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My Fate System by MellowGuy

[You have used 100 Lost Souls to summon an undead.]

‘Change probability,’ Nikolai used... Read more
[You have used 100 Lost Souls to summon an undead.]

‘Change probability,’ Nikolai used his powers of fate and increased probability. The giant black box in front of him began rotating, and golden cracks appeared as another undead joined his army.

[You have obtained the Dullahan of Wrath (Lvl. 1)]

Nikolai grinned and clenched his fist in excitement. With this monster joining his undead army, he’ll have an easier time getting the Legendary Skill.

[Warning!]

[Consume one Living Soul or suffer the consequences.]

The system stole his joy and sought to remind him that he was no longer human. Nikolai sighed and looked at himself in the mirror. He stopped being human the moment he awakened. Now, he needed to devour humans to stay alive.

Humans and gods alike hated him. Collapse
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    skyvino
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    What’s the Difference Between Fate and Destiny? (Don’t Get Them Confused!)

    What Is Fate?
    Fate is based on the notion that there is a natural order in the Universe which cannot be changed, no matter how hard we try.


    What Is Destiny?
    Fate is outside of your control. However, you can shape destiny with your choices. Why? Because destiny is your future. Coming from the Latin term destinare, which means intended or firmly established, destiny hasn’t already been determined. Therefore, the changes that you make will affect your destiny in life.


    https://grammar.yourdictionary.com/vs/difference-between-fate-and-destiny-meaning-and-use.html
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      Y cuál es la diferencia??
      Destiny and Fate,significan lo mismo en español siendo destino..
      Así que para mí no le encuentro lógica a esa explicación..
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        skyvino
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        Google it is more easy

        https://www.google.com/search?q=fate+and+destiny&oq=fate+and+destiny&aqs=chrome..69i57j0i512l7.3536j0j7&client=ms-android-samsung&sourceid=chrome-mobile&ie=UTF-8#imgrc=yxVvuvFEPxVr_M
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    After 5 months I return to see it dropped, feels bad, looks like the author may have screwed up the plot in his mind or something equally saddening happened.
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      Not dropped author is studying
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        Status in COO: Dropped
        Total written: 201 chapters
        Available: 197 chapters
        Year of publishing: 2021
        Language: English
        Authors: MellowGuy
        Publishers: Webnovel
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        And, During the time of study the author found that he will not be able to keep this up? When I posted my previous comment I was a fresh high school passout, and now I am in my 2nd year in college.

        Bit sad, isn't it?
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    No....No....Noooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo God... please take me with you
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    Bad story in every way, a little spoiler ahead warnings. [spoiler][/spoiler]
    So our super duper experienced and intelligent protagonist, bets on his life to get himself an adventurer license with an old officer because the officer decides that he is using a loophole to get his license so with a bet on marksmenship which he can apparently bet his life or servitude as a slave to the other person in exchange for the officers gunmen badge for a month which will help him in ammunition and an adventurer license our protagonist suggest a solution to his dilemma, i know right super duper intelligent oh there is even a scene where he let's his guard off in battle because he gets distracted admiring a crytalized orb containing 2 stats in intelligence, fortunately the goblin that he somehow forgot(there were 4 goblins that he fought so obviously too many to count) decides to trying his luck with strangling rather than going for the vitals like a proper monster.( i suspect the goblin watched too much indian dramas where people always get strangled by the throat, ahh humans, always influencing the nature in a bad way, pity he could have ended my misery of 14 chapters killing my hopes of betterness of the future chapters leading me to read more.)
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      Bro the spoiler isnt in the spoiler tag
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    #MellowGuy#
    UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!! evil
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    Update...... want
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    this piece of work deserves more recognition
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    Do you know what madness is?
    Yes?
    Not?
    Do you have schizophrenia?
    Yes?
    Not?
    Do you have Stalin's paranoia?
    Yes?
    Not?
    Have you plunged into darkness?
    Yes?
    Not?
    The main character of the novel gave the answer:
    YES! YES! YES!
    (Draw your own conclusions ....)
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      So...answer to the last question?
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        It's hidden somewhere...
        It is not even known by whom it is hidden.
        Toli in the dark..
        Toli in the light..
        When I read all this, I may have known the answer...
        Here the question is different. What answer do you want to know? wiseacre
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    • 5.0
    5.0
    An excellent story, an anti-hero MC that does what is necessary and they approach very well the side of the human psyche (in case of not having good or evil, but rather different perspective) side characters are relatively developed and the world is being explained and expanded currently- recommend reading.
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    You know what I hate those novels that talk about fate. (I don't know I didn't read this novel yet)
    Fate/Destiny they should not allow this word to come. Always redundantly used. You made your own future it only affect a little by others in your life. When I saw fate or destiny in novel I always skip reading that sh1t.
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      Ji Yaolan
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      One can influence Fate to a certain extent, seeing that it is the accumulation of all actions taken across existence. Destiny is not Fate. Destiny is something that is unchangeable.

      A good example would be that most Lifeforms are ultimately destined to die. Their Fate, however, dictates when exactly that moment shall arrive. You may kill yourself tomorrow, a week from now, or even a decade from now. Or you may be run over by a truck tomorrow. That would be Fate.
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      I dont believe fate but our predestination is most of the time set because of where we were born what we were taught who we acquianted even changing these kind of things is because of what we were unfluenced by so its really hard to break the chains that affects us
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      There are good examples of inscribed fate, like a legendary mechanic or a warlock in the world of magicians, it all depends on the skill of the author. But the infallible fate that determines life and death, the prosperity and fall of empires-just drives you crazy with the number of questions. Here is a completely new work about the fate of "Paragon of Sin", there are heavenly Taoists in it, but they do not have absolute power, the main character represents the very embodiment of disobedience under the heavens, before fate
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      Fey
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      How can you can say shit when you didn't even read it eyetwit evil bond
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      Tbh I don't believe in fate nor destiny, why would I want my life to be dictated by others?, I write my own story
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