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Chapter 73. First Battle
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    Somdudef
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    It took us 73 chapters for the first fight scene of the book, let’s go!
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      lucasjcastelo
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      And yet everything is very good haha.

      But seriously... There weren't any action scenes before, right? I remember the guy who followed Klein for a whole day, even breaking into his house during his sleep time. The scene of him threatening the guy was incredible.
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    SeriousReal
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    that is one of the worst ... poem?.. ive read in a long while. Should just leave it to those who can, sentence structure is also a mess and too much useless information bogs down quick readers.

    some of the comments is too far away from the readers. our thoughts >narrator describes wiyh too many words>character A's opinion on> character B and his actions. That is an authors comment on a tertiary perspective.. ..who cares how immediate this dudes finger is holding this trigger when character A looks at him...

    i was told this novel had good writing..
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      klip
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      They would have spoken it in Hermes
      The language structure would be different
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        SeriousReal
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        yea its through multiple translations tbat is something we all know, the sentence structure is different, thats also widely known. The issue is the half a55 job of TL ignoring sentence structure which completely changes the meaning.

        like my dp name can be, serious and real, real serious, seriously real all have different meaning. with real serious can be a double entendre just from aftertone.
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      Mikiej14
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      Something to remember is that they aren't trained poets, he abilities they use may require them to recite poetry but it doesn't require them to be good at it it seems.
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      Lost in Walmart
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      These are also translated from Chinese. Any poems would sound a bit off.
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        SeriousReal
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        yea thats why they should just transliterate it. tryinh half hearted makes it unecessarily convoluted. proper TL would fix tbe sentence structure too it isnt language interpretation. if they arent competent enough? its understandably fine but then transliterate it. If the words are literally translated the intent may still work better.
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          MoonSovereign
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          Do you know any language other than English?

          If so try translating it, you will see how worse literal translation will be as a poem
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            SeriousReal
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            yea its a nightmare, i propose not TL broken poems cuz ot doesnt work anyways but subsequence wording would describe the point of the poem should do anyways. its efficient, and less confusing for both reader and TLer.
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      desustar
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      Well, what would you consider good writing? To me good writing is to tell a story without too much description or added details as long as I can make out the scene. Precisely why I don't like reading western novels. Japanese/Chinese/Korean light novels is heavily dialogue based with description used mostly for action scenes. While this novel certainly is descriptive to some extent, it's mostly necessary and hence I consider it rather well written. And the poems... You see, I don't care about the poems

      'sides, I took another look at the poem and I think the sentence structure is alright, passable even. And the poem itself is not very poetic, but hey, they are cops after all, not some poets who are bringing about cultural revolution.
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        SeriousReal
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        a planned setting with rich lore exposed not by descriptions but unraveled as the story progresses with depth. words weaved with readers familiar or likeness to reveal a scene through relative experience. appearances explained like cariciture and as the story proceeds highlight personalities or visual significance to form a strong character of interest. scenarios and plot flow naturally with realistic reasons for the cause, natural effect, and a twist or a hook for consequence. a intro, climax and deneument in big and small waves for breathers to establish a rhythm [key to looong reads without burnout or losing interest] . micro and macros effects of the environments effect on characters and story. These all make great writing, usually planned, retconned, add and edit, checked before public view as a team. Tbh, its really hard to find a novel that satisfy all iv said, but those who come close are considered cultured masterpiece.
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          Perfected Paragon
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          Can you tell me some
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            SeriousReal
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            I recommend Seras fics. Ghost in the city is a good example, the setting and picture comes kut before the text is fully registered. How was that done? subtle imagery and great use of implied senses while painting a setting through the 5 senses as we pay attention the lore.
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    SomeoneRandom
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    Oh...oh no...thing are about to get interesting swindler
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    Lyiuc777
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    Yo I just realized, isn't the seer sequence from the antigonus family, then isn't that clown beyonder the next path for MC? After all, it interfered with Mc's divination, so it must have divination abilities.
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      Nemo
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      Isn't seer from Zaratul family?
      I know secret order has Antigonus family, but are we sure they have the Zaratustra based one?
      That could also be trickster. Who knows..
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      Camp
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      Klein still managed to "beat" him, so it's probably another sequel and not the seer evolution.


      Higher sequels give new skills and slightly boost previous ones, in case you didn't understand
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    Novel weeb
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    lets go finally some action
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    Nargeon
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    Shouldn't the Church of Evernight have the entire Seer pathway if they wiped out the Antigonus family?
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      sdjfghs
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      If you wipe some bloodlines out you do not aquire knowledge of that blodline, they may have destroyed everything except for notebook.
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    TheLoverOfAllJazz
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    Not making fun of the author but he obviously doesn't know how to shoot a gun. Never shoot with just one hand and never shoot into the sky.
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      sdjfghs
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      It's not mistake of author. It's mistake of media for showing people shooting gun with one hand
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        SeriousReal
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        regardless of how the author got influenced, relative of the current novel this mistake is the fault of said character & author.

        Also, if the pistole is a low caliber short barrel repeater. Then 1h doesnt matter. Youre not going to hit anything with it anyways. Its mostly for covert or self defense... just dont close your eyes when shooting.

        Also dying from falling bullets is a myth. Its discouraged but I wouldnt take shooting into the air so serious.
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          Lightning74
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          Are you sure dying from falling bullets is a myth? I have seen it repeatedly in the news (some idiots that enjoy noise likes firing at the air as a form celebration).
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      Stevenlol12
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      Bro people do this ALL the time, do you think people are responsible??? The author isn’t trying to go for the best, he’s going for realism, so you know how many videos of freedom fighters shooting straight in the air with aks in 1 arm? Countless,
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        God Ehime Tsu
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        here in the slums of Brazil gunshots into the air are relatively normal, every now and then thieves shoot into the sky or into helicopters taxi driver or media
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          Astterion
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          De fato
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            God Ehime Tsu
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            De qual personagem da foto de perfil?
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              Astterion
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              É uma montagem da carta "aleister the invoker" de yugioh
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                God Ehime Tsu
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                Ohh
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      OctavianSylva
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      He is shooting with one arm BECAUSE the sealed artefact is still nearby. And he is shooting up in the sky to trick the other enemy and urge it to go to the warehouse in haste.
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