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Amon, The Legendary Overlord by Lruska

At age 5, Amon unlocks the unique «Fury» genetics and is what caused his behavior to change. After... Read more
At age 5, Amon unlocks the unique «Fury» genetics and is what caused his behavior to change. After living with his grandparents for 11 years he learned to behave. For reasons he can’t know, his grandparents faked their deaths, and now he needed to move. Now he would have to face a new challenge which was to live with his mother and stepfather and two twin sisters not linked by blood and go to school. Collapse
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    Gente que ah visto esta novela es así de buena dígame para verla enserio me dicen que es mala pero prefiero preguntarle alos fieles lectores :v
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    Damn that cover lookin fresh
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      Looks like Murasaki Shikibu from Fate/Grand Order lol
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        Nier из игры automata
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    ponpokona
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    Harem = Noice👌
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    Typical under age overpowered hot headed Main Character with always 2 step sisters. In future chapters I hope that there's no kiss x sis scene here.
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      I guarantee you there will be a kiss x sis scene, and multiple at that.
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      Step sisters don't count
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    greed
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    Review Log #3

    Story: 
    The story involves gene unlocking and advancement. The POV is from the main character, Amon. It shows his journey through life and his advancements and encounters. However, the unique thing about the storey is that Amon is kinda emotionless. He still has rage. (He may unlock more emotions as the story evolves.) (There hasn't been much R-18 so far.)

    Characters:
    Characters are unique to the story; they portray a wide range of emotions and feelings within the story. Each character has a distinct personality. Kinda funny at times.  

    World Building:
    World building is still in its infancy, but the basic bones have been laid out. Such as everyone has an empty or white gene, which they can convert to an elemental gene for stronger power, and once they reach a cap, they can unlock a new gene. Pretty basic currently. 

    Writing:
    Solid writing, barely any errors. It is hard to notice if there are any.

    Overall: 8/10 (9.5/10-if the storey had progressed and kept at this level)
    Give it a read, it's not that bad.
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      MarkieToT
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      Tnx man
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      many thanks.
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    Can someone review this? All the reviews on WN are disappointing (as in they don't give any info regarding the book).
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      You cannot trust most webnovel scores because the author can delete the critical reviews.

      I had so many reviews deleted because they pointed how bad some novels were. Props for those authors who dont delete them.
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