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Super Necromancer System by John_Doever

In a world full of caped superheroes, supervillains, and monsters, Aldrich is worthless. 95% of... Read more
In a world full of caped superheroes, supervillains, and monsters, Aldrich is worthless. 95% of humanity has evolved to develop superpowers, but Aldrich is one of the rare few that has no powers at all.

Because of his lack of powers, Aldrich suffers relentless bullying and discrimination. Society looks down on him as a burden. He is reminded everyday that he is better off dead than alive.

Yet one day, at the height of his despair, after Aldrich is spat on, beaten, and broken, when it seems like everything is taken from him, a familiar screen appears in front of him: a screen from his favorite fantasy role playing game giving him the chance to wield the power he has only ever dreamed of.

[Welcome, Host. Choose your Class:]
[Class: Necromancer selected]

Watch as Aldrich rises from weak to strong.

From suffering to finding vengeance.

From standing alone to commanding undead legions.

From mere man to Lord of Death itself. Collapse
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    História e desenvolvimento de personagem bastante interessante, lutas muito boas, estou gostando bastante
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    On e the worst novels i have ever read. The mc here being evil feel like forced and it just creeps me out.
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    Really only thing that made me drop this was when mc said he would kill innocents if it’s for greater good. I don’t really prefer bad mcs but if there’s a logical reason for how they are it’s fine, but MCs past is being a innocent who was just harmed by people stronger than him, and now he would be willing to hurt those who are innocent on purpose since it would benefit the greater good (which overall is pretty subjective tbh)

    Overall it just seemed hypocritical and didn’t make sense to me of how he would develop to think that way, Only way I could think of is him becoming a necromancer changing him but I don’t really think otherwise there’s logical reason for him developing this way
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      i personally find those mc's more exciting because they differ from the same old 'righteous' characters, but thats my opinion ig
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        Yea I’m the opposite but my point here was more not that the mc is bad because he is evil but more that it’s imo unlogical of how he developed to be that way according to his past.
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          need a reason to be mean?
          let's be honest almost all romance has no justification donmc fair, like "I'm good because my parents will teach me honest values..." sometimes it doesn't need a reason, and there will always be selfish, greedy people, etc... that is,
          to be evil doesn't necessarily need a reason
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            If the reason for him being evil, is because he wants wants to be evil, that’s just bad writing (This is according to you saying that he doesn’t need a reason to be mean). Like basically what your saying is that a person who is a normal citizen, doesn’t have to be good in any way, can suddenly have thoughts of wanting to kill everyone and is willing to act on it without any reason or some sort of mental problem, just because they want to? That shouldn’t happen, and if it does is has to be something from their past or some sort of mental problems. But again my point that mc doesn’t have much reason to develop in the way of the killing innocents for his goals stands.
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              I still agree with my thinking, without a figure to teach you right and wrong, you can be bad, and you can even be born like this, it doesn't matter if you're good, for me we are born neutral and the world makes us change, change can't even always be like bullying or something like that, you can just have an idea like "I'm shperior to others" and making people around disagree generating conflicts...
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                Yea we can have our own opinions, I respect yours and stuff and I’m pretty sure they are similar. Problem is that idk but are u a non native English speaker because its kinda difficult to understand what your points are and i think with the auto translate my point is coming across wrong to you so this is sorta awkward for us to argue because when you say your points I agree but don’t understand how to relates to what I said.
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                  yes i'm sorry but i can't improve the writing
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                  Its alright
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      Using lesser Evil to stop a greater Evil is indeed still Evil, but preventing someone from committing Evil is also considered a Good act, so its very contradicting on how you depict MC's personality when what if the only way to save the world is to sacrifice others, you wouldn't be able to do it unless you have resolve like MC here, its like the trolly problem, you would choose to do the lesser evil for the greater good, you would choose for 1 person to die rather than 5

      Anyway this is just my opinion and i decided to write this since webnovel updates are not yet uploaded here huhu T_T
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    Cornbringer
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    Has no one noticed the image is of the Diablo 3 male necromancer?
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    Zhongdong
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    #panic# chap 140 missing!
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      Frogtank
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      It's in the comments of the next chapter.
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    As of chapter 132

    The story is interesting and kept me engaged, however the pacing is frustrating. The story is overly edgy. The characters tend to speak in mini-monologues, regardless of how pressing the situation.

    The necromancer power balance is stupid, he can only have a handful of undead, but they are all OP. The main character isn't very intellectual, preferring to act tough rather than understand his own powers.

    There is some romance, but it's completely one sided and used mostly as comedy relief.

    The story pulls from a lot of interesting tropes (magic, mega corps, cyber punk, superpowers, walled cities attacked by monsters...) but only does an average job of building a world from that.
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    This mc was killed by another author in "Infinite Mana in the Apocalypse" in chapter 1299 iirc
    and his system was also stolen!
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      And...?
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      he was killed by the mc of idle gaming system?
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        I don't think so. Eckert mentioned that the SNS is owned by a person named Ezekiel
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      PRIMORDIALS HAVE MANY CHAMPIONS IN DIFFERENT REALITIES IN WHICH MANY CHAMPIONS HAVE SAME KIND OF SYSTEM
      PRIMORDIAL I DON'T REMEMBER NAME BUT SHE HAS MENTIONED TO CHAMPION THAT HE IS STRONGEST AMONG CHAMPION WHO HAVE INVINCIBLE SYSTEM.
      SO I THINK IT IS ALSO SAME FOR OTHER SYSTEMS.
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        WHY ARE WE YELLING
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    I feel like this novel could get away with doing a harem as long as it doesn't infinitely grow
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      Thisisthecat
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      Harems ruin most light novels so preferably no
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    JohnRed
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      Why do I see this comment so much and why do I always see people disliking it?
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        x2 :///
        what a coincidence, I think i just replied a comment of yours in another novel xd
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        Because most people like me like to look at spoilers every once in a while and when u notice that the spoiler u opened has nothing in it u would naturally get pissed. But if it happens several times and you get baited by the same person you would start to feel stupid because of getting tricked which causes you to hate the other person even more.
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    As of chapter 35.
    Start is clichee, useless MC in a world of superpowers with all the bullying that comes with it (i skipped 2-3 chaps in the beginning just because i didnt want to read about another clichee bullied MC)
    Story telling and writing is surprisingly good for a novel that has a 'system' in its title.
    A revenge story which is a Meh for me. Cant get into them really.
    But what really made me stop reading this novel is the concept of heroes and villains. Just heroes and villains i would somehow tolerate, but caped and uniformed heroes? Hell f#cking no, cringy as f#ck. Thank goodness the author didnt call these superpowers 'quirks' or i would die from an aneurism. Again.
    Just cannot bring myself to immerse in a world of superheroes and whatnot
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