Pause System: Harem In The Apocalypse by Renovator

Trash author
Trash mc
Trash plot back n forth ...very confusing
Random backlash in the middle of battle... ...very confusing
Trash status

Fuxk

The story is so confusing

That's quite a long time...

Un peu intéressant , un peu ennuyeux. Vers le chapitre 131 on commence vraiment à s'ennuyer. Une chose qui m'énerve , MC est un gars antisocial pourtant c'est lui qui chope toute les belles filles . Il n'a même pas de capacités rendant compréhensible ce fait tels que l'aura de pêche ,charme sss ou encore 4eme mur rendant cool .une chose encore est qu'il a trop de limiteurs et que ses capacités le blesse trop, c'est chiant à la fin .tout ce qui est un peu intéressant ce sont ses relations xxx

- The protagonist's ability is so unique; neither weak nor overpowered but depends on how you use it. It's actually the thing that's keeping me to continue reading this novel
- The world background and the story development seems forced and rushed. I understand the whole labyrinth thing and world invasion but it was forced so the story can progress and it seems like someone cleared all the floors. Also still didn't tell the name of the horned beasts and casually avoided it.
- There's also the typical leveling system and a system only unique to the protagonist. Several beautiful and strong women randomly appears out of nowhere then meets the protagonist adding to his harem
Overall: Well written with sometimes a slow and fast paced progression. The story is nice and amazing fight scenes, but it looks like the MC is always forced to fight something and no time to train. The last second saving cliches and the sudden strength improvement(plot armor) I didn't really like it but I guess after volume 1 the progression tones down a bit in order to understand the whole apocalypse thing.

Generic, basic story. So predictable and bland characters waste of time. Girls are copy paste dick slobbers. Author deletes low ratings too.

Well... We still have about 9 months... So I'll wait if it truly happens then I'll read the novel.

if you ignore the protagonist who is weak you might find this story interesting

One word. Underwhelming. Writing is underwhelming, sometimes too fast paced, sometimes too slow, a mess. Things are predictable and the action is too, with the power system literally being a system for everyone I guess and like aliens that are evil or aren't it's all a forgettable collection of words. I would just recommend the author drop this and/or improve their writing style for their next project that hopefully doesn't include a system, the system subgenre is oversaturated with mediocre already and doesn't really fit with anything that isn't vrmmo novels. Writers really shouldn't try powers like time if they can't do more simple things, even great writers will make time powers confusing like Araki who does Jojo when he made King Crimson. So TLDR, boring power, boring harem, messy story, bad writing. 1/10
edit:before you hate on me remove bias from your brain

I haven't read the book yet. I just want to know. Does the MC have the ability to pause time or something. Cause yes its the name but light novels have lied to me before in its MCs power.