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Re: Evolution Online by Yolohy

Re: Evolution Online
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Liam was a nobody, whether it was grades or sports or appearance or social life. Not because he... Read more
Liam was a nobody, whether it was grades or sports or appearance or social life. Not because he didn’t have a brain but because his luck was just that bad. However, everything changed when a mysterious game called 'Evolution Online' was suddenly launched. The world he knew changed upside down!

There was blood, death, and carnage everywhere. While everyone from small companies and big governments scrambled to get a foothold on this mysterious video game, some people’s lives turned for the better and some for the worse.

Liam, unfortunately, being the latter, still somehow ended up at the bottom of the barrel. His insignificant life was squished like an insect and his loved ones were destroyed right in front of him. In the end, he was already dead without ever having a single chance to fight back.

But his story did not end there. Liam found himself returned back to the time before everything began!

Watch as the young man who was once a nobody reaches for the pinnacle of strength and power wreaking havoc on the world that destroyed him once! This time everything will be different! Collapse
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    Qyingying
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    1.0
    The author baits you with a decently written novel (the first 200-210 chapters) then slaps you in the face by turning the mc into a braindead idiot, and then slaps you again by writing one of the dumbest plots developments you'll ever read.
    Let's not even talk about how childish, petty and annoying the mc is.
    do NOT binge this, you WILL regret it.
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      LouiseSR
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      I have one question, did the novel leave the game and finally get to the part of the apocalypse? Or is it still with him fooling around the "game"?
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        Fábio Soares_2
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        ja passou da parte do jogo bem mais do 400 capitulos
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    Mill A.
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    • 3.0
    3.0
    'Wish fulfillment' novel for teenagers that just hit puberty and need to save the damsel in distress.
    To fulfill their dream of being a hero, constantly.

    Rating: 3
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    DarkDaoist
    + 8 ⋅ 0 -
    author likes to escalate issues to the point where either MC can appear OP against weaklings or 'Deus ex Machina' has to come save him every single time.
    MC can only fight NPC mobs and low level players anything stronger he escalates and someone else or something has to come wipe his ass and save him.
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      Raymond Mckendry
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      I hate when story's do that, it trivializes the whole point of video game/system story's.
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    Lizrock69
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    Qué patético y decepcionante eres autor
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    Stygian
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    Is the author on haitus??😓
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    Nyzar
    + 15 ⋅ 4 -
    Sure, this novel has good points, but they just aren't enough to outweigh the dogpiss portions of the show. I'm not going to give a list of pros and cons or try to convince you either way. Try reading it yourself.
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    socram8
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    Não perca o seu tempo lendo isso, a avaliação de 3 estrelas não faz justiça a novel, isso é no máximo 1/5.
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    xynthesis
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    I wanna protect this comment section because 3 star is not justifieable at all if you read to recent chapter you know every plot has its meaning and that's why it's unpredictable, if you want op mc with smooth sailing this isn't for you, mc isn't retard lol, just his experience was rather bland because he's just a nobody in his past life wtf do you mean
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      xynthesis
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      Imagine if I see the star rating and didnt choose to read it I'll miss this good shit
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        xynthesis
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      SeriousReal
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      [im going to repost this since you obviously didnt understand it previously.]

      our issue isnt a tested mc with difficulties. The problem is the mc keeps blindly heading into trouble when it was easily avoided, or predicted.

      Also ignoring a kidnapped maiden for over half of these chapters lowers the mcs respect by more than a few pegs.
      Especially when hes hanging out with her best friend and brother like nothing happend. MC trying to take advantage of someone with an infant mind is also not just a low blow but due to her jellyfish king of tbe universe background, its totally seeking death. These are just some examples his actions doesnt match his 2 lifetime of experience.
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      Nyzar
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      I think you need to remove the author's ball bag from your chin. I'm trying to read comments, and most of them are you tossing the author's salad. This novel will stand or fall based on it's own merit, regardless of your digital fellatio.
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        SeriousReal
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        what are you even trying to say? all i see is a chip on the shoulder claim, and gradeschool genital jokes with an undertone that thinks hes well read.

        Also whomever it may be responsible either author, TL, editor doesnt matter here. Because, dont worry im blaming all of them equally.

        Your comment just proves the brainless nuance that too many truths invokes rebuttal. But i dont have the time to let my comments simmer.
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          rbprocks
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          What else do you expect from a teenager who spends most of his time on twitter.
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      Asaverus
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      Overpowered is literally one of the tags of this novel ...
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    SeriousReal
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    [spoiler alert] but if read you would seriously save time

    one of those novels where one of those women gets kidnapped for 100s of chapters and mc with the initiative of some third world country'S corrupted cop who thinks the kidnapped rich beauty is fine. and found them in dirt and rags. [what a surprise]

    kidnapped victim had stockholm syndrom and wipe MCs team and he had to restart everything all over again, but got himself arrested in the process.
    The story is just a mess with constant added elements that aithor feels obligated to add because of his fan raffle rewards to add new characters. While that is happening author would pepper issues here and there and make a mess. He would later trys to pan it out for the next few chapters while forgetting some ongoing plotholes on the way.

    Thats this novels destructive life cycle
    enjoy.
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      snowflake101
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      Waste/Retard but wilful MC
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        SeriousReal
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        more or less i agree
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      xynthesis
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      Oh, but I don't see a retard here? It's just the plot really cornered mc, if you want a smooth development this is not jt
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        SeriousReal
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        our issue isnt a cornered mc. The problem is the mc keeps blindly heading to corners when it was easily avoided, or predicted.

        Also ignoring a kidnapped maiden for over half of these chapters lowers the mcs respect by more than a few pegs. especially when hes hanging out with her best friend and brother like nothing happend. Him trying to take advantage of someone with an infant mind is not just a low blow but due to its background, its totally seeking death. These are just some examples his execution doesnt match his 2 lifetime of experience.

        if you still dont understand what im saying, i prefer natural difficulties over something stupidly contrived. like a car crashing due to low gas and worn brakes due to speed and terrain over long durations so he travels on foot after a long journey.
        compared to him trying to hit a roadkill for fun and veered off course and still continued off course knowing its a bad idea whens hes been warned to stay on course until he flee off a cliff to land on some beast nest containing convenient treasure etc.
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          PlotThickens
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          Mia Was kidnapped by Angel who literally control the freacking tutorial vr world..How the freak can u rescue someone from them?.They can manipulate the freaking quest so that the mc wont get enough power to fight back just like what they did when the mc almost get enlightenment and the angel just ended the freaking event half way like wtf(Its before the game descend in the real world)..Ignoring the fact about them controlling of the tutorial world the strength of the angels is just of the chart, even if the mc tried to rescue mia he will just fail miserable because mia is in the freaking heaven realm or what not the moment mc step in there he will get 50-70 De-buff because of he Sss-affinity to nether energy while angels get buff based on there affinity to holy energy, mc minions is obviously weak compared to a angel use buffed by the heaven realm plus there ton of angels there not just one ore two even if they lure the angels out of there realm so what? the mc cant do a shit againts the highest ranking angel all he can do is use a freaking soul shield so he wont freaking die a single hit...So its not the mc sont want to resue mia its just literally cant he way to weak...Then about mc taking advantage of the jelly girl the infant mind...let look at this at that giels pov or dad is way too busy even your sister when you try to find friends to play with no one wants to because they are afraid of your status so when the mc just pop out and plays with you wont you feel like hes a good guy and will do anything to keep that relationship?...Its like how we can live with out phone but still need it cuz will be bored to death with out it,so the girl giving gifts is understandable and the mc accepting it is even more so becoz of the constant threat of angels...There also issue about mc heading to blindly to trouble.Yes, the mc experience of two live but you need to remember the mc was a potion making slave most of he's life..What can he know about the world beside when he go out to buy ingredients or when he hear gossips fron fellow slaves but most of the time he's lock up inside a alchemy room to make potion for obvious reasons he's knowledge about the world is few only big enough news that even a slave cannot ignore is known to him so yeah thats that......

          ps.
          Im not saying this ln is great but give it the benefit of the doubt, its not that good but its also not that bad, and people have diffirent preferences so dont be afraid to read it
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            SeriousReal
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            i cant read that, but from what i picked up it needs spoiler tag and all the meaning changes when you input what and when information is released to the reader compared to what the mc should already know that the readers doesnt yet know at the time of reading.

            because readers are newly experiencing a single "time line"
            while MC was given a second chance, may or may not experienced events in the readers current perspective time line during his first time line.
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      Yb48
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      the girl was kidnapped by someone who could easily destroy the world, then are you going to save her without any preparation???
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    Karmic_daoist
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    I read till ch 43 and the novel is absolutely cliche a 3star avg at best.
    But the people below are making a lot of g
    Hype so I'm gonna give it another 60 ch before my review
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      Karmic_daoist
      + 6 ⋅ 4 -
      Read till ch75 but it's just too average and to someone like me, who seeks unique plot

      MTL IS MORE READABLE THAN THIS
      Ill read an interesting story in MTL quality rather then read an avg. Cliche normie shit.
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      xynthesis
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      Bro a novel like paragon sin need 500 hundred for me to even like it, and this? The development not cliche at all, give it at least 200 chaps, but if it's not ur taste nvm
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        Karmic_daoist
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        Thanks fellow daoist I'll give it another try.
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