Chapter 653: update: Sorry, this is becoming frequent |
Okay, after reading some comments I edited the last chapter. (Editing deletes paragraph comments. I did not manually delete them.)
First, I cut down the fight between Miles and Prowler from 'minutes on end' to just a minute before Peter intervened. And I also made it clear that Miles was on the winning side before it ended.
Second, I removed the part where Miles gets pissed at Peter for hurting the Prowler. I made it so he just checks on him and sees that he's unconscious.
And third, I made small edits to try and make it smoother to read but Idk. It seems fine to me. Hopefully, It's all good. 😊
Anyway, see yah 👋
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