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Journey Towards Dao by SleeplesslyDreaming

What is infinite, possessing no beginning nor end?

What is imperceptible, appearing both... Read more
What is infinite, possessing no beginning nor end?

What is imperceptible, appearing both indistinct yet intelligible?

What is indecipherable, unable to be interpreted or understood?

What is quintessential, unfathomable, eternal?

What is Dao?

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The main focus of this story is detailed cultivation, professions, and combat systems. It's a slice-of-life with a cultivation system that delves into psychological aspects (including minor psychopathic/sociopathic elements). Protagonist is the low-key sort. Be prepared for a slower start.

This is my first ever experience writing fiction. I'm trying my best to put out quality content initially, but my main goal is to improve. Comments, ratings, and reviews are greatly appreciated!

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    Hello my fellow daoists, how is the "Journey Towards Your Dao"

    Basically : is this novel good or nah?




    Sorry.... can't help it. Bad pun.
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    At 58 chapters putting on review,

    MC who is reincarnated was an really old man at Age of 87 put into to baby,

    Acts as a baby for sake of his parents & is later found out

    After this when his older brother of this life is facing problems due to him being reason he tends to ignore and acts like narcissistic asshole suddenly which was never defined first that he will have narcissistic tendencies, while he is really trying to be a family in the life.

    This really puts me off, as he says like i don't want to handle children in this life, while clearly a side character is dedicated to follow around him (for sake of 3 answers lol) and he goes with it, but when his older brother needs help, Welp not my problem

    What the fudge is the character development, if this is his behavior due to the nature of dao, should have explain it earlier, so i can feel to continue reading .

    While the world building shown is really superfluous, stakes that are brewing behind are not clearly elaborated, i.e. if final boss is moving in behind the scenes, the stakes are not mentioned just says be careful, but to readers please elaborate the consequence of offending such entity

    The parents and grandparents are like do not trust anyone in the sect, no sharing details, be warned of sect leader, but here MC and party are mingling happily with Senior Brother and Sister, Hugging and celebrating birthday, while INNOCENT KID getting more and more playful, and all the fudging chuckling

    LIKE every chapter will have atleast 10 "chuckling" added when some characters interacts,
    NO AUTHOR NO
    people do not chuckle always when they meet, even in fantasy, smile, nodded, annoyed, expressionless, deadpan face, are more than enough, when i am fudging cultivating i do not have time to chuckle ill feel aggrieved when a KID comes up

    Sorry for the rant, is don't wanna blame just wanna have somewhere to have my feeling poured out, anyone who wanna read this just take this as a grain of salt, that there will be lot of CHUCKLING AND NARCISSISTIC MC
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      Sounds awfully like supreme magus, where MC who was clever beyond his age never tried to connect with his elder brother even though he was mean to him (even though he should be mad at his parents who has zero birth control when they were dirt poor, he started work when he was just a child and did not get much food after MC started cultivating mana and needed food more than his age), dropped that shit around chapter 20 when his family started dick riding MC, marginalizing elder brother in the process.
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    Did I hear lowkey
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    • 4.8
    4.8
    hmm read it till 55 and i must say it was good tho it could do with a bit more action... i almost fell asleep due the explanations in one of the chapter.
    so far only one chinese name thats old lu

    the cultiators in this are similar in behavior to that of "the rise of the demonic sword"
    erratic behavior and influenced by their 'laws' or in this case 'dao path'
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    Well... is it good?
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      The description sounds like something cultivation novels require
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      + 03 -
      read my commet above urs
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