Chapter 6. Beyonder

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    Extremely weird chapter. Not because world is unclear or confusing, but because interactions dont make much sense. Dude was trying to transmigrate back to Earth yet decided to cosplay an unknown Beyonder and started thinking about his future in this world without any prerequisite thoughts. Then there are 2 random guys who started sharing significant information in an unknown realm next a "great Beyonder" without a second thought plus nobody asked the guy to speak. Then even decided to trade next to him. I mean, why would mortals ignore the company of a supposedly powerful Beyonder and have almost casual talk with each othe? Not to mention that dude decided that the girl can obtain Ghost Sharks blood without having any introduction on who she is or what she can do.


    Also having to be affiliated with some sects in order to obtain supernatural powers and losing freedom as result is a very annoying concept imo.

    Let's see how the story unveils
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      transmigrating back randomly is near impossible. in every single fantasy, transmigrators usually have to learn the secrets of the world before they find a way back. klein isnt a beyonder either he’s not roleplaying one yet.



      if a god summons you and u have no idea what’s going on, but they aren’t radiating any aura ans aren’t doing anything significant, what would you do. be curious? audrey (the girl) is very innocent rn. she has a lot to learn.


      if the girl knows knowledge of machinery hivemind mandated punishers and the nighthawks, knows how you can become a beyonder by joining organizations, she is definitely in a position of some power. normal people do NOT know this. if she can negotiate for a potion without thinking then she can prob get the blood.

      and ofc there will be regulations with supernatural powers. you don’t want beyonders running amuck destroying the world do you?
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    There was a small typo with confusing the names... but mlre importantly a spectator can one be a spectator ? I wonder what does it mean exatly
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      girl is audrey, boy is alger

      and spectator can only be a spectator? who knows what it means :] all i can tell you is… beware of the spectator
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    OKKKK bro ate w that lmao
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    So are we preising the fool or what
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    I-I think I have fallen in love with this feeling—of being a ‘spectator.’

    Lmao

    Assuming beyonders are this verse's equivalent to awakened in Shadow Slave
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      something like that yes, although beyonders scale slower than in Shadow Slave
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        I alr finished both books, so I'm clear on this. Better late than never ig tho whoknows
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          oh lmao i thought it said may not march
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            That's funny bc even if it was may I'd still be done with lotm with the pace I read at oru2x
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    "An attempt."

    Seriously bro😭.
    Imagine ur just sitting doing ur work and suddenly get summoned in a mysterious place and the one who summoned said he was making an attempt.
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    #clundi# ch6 done
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    bros the fool
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    I'm not making any pronouncements, but it seems it will make sense in the future.
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    This chapter is the "beginning" for a lot of you and supposedly the "best" chapter. However, to me, it's...not that great honestly. My critiques are in the spoiler below. If you have a reasonable way to refute me, please do so.

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      Make a reasonable critique first.
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      So, the main critique you have is distrust of the Fool. Tell me, if a being could drag you from across the world to a place where he has total control, to the point of making a structure appear. He seems to wish you no harm, and even says you are free to leave whenever. Why not believe him? Even if he's lying, they can't do anything about it. He seems friendly, he seems to be trying to do something. He clearly doesn't care to harm the two he brought here or they'd be dead. So, why wouldn't Audrey try to gain the information she seeks here? She has nothing to lose. As for Alger, him talking after wanting to stay silent can be explained by him also wanting to try and gain something from this if he could, especially after getting a read on Audrey.

      As for the deal thing, that is such a miniscule ordeal for the Fool in their eyes. And neither of them intend to break their deal clearly, so it doesn't really matter. If he says no, they can just request to leave and go on with their lives
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      re-reader here
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