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Azarinth Healer by Rhaegar

A new world with nearly unlimited possibilities. A status, classes, magic and monsters. Sounds... Read more
A new world with nearly unlimited possibilities. A status, classes, magic and monsters. Sounds good? Well, for Ilea it didn’t come quite as expected as for some other protagonists, nor was there a king or god to welcome her.

The grand quest? Well, she might figure that out someday but for now, a new world with new food is prize enough. Her fists at the ready, she’s prepared to punch and get punched, however long it takes and however many limbs she might have to regrow.

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A story I’ve started writing now quite a while ago. Transported to another world, somewhat standard fantasy setting with my beginner attempts to make it dark but funny. There are Litrpg elements here but I do hope it’s not too heavy and annoying. The fights should be interesting and aren’t just numbers vs numbers. Contrary to the title the protagonist will be quite an offensive fighter.

Ilea Spears is your average sarcastic kick-boxing fast food worker and soon to be student. She will be transported to another world rather conventionally and will be confronted with survival in the wild. Collapse
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    • 2.0
    2.0
    Dropped at chapter 46. I kept trying to read more and get to some actual good stuff but the main character turns this novel from a 5/5 to a 1/5.

    One of those "good" main characters that are actually just stupid, naive, and gullible. With morals that get in the way more than anything. She doesn't even apply those morals to herself and seems to not care if people try to kill her or use her against her will for their own benefit.


    This novel makes me want to read about evil protagonists because at least they'll give a sh*t about their own well being.
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      Полностью согласен, начало хорошее, а потом роман скатился в глупый.
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    the author finished the rewrite of the first book, as a result if you start reading or decide to read again the initial part of the story should feel more logical and polished with clearly defined characthers and choices, if you dropped it in the first 100 ch its now a good time to give it a second chance, and remember that old reviews of people who dropped in the early chapters might now be obsolete.
    more infos in the author notice past chapter 895 for any interested
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    2.3
    This is a story I wanted to like, but after 140 chapters I give up and it's largely due to the MC. Early on in the story she tells herself jokes in what felt like a coping mechanism to keep her sane since she was thrown into a dangerous new world and was alone for months. Then the first time she goes into a town she buys so much food because she was eating the same thing for months and finally had choices. This was all great and made sense. Then the author decided these two things were going to be her defining traits and the extent of her personality.

    Is she in a dangerous situation and the people around her are telling her to be serious so they don't all die? Too bad. She's going to continue to goof off and make jokes, then get annoyed at the others for being too serious. Has it been more than 5 paragraphs without her eating? Better stop what's going on so she can eat. It's explicitly stated anyone at her level of strength can go days without eating, but even if they're in that dangerous situation, she's going to pester her teammates for food because the person with crack level addiction to food didn't bring any, further pissing them off. She is a caricature of herself and people who reached 600+ said she is a caricature in even more ways. The more the MC was in a chapter, the more pissed off I'd be at the end.

    So many of the side characters are uninteresting and the story is basically non-existent. Most of them have one personality trait or thing and that's it, just like the MC, while a few have more to them then that and are interesting. Sadly, most of the interesting characters were introduced in the first 50 chapters and it seems like the author went for quantity over quality after that. As for the story she goes to a place, fights things, gets stronger until she can't get stronger quickly, gets bored, and moves on to the next place. And the "interesting hooks" of the story are told so vaguely that I question if the author even bothered thinking up a story to work towards. There's local issues she has to resolve that gets a bit more thought, but the overarching story is hinted at with as much substance and precision as a fortune cookie.

    If you have nothing else to read or want junk food you can shut your brain off while reading, I suppose you can do worse, but you can definitely do better. Also, desperately needs a competent editor. Grammar, spelling, etc. swings from a 2/10 at times to a 6/10 at best and many of the issues present in the early chapters, even after supposed heavy editing, were still present over 100 chapters in.
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      IEmberI
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      Согласен. Если опустить то, как она занимается хернёй и жрёт можно было сократить всё минимум на 200 глав.
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    Pls
    More chapters
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    is there romance? is this yuri?
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      She had a couple of flings with some dudes spread across hundreds of chapters, and around the 600s I reckon, she starts a semi-relationship with another gal.
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    a little more detail on the R 18 would be interesting
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    "WE RUN THE WORLD" vibes, all over the novel.
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    Idc if the Mc is female, it's great to see more main characters of the opposite gender, but portraying all the male characters as dumb, weak or evil pisses me off so this novel can go f#ck itself.
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      Read the whole novel there's a ton of strong and intelligent male too as well as some dumb and weak female bitch*s, just read the whole book before saying that
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    Daoist_Shub
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    Someone just needs to take all this top Female lead novels which are actually good and make a remake to male lead story.
    Since most of us boys don't read female led protagonist.
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      I went to down vote... turns out I already did it.
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        I went to down vote... turns out I already did it, too.
        Then I went to upvote you... guess what? I already did.
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      Wtf is wrong with some people?
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      You sir clearly did not think before writing this
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        Which makes it worse, because this is unfiltered straight from his brain, therefore what he actually thinks.
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          Fafla
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          Why are you all booing him. He just expressed his opinion. And I do agree with him that I don like female Mc novels. So?
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            1 its shit and so stupid and with how he thinks from what we see he is a harem lover the one with tits for brains harem lover
            2 btw if ya reading this comment and your Daoist_Shub I'm Male so think before you type at least on the internet you can fix your shit if you miss type like this i should of deleted the second part to this comment
            3 and for "Since most of us boys don't read female led protagonist." you are so dam wrong and people who read novels like this are people who like anime and it does not matter if the MC is male or female if it has a good story progression then it is good but most if not all harem novels get so dam stupid its was never funny
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      ah yes, lets also turn all good male leads novels into female leads, Kazuma is screaming for gender equality right now
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    как я понел из комментов что тут гг девушка но автор убивает всех мужских персонажей и логику и смотря что есть некоторые которые яро защищают этот роман то ешо больше не хочется читать
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      I eyed ghoul
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      ?? Could you please translate that not all of us read Russian
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        Just use google translate but anyway it says: as I understood from the comments that there is a girl here, but the author kills all the male characters and logic, and despite the fact that there are some who vehemently defend this novel, then I don’t want to read it anymore
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