Reborn As A Dragon Girl With A System by invayne

1. MC character design is messy at best and nonsensical it worse so she grew up in the street since she was 7 till she died at 16 you would think someone that grew in the street that long would be cautious and clever, but she isn’t any of that.

2. the system based on what I read is everyone in the world has a system even the bugs. The problem is she is too OP without obvious reason and I don’t mean OP in a simple way before the first evolution she fought against 30,000 people and she win.

3. This story is very messy and Feel forced It is like protagonist aura any place he go too there is action without any warning.

4. Too much prejudiced against humans the author try shoving it up your throat most of the time.

5. There is too much focus on the jokes in the story and most of the time they don’t hit.

6. the basing of the story is fast and hectic first you are in the forest, then a caravan, then the city, then the capital then to a war all of this in the span of 100 chapter and the chapters are short ones.

More aggravating is how she is full 'i hate humans' and it goes out of a window the second she meet someone who will join the party >.>. Or how in one chapter the plan is to get stronger to kill all humans, while the next is to run away to live peacefully... novel tries to mesh cookie-cutter japanese novel, with some darker vibes, and fails miserably