Dysfunctional - An Assassin's Guide to Reincarnating in Another World by Aimdaqs

I tried reading this novel but i couldn't make it past chapter 6, i can't even write a review on it, or give it a score since i read so little, but my distaste for the way the author writes became too much for me to not say anything. The target audience for this novel is for people in their teens, 12 year olds will definitely enjoy this novel, because the mc seems to be as socially anxious as any nerdy teen. Which makes no sense btw, because the mc is supposed to be a trained assassin. Being socially awkward would be understandable, after all, what he did for a living was stab people. However, having social anxiety is a whole different matter, and conflicts with his assassin identity. Every line of dialogue, every interaction, the mc second guesses himself, or berates himself, or reprimands himself for something he said or did, and this happens constantly. He's constantly giving a review of all his actions all the time, which makes reading this novel extremely exhausting. The mc is also the narrator, so we're just stuck in his annoying pathetic nerdy mind that won't shut up. It's likely that he won't reprimand himself as much in the future and will open up some more to people, but at the core of it, this style of writing will most likely not stop, since this seems to be the author's self-insert, only given an assassin background for flavoring. Also...translucent hair...this man just made himself half-bald for no reason(the author probably doesn't see it that way, but almost everyone else does) and chose it as a mutation before reincarnating. I can't even. In conclusion, the author's writing style is not for me. This is not a review, just a personal comment on the novel, don't let me stop you from reading it, after all, i only read 6 chapters.

Is mc really a professional assassin?
he almost died a thousand times if not for his healing

It kinda turned me off when the main cast have turned into "illegal drugs in my country" marijuana, I think they have addiction so beware for the others

He's like deadpool

it was good until multiple chapters switched from character to character for ages.

God i have been reading this for a year on that hellhole Quidan(webnovel app) with fastpass finally for free
Review I'll say
Plot 3.5
Characters 5
Story 4
Action 4
Romance 4
Chapter length 4
Overall 4.3/5 i love it

ohhh this one huh.. I remember reading this a while ago. Never got past chapter 50 because of the paywall but It was good. I'll update this after i catch up.