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    xBUNNYx
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    I enjoy this small recurring theme of people who *almost* recognize the Hidden Dragon Temple- likely all people who are old enough to recall when the MC's Master went on her own journey and likely created her own stories.

    Across centuries of this happening, Hidden Dragon Temple has become one of those places occasionally peeking out of the mist of history, and anyone in the empire might have once heard mention of it, or heard from their grandparents about a wandering daoist from there.

    It adds a nice little bit of character and history, encapsulated in a single sentence occasionally repeated.
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      Grizzly
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      Good catch, I almost missed it
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      TheUnknown_
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      Exactly what I wanted to say. I hope that one day someone with a clear memory will speak it out. It would be pretty interesting to learn more about the temple and the master themselves and of course the reaction of Song Yu
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    kanenightshade13
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    I feel he should have left the man with a tale he could tell others for that would be the greatest gift. He keeps mentioning that he hasn't witnessed any of the immortals in person so it would have been nice for song you to give him a view into the supernatural...
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      alshb
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      that's genuinely great idea
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