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What's going on, I can't send it out.
It takes at least 100 words for the chapter to be issued, so it seems that it will not be able to complete the work. (Dog head saves life）
Although the three-character testimonials on the shelves are very beautiful, Wukong still has a lot to say to everyone, and he can't finish the three-character testimonials at all..
First of all, thank you all for your support! Those who read this are all my half-brothers and sisters.！
This is my second book, indeed my second book as a human being. I have never changed my vest, and even if I delete thousands of words, I have never seen a situation. I can't post a book if I vote internally. I pay attention to one..
The last book can be said to be very sentimental. In many places, I look back and think“ "How can I write like this here” and “Oh, isn't it scolding to write like this”" Even at that time, I hadn't determined my own style, and it seemed that the style of writing and the plot were particularly inconsistent..
At that time, I had just started writing a book, and I was still in a confusing stage where I felt that “I was pretty good”. Later, I gradually discovered that the writing was too bad. In fact, the exposure booklet was full, and it was really my own problem that was too big..
After accepting the reality, he thought hard, scanned the list carefully, studied the works of the big guys, revised them repeatedly, and began to write a second book..
I didn't set any expectations for this book at the beginning. I just hope to make progress over the previous book. I will continue to accumulate experience by writing more than 1 million words. As a result, this book is now almost 40,000 collections. I didn't dare to do this in my dreams before. Really, I have to pay attention to one aspect of my dreams, and I can't span too much at once..
However, please rest assured that good grades will not overwhelm my mind. I am too steady to even offer a reward. I am afraid that I will not finish it, and I dare not set up a flag blindly. Poor grades will not affect my mentality. The last book was ordered for more than five books, and the last book was ordered for more. I still finished writing honestly..
In fact, I am very afraid that I will not be able to write a wonderful plot next, and I will disappoint everyone's expectations. There will still be creative bottlenecks in the whole life. I can only try my best to think more every day, find more inspiration, revise more, and strive for support worthy of everyone. I just want to live more and have more sugar. It's impossible to step on the throttle in the main chapter. I've already done a good job (save my life).）.
Counting the 700,000 words of the old book and the current more than 100,000 words of this book, I have only written more than 800,000 words so far, so many places are still seriously inexperienced, and many places such as writing and writing need to be improved..
The place that needs to be improved most is rhythm. I can feel this problem myself. The gap with the big guys is not generally obvious. For the time being, I can't control the rhythm of flowing clouds and water. It can even be said that my rhythm has a more casual feeling. This problem cannot be completely changed for a while. On the one hand, it is inexperience, and on the other hand, it is that I have not yet realized that point. I will think over and over again, and I will also read and study more when I am writing a book, so as to bring you a better reading experience..
This book is still my sentimental work, and you still need to witness my progress in the future.！
Everyone's opinions and suggestions are very valuable to me. Although I can't change the article according to the ideas of a single reader in many places, I will carefully analyze and consider every suggestion, and I will often be inspired by it. Every suggestion of yours is by no means a waste of your time and mine. They areWill produce value and will have a positive impact on this book.
If you have any suggestions and comments on the Wukong Chapter, please put forward a lot. Although it is difficult to correct the problem immediately, it will let me know the problem and the way to improve it. In the last book, I received a lot of valuable suggestions and finally determined my style..
I have watched the interstitial posts for a long time, and I peep at the screen in the background with high intensity. One of my great pleasures every day is to watch the interstitial posts in the background..
Thank you very much, Sister Yixi. When I opened the book, Yi Wukong was helping me read the manuscript. Obviously, she was very busy. As long as Wukong looked for her, she would reply to the news soon. Although I don't know if she can see it, I still have to shout again: "Sister Xi will always be a god."！
Special thanks to PORO ONG, my author friend, who has given me a lot of guidance from the beginning to the present. He helped me point out many problems that I didn't realize. It's really difficult for brothers and sisters to support each other. If he hadn't helped me read the text, it is estimated that many places in this book would be scolded. He pointed out many logic bugs, hard plots, and unreasonable places for me..
PS, feedback from yesterday's small survey：
Regarding the ratio of the campus and Shadow World articles, there are more readers who support 1 to 2 or 1.5 to 1 and 1 to 1..
First of all, explain that the proportion of the plot will not be completely fixed according to the ratio of Wukong School, but will eventually be flexibly adjusted according to the development of the actual plot..
I analyzed the reasons for making this choice among the two readers and friends who like 1 to 2 and 1.5 to 1..
Friends who support “More Shadow Worlds” want to see more of the protagonist's underworld operations, so if the space of Shadow worlds is not greatly increased, a feasible solution is to make the protagonist's operations more underworld in the real world. Although the protagonist of Wukong in the real world will have a bottom line, Wukong also has some enemies that do not need to consider the bottom line when dealing with them. In addition, there will be persecution characters. As the map becomes larger, there will always be a few reckless people who don't know whether to live or die..
While friends who support “more campus plots” may prefer relaxed and enjoyable plots, they also need real-world stories to set off the underworld of the shadow world. There is also a feasible solution, that is, to increase the interaction of characters in the shadow world. The first copy looks too stand-alone, due to the small number of challengers participating, and the protagonist's companions did not appear..
So the current few ideas for producing orangutans are：
①The campus chapter focuses on more card-making and battle (underworld) plots
②The Movie World chapter focuses on character communication, avoiding the feeling of stand-alone in terms of plot, and bringing it closer to the real world.
③The frequency of alternation of the two chapters makes the combination of the two more natural.
④Sister card upup
If you have any suggestions, you can give me feedback through inter-posts and comments.！
Due to be on the shelves tomorrow, the more time will be around 11 a.m., and it will be restored to 7 a.m. in the future..
Thank you all for your support over the past year, thank you very much! I wish you all a good mood every day～
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