The First Store System by pinaka_

I couldn't handle 1 chapter, it was a mess

I wouldn't read this story. In like 100 or 200 chapters the mc gets a virtual world where one can grow limitless and it takes like more than half of the story and it's really annoying. The part of the story is complete shit for me so I skipped it. All his customers just come for this virtual world so instead of calling it the first store I would call it World simulator or something

#panic# Missing chapters 726, 837, 839-852

I left it at 500 now I'm starting again a lot has piled up

I made it to Chapter 207. The first 30ish chapters are the best part of those chapters. The MC has ZERO emotions when talking to anybody except the system or his cat. I don’t mean a cold MC he’s just blank.. “expressionless” is exactly how every paragraph describes him. The only times he’s “forced” to show emotion it’s anger, annoyance, or rage. I enjoyed the world building and how some of the characters try to interact with the MC but his actions are just so excessive or contradictory that it makes it impossible for me to continue reading. Without any specific spoilers, he once said it was too demeaning of him to pick up a sword from the ground, then proceeded to knock a teammate unconscious and then take their sword. Even just trying to read this with your brain off is difficult but if you think you can deal with such an MC then I think you could enjoy the novel. You’ll know whether or not you can deal with him in the first few chapters after ~30. Should also note that I liked the system aspect of the book. This novel has a unique take on systems and thought it was a cool switch up from other system stories I’ve read.

is there romance?
If yes, how many chapters does it take to start?

The moment he left the void to open the shop on this planet it became really bad …

not good enough to avoid the typical sxist female mutilations. not telling them to write about males being beat up and raped by musky bandits to compensate, but at least make it less imaginary and more realistic. if the world is all around bad, there arevworsr things that can happen regardless of gender. novel has no direction, and interest is only hold through anticipation in hopes of something interesting to happen but contents rnding up unsatisfying . the perspective window from the author is offputting, barbaric and 3rd world.

Gave it 100 chapters; while this novel doesn't enter my top 10 I can safely say it's been a good read so far. It's uniqueness is similar to that of reading Top Tier Providence after reading the same cultivation novel 100 times over. I would say this is more of a niche novel for those veteran readers looking for itch that just normal Xuanhuan novels can't fill anymore.

I thought that the first few chapters were excellent and was hoping that this would be the majority of the plot, something as a MC being a dark hand type. Little disappointed as we went into phase 2 of the store. While I would give Top Tier Providence a 4.8 stars, I would give this a 3.8 so far. I wouldn't describe the feel of the plot so far being polished. This being said, I will binge it and it's good enough of a series to commit to reading the daily releases. Also, while there is no romance tag, it seems like it's no romance the same way that '80 Years Of Signing-In At The Cold Palace' started off with no romance.

The novel is good but it's kinda annoying to me about the too much secrecy, it always feels to me like he is some kind of pawn in some people's games.And it pisses me off