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Divinity: Against the Godly System by Demonic_angel

Bracelet of Immortality, the mysterious sealed item that needed 26 fragments to completely unseal.... Read more
Bracelet of Immortality, the mysterious sealed item that needed 26 fragments to completely unseal. Every unsealing giving an incredible power to the user.

First Fragment, the power of Time. Second Fragment, the Power of healing. Third Fragment, the power of...

What happens when Ryder Flynn finds the item inside the first Fully Immersive VRMMO. Why did the item follow him to the real world? Why is the Virtual World so real? Collapse
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    • 5.0
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    the end was pretty bad, more to read

    4.2/5
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    well kinda nice book but the ending is rushed, author often forgets that he wrote in earlier chapters and last but not least..mc is kinda erratic... I mean sometimes he seems intelligent and other times compete shithead idiot.
    ps- this author is also the author of inhuman warlock, I like that story very much so came here to read this one... I will say kinda disappointed and...I hope the author doesn't mess up that story... cus it's currently one of my favourites.
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      I share the same opinion.
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    Started reading but cant stomach the amount of bs really from the start. 😂
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      pasindi nga pre
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    Crashmanst
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    it was good ride but the ending felt a little rushed
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      havent read the ending yet but I stoppex at 634. Definitely feels rushed if I check the chapters though.
      I thought there was gonna be another beginning when he met that god guy. I guess not?
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    I will say this the plot is interesting that is if the author knew how to develop it properly, because of this the author makes his MC brain dead more often than not while showing a few time he is a genius ..in short it may be enjoyable but if you can't stomach an MC who randomly becomes retarded and lots of forced plot points fanfic style this story is not for you
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    would've been a decent novel if the author wasnt forgetful. Someone get the author an editor please.
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    Odexis23
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    As i read it till last chapter, i d pretty much say it that this novel has gone really too bad in last chapters and at this point it isnt worth to read more…as it is said in below reviews sometimes u get confused of which character is talking with who and it isnt rare this occasion but u get it in the end with some question marks in ur head and also he forgets what he did sometimes, system is someone who watches him for his goal and it isnt much enjoyable also everything goes on with quests issued by system(?) has some purpose but overall i dont recommend u to read it..but author’s other novel which is Inhuman Warlock is pretty good and i really hope that he doesnt mess it like this one if u wanna read it till 600ish chapters it is ok but not awesome but after that it isnt worth to read anymore
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    DON'T READ THIS BULLSHIT!

    If your looking for a FIVR novel then this isn't for you. And at the beginning it may be a FIVR novel that changes very quickly. From a novel about FIVR suddenly changes about f#cking Batman backstory and Superman f#cking powers mix. The author completely forgets the original purpose of the novel which is FIVR. Now the novel is about f#cking terrorist attacks and the MC becoming the superhero to save the day. HE EVEN ENDANGERS HIS FUCKING FAMILY AND FRIENDS BECAUSE HE IS STICKING HIS FUCKING HEAD INTO SOMETHING HE SHOULDN'T. DROP THIS FUCKING NOVEL AND FIND A BETTER ONE. FIND SOMETHING THAT ACTUALLY FOCUSES ON ITS GENRE AND PLOT NOT THIS NOVEL THAT CHANGES FUCKING MIDWAY. AUTHOR WILL FUCKING WASTE YOUR TIME. SPREAD THIS SO NEW READERS WONT WASTE THEIR FUCKING TIME
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      Big Brother
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      Chill bro.... it's not as if the author committed crimes against humanity. He just wrote a bad novel (mediocre, imo) and you had the misfortune to read it.

      Fam, this too shall pass.....maybe like a bad case of diarrhea but it'll pass all right.
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        thanks big brother. it was really frustrating because of the f#cking development. ive decided to just drop the novel and move on. anyways im sorry if my language was quite offensive. however it is true that this story is shit and is nothing more than a batman x superman fivr novel
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      Nah I like it, and messing with the terrorists in the end has a bigger purpose than it seems
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        everyone has their own taste i respect that. though i cant understand how you guys even bear the cringe and how pathethic the mc is.
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          I can't find the pathetic, maybe that's it
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            uhh, denseness of the mc is pathethic. his constant whims and rants are pathetic, the way he dodges his responsibilities and instead focuses on trivial things is pathetic. says he has gotten over his ex but hates her so much that clearly he has not gotten over her, very pathetic. i can list a lot more but alas i'm far too busy reading a new novel called supreme magus. i'd reccomend it to you its far better than this f#cking shit
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              hahaha recommending my favorite novel
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              Who is the ex?
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              Supreme Magus? Haha... It's B tier at best-- which is better than this novel. But, you'll drop it again mid-way. It has a good beginning but it sank like titanic. Just read it and you'll find out.

              Try Tyranny of Steel. From what I see in your comments you like harem, romance, Good story.
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      Zæon
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      I read this before up until chapter 30 or so was hoping to finish it but this is such an unfortunate event it was pretty good but to think it turned bad
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      I thought this was gonna be a normal comment giving out opinions until I pressed read more. Jesus Christ, hope ya chill now lmfao.
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    Harem ı exit now
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      Vi_Si
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      Gtfo
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    OneTimeSix
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    Not everything is perfect, they already said it, but I liked this novel.
    Since the beginning, it's says that those missions are for something, not just for trolling (Well, that too XD).
    It is a cool novel with epic moments, some mistakes such as names, but it is not that common and once you get use to it, your mind automatically change it (and it is not during all the novel, just some parts).
    You should try it.
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      the plot is actually decent, its just that the author is forgetful which ruins it. (lets ignore the harem and romance part, author completely forgot about Devilia.)
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        Waitttt who is devilia?
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          first duke the mc ever interacted with if I remember correctly? She also became his woman around 200 or 300 chapters.
          Ive read this back in nov so my numbers might not be accurate.
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            Yeaahh got it .
            You are right, she got completely forgotten.
            There was even their short bed scene.
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      This has nothing to do with your comment but, it’s funny that you have 6 likes and 1 dislike currently. I hope this balance isn’t broken by some weeb
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