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I Become Karna With a Million Times Crit System In Mahabharata by ForManaga

This is the story about boy named Karan getting recarnatated in the time of Mahabhrata as a Karna.... Read more
This is the story about boy named Karan getting recarnatated in the time of Mahabhrata as a Karna. Biggest war at that time.

What will happen if he become karna in it?

What will happened if as a boon he ask System?

What will happen if he get to meet those characters? Is he able to chnage their destiny or it will turn worse?

Let's find out what will happen when he born into age of God's. Do he able to achieve what he wanted to or something else's.

What if this world is as not as simple as he thought, Let's find out.

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(Note: I find that there is no mahabhart time novel with system. So I decided that take that task on myself and introduce system in the age of God's.)


Disclaimer: Remember this is fanfiction of Mahabhrata. Not "Orignal" Mahabhrata. I have no intention to harm anyone's religious belief, I am just writing what if story in my perspective. If you don't like it, So i kindly request you not read any further, and if you do take it with a pinch of salt.

Also, remember I don't have any intention to hurt anyone's belief. This is a fictional story with taken little source material from the epic with my creative touch.

Karna is going to be super Over Powered in this story. Collapse
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    I have a request to the author, bro please don't try any fan fiction of the Mahabharat.

    I also like to clarify that God himself is present there to lead the Mahabharata, I know how everyone feel about Karna, but there also a story related to birth of karna, that is actually in his previous life he was a Great demon who was blessed by Lord Bhrama with 1000 divine armors for his Bhakti, after which the 999 divine armors are destroyed by Nar and Narayana in battle by taking turns due to the power of divine armor which last for a more some million years and there is also a restriction on destroying the armors that they can be destroyed at a time and also can only do in fixed interval of time, the last armor was given to Surya Dev by the demon and that same divine is the one Karna has, also Nar and Naryana in Mahabharat is Arjuna and Krishna, The whole motto Mahabharat is to show how a person should live and also how to respond and learn, how to deal with different life situations .
    Another important thing is that the Mahabharata war is to gather all those that belong to evil and does harm Dharma are gather on one side and on the other side God himself came down as Krishna to maintain Dharma on earth. You see Mahabharat is not story it is real and please reconsider your opinion on further proceeding of novel.

    Atleast read the whole Mahabharata once to understand, and then proceed further.

    It is a sincere request.
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      For clarification on above comment about Karna previous birth inot mentioned in Mahabharat it is mentioned in other puranas.so each everything is interlinked.
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    It was a good novel in beginning till chp-100 but I'm tired of this novel. whoknows

    Author is dumb don't know how to manipulate plot. His just making everything up without thinking about consequences. And so many chapters has been passed and Mc is ignored like he'll become some almighty god after waking up while making everything under control. warmly 4

    Author is really following chinese young master theory here where everything bend according to MC making all plot seems dumb as everything will be according to MC even with butterfly effect.

    Plot of marriage came author forgot about 4 Femal childhood friends as father friend and king of empire comes for asking MC's hand for daughter, making it 6 women and MC doesn't even know about this pressure puke
    Then instead of finishing this other plot starts where MC get a BOW and with system trigger hia again sleeping while other people are fighting for making him student and others trying to kill him making everything look dumb. ohno wet

    And please also take note of lengthy thinking process of every character and extra plots author wrote. It's just wasting a potential novel like this i really want to beat him kiaa 31

    If you're going for hindu mythology please don't ruin it while making other please look dumb to make Mc look OP what
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      + 01 -
      Do you know any novel with Hindu mythology
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    Is this thing worth reading
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    + 131 -
    writes a novel set in indian mythology

    has random white edgelord in cover

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      + 18 -
      👆 Skin-color obsessed loser troll57
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        + 11 -
        Bro is Indian, Bro thinks he is white Indian
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      + 01 -
      It's Fgo Karna, or at least fan art of him
      (Fgo Arjuna looks Indian, so I think it's to make them opposites since they're rivals, then again it's Nasu we're talking about so who knows?)
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    Huh, it has the harem tag, my fellow pirates, how long do you think it will take the author to receive death threats and stop posting.
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    Interesting concept by the writer, though what is with the abandoned children tag?
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      In the Mahabharata, Karna was the oldest brother of Pandavas, but her mother abandoned him because he was born by accident involving the Incantation of Summoning the Sun God by Rishi Durvasa. This accident made her pregnant with the child of the Sun God while she was unmarried. On the day he was born, he was put in a basket and Kunti let the basket adrift on the Ganges River. The basket was later found by his foster parents
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    Hmm 🤔 system in Mahabharat... Nah I will pass don't want this weirdos to ruin culture somehow

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      + 21 -
      Isn't every Xianxia basically fanfiction of Chinese mythology?
      and there's a lot of novels/settings where greek gods and norse gods are around, hell even the Abrahamic religions, examples: Percy jackson, Dxd, The Dresden files, World of Darkness, DC, Marvel ect.
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      What culture? Shitting in the streets?
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    How do etheopians celebrate their kids first birthday? They put flowers on their graves
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      + 32 -
      please never stop doing this. love these kind of jokes.
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      Why did the hyperbole become a stand-up comedian at the graveyard? Because it wanted to make dead serious jokes that were a grave exaggeration!
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        + 20 -
        God wanted to spice the earth with jokes, and he made your kind
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          Wow, you make me emotional like that. I never thought I was so special that God needed to create a kind for me to exist. But it's a shame that yours parents made a mistake by having you, they didn't use enough contraceptives.
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            + 11 -
            Lil bro is mad peepo020
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              + 02 -
              Nah, he started insulting me in several other comments, I just returned it in kind.
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