is pretty sociopathic, but it’s realistic considering his starting position and beliefs.

    He’s a bit extreme, which can get chuuni in his speeches, but it’s overall entertaining.

    I wish progression sped up a bit, but the layout of the situation they’re in is interesting
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    as of ch 70
    you can expect a mc that sticks to the definition of antihero/evil, he wants to stay ahead of the curve and survive in a f#cked up world and he wont allow common sense to stop him, for more details
    , to avoid betrayal and other human issues mc fights alone, he has no reason to kill anyone unless you cross his path with dubious intentions.
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    I’ll walk the plank to venture into the abyss. Wish me luck men. For where I’m going only darkness reigns
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      result?
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        7.5/10
        Mc is a bit sociopathic. As the story begins we see him as a tad pragmatic and realistic but not emotionless or edgy and that. A mature guy with no delusions of granduer. He is an actual person and with a relatable level of intellect and thought process. Shows more common sense and competence than SIs with plot knowledge and shounen MCs with mithril plot amour and lady-luck-is-my-bitch fortune( I’m comparing him to trash but let me rant a bit… am i the only one who just gets disgusted by these gary stu spawn of nonsense characters??). Mc also has a pretty good sense of humor. Progression is neither slow nor fast and there is no filler content or waste of space words.
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