In the World of Sword and Magic as Space Marine by ElJonson

Why does he even want to return to his home, aka, the Warhammer 40k Universe, If I were a space marine I'd have a month long party just because I finally don't have to live in that universe of terror and doom 😭

F#CK THIS NOVEL EXISTENCE IS FCKING INSULT TO WARHAMMER AND ESPECIALLY THE SPACE MARINE.

AT LEAST IF AUTHOR WANT TO PUT SPACE MARINE IN MAGIC WORLD, JUST USE "WARHAMMER WIZARDS" AS LOW STANDARDS DAMN IT.

Author really doesn't have any knowledge about 'storytelling'. The way he wrote this novel is just really absurd, plain no emotion, whatever. Even trash cheap Chinese cliche face slapping braindead novel has better storytelling than this author.

The other reviews were accurate. It comes off more as a dry narrative than a story with character development and dialogue.

Which is a shame, since Warhammer is a fascinating setting. The beginning doesn’t give a lot of exposition or justification for his isekai, nor the correlation between his character sheet development and his identity as a space marine. Especially in a primitive setting. The MC doesn’t even take a moment to contemplate it.

And his system sucks. It’s implies his identity is based on a character he developed based on rpg rules, but it shows nothing of stats and abilities, only gives him an inventory and observation skill? Trashy, lazy writing.

I’ve put this into my to read list, but only because of the setting. And then only if I need a reading fix and have nothing else.

At first I thought it wouldn't deserve this score.
But I read the first chapters and my score was 5/10.
You feel from the first episode that the story will be mediocre, boring and bad.
I kept reading thinking maybe it would get better, but unfortunately the novel is very bad.
I havent read a novel that deserves 1 star in a long time.
Chapter 80.

As a person who knows nothing about war hammer (except from tiktok) and only know about dnd from novels I can say the story okay. Thus my ratings is:
⭐⭐⭐
It's an okay read for some who doesn't know shit about either verse but not a Great read just okay

Is fanfic usually better than the original or the original is better?

I take back what I said, the writing and the way the situation follows is totally simplistic and simple, I saw 3 chapters, whoever reads further leave a review so I know if it's worth continuing reading

D&D and I am all in... Still let someone poison taste it first