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Divinity: Against the Godly System by Demonic_angel

Bracelet of Immortality, the mysterious sealed item that needed 26 fragments to completely unseal.... Read more
Bracelet of Immortality, the mysterious sealed item that needed 26 fragments to completely unseal. Every unsealing giving an incredible power to the user.

First Fragment, the power of Time. Second Fragment, the Power of healing. Third Fragment, the power of...

What happens when Ryder Flynn finds the item inside the first Fully Immersive VRMMO. Why did the item follow him to the real world? Why is the Virtual World so real? Collapse
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    It's a pretty funny story pressure . Especially the end. I don't really like the heroism of the main character, but we have something. Of course, as always, the main character can quickly get laid and every girl blushes at the sight of him. For the plot, of course, + rep, you can even get 4 stars, but for the rest, more than 3 stars, the hand does not rise middle.
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    Basura
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    Near the ending all could think was when will the mc dies and gets replaced 3/10
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    Bullshit
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    Rushed ending and most female relationships feel underwhelming. Closest girl was alive but she was vastly underused and the other girls he just married at the end
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    Fowler3103
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    Buen origen y plot-twist, la trama deja algo secundario al prota pero concuerda con el propósito y los objetivos que tienen. Un final algo triste, pero que deja abierto para la imaginación y posibilidades ante el futuro.
    Cualquiera puede disfrutar la historia, el romance es bastante relevante y los obstáculos hacen emocionante los momentos de conflicto.
    Score:7/10
    Recomiendo leer normalmente hasta acercarse al final, si no crees poder leer la historia detenidamente o te falta tiempo, puede avanzar unos 5 párrafos del inicio del cap y pasar al siguiente...Algo captarás.
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    • 3.5
    3.5
    PLOT 3/5
    Some great potential is laying here but at the same time lots of plotholes, questionable decisions and rushed ending with timeskips out of nowhere. I like finished novels with less than 1000 chapters but in this case ending was like cauldron for every plot line and unfinished things. Two characters that was mentioned from time to time with possible plotline but abandoned at the end (
    ). Unreasonable quests at the beggining and yes I know that autor told us that they make sense later but still giving a vauge explanation that comes down to
    still didn't tell us how it affects mc. Don't get me wrong, because the concept of the world and overall plot is pretty neat and nice but still some things puts bad shade on this.
    ACTION 4/5
    Fight scenes are good, mc uses his brain to fight his opponents which is nice. Sometimes the opposite which is not nice. Many powers, skills, even some kind of real life system that helps mc grow stronger. Ofc typical op mc that have some struggles but at the end he is always winning (I know that for some ppl this is crucial information XD)
    MC 3.5/5
    Sometimes genius sometimes complete idiot. It changes depending on situation. For me it's a big NO because someone can't be part genius and part idiot. But overall he is kind, strong and reliable. He protects his familly and friends. Of course handsome etc. For me it is a typical op mc with one unique thing but no spoilers from my side.
    ROMANCE 2/5
    Ye.. We can delete that thing because it is just some kind of attemp of showing romance to the readers. First relationship obtained
    in a weird way. Second relationship with
    has some potential but after confession it was put away to be brought up in the ending. I don't mention about
    because this is some kind of joke to me especially the second one. Harem yes, definetelly. I can understand that romance wasn't main goal of author but still he can at least pretend to wrap it up in some normal way. Some may like it tho but its not my cup of tea. 3 chapters that are desinged to show only adult content tells that romance here is reduced to the simplest form.
    OVERALL 3.5/5
    If you like novel that require to put your brain away and just chill I think that this is good idea to read that. For people that like op mc with lots of female attention too. Sometimes nice and funny to read but with all that plotholes and forced plot points hard to swallow . After reading that I can tell only one thing. Bit potential was wasted here.
    At the end I wanted to leave one argument here. Beware spoiler so you do it on your own risk.
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    Mr.shamsi
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    Who was Lucifer? middle
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      The onw who was supposed to get the 1st unique item before mc time travelled
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    Disappointing ending, it felt like there was no purpose for mc to exist several chapters before the end. The ending was rushed too.

    It is a good novel to binge read though. The powers and skills are quite interesting. The power ups are also satisfying.
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    3.8/5

    Ending is rushed
    Minor plot holes and unexplained things
    Good novel to turn off your mind and breeze through it.
    As for romance... That's the type of novel where most of his relationships gets completed at the end with the timeskip.

    Once again. Never look at the cover art before reading. I can't imagine how this cover related to the story.
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