Chapter 5: Julien D. Evenus [4]

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    am I the only one totally disinterested in mc's power specialization? sure it's different but only so/so in my eyes. I expected the judges to show a similar disinterest but ig not
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      Dude, normally ppl need to experience an emotion, then get immersed in it (like u have to remember the moment and the emotion) and then apply it to ur opponent

      But here he did all that instantly, as in, he just experienced it, and was still immersed in it at the moment and injected that fear into his opponent. This is like a shortcut but in the end its more like fast forwarding the same experiences. Its quite interesting as well as dangerous
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      It's unique and cool, like instilling emotions with the drawback of having to experience them yourself? It's a vengeful soul's wet dream, every cuck's gonna love this
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      they were disinterested in the path itself but how a young man like the mc was able to so easily utilize when it’s usually super difficult
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    Good chapter. This emotive magic and it's application, both are new. For now, 7/10, let's see how it goes on in the next few chapters.
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    Maybe I'm just stupid but I'm so lost right now
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      Yes you are
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      I can see where it's confusing, it felt like I was on a rollercoaster with sharp turns every second, but I get it now lol, so stupid of me. If it helps try looking at the bigger picture, take a few steps backs and break down all the critical stuff before digesting it in your own way, don't hyperfocus on current events
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    So far 3/10, this chapter was weird. First there were many cliche parts, MC don't know what he is doing but mange to create big misunderstanding now everyone thinks he is genius with some kind of dark past, a extremely perfect bla bla bla... Heroine has started paying attention to him and is interested in him also this line
    But if there was one thing to take note of, it was his demeanor.

    The way he carried himself... His expressionless face, and calm even steps...

    It seemed to exude boundless confidence.

    An overconfident idiot?


    What do you even mean by confidence? MC don't know what is going on and was shaking all the time? Where the f overconfident part come from?

    Also why everyone has to specialy say the part about how handsome MC is? Hope author don't keep spamming this Handsome part again and again.
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      Body Language is instinctive. You can't easily change it without proper training.
      That's why many profilers and Psychologists use bodylanguage to study.

      He's a Noble, so noble training is etched in his body. Plus, the confidence of og person.
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    There were no imperfections or voids in her, to the extent that she appeared to embody perfection itself.


    Mr. Perfect Cell would like to disagree.
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      cell: perfect u say?
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        P is for priceless, the expression on your faces.
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    This shii weird
    5/10 for the intro because the dialogue of the judges was so cliché. I think there was a similar dialogue in “I was mistaken as a monstrous genius actor”
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      Yeah! This chapter reminds of that novel.
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      I felt it was fine. Irs a very rare area of magic "emotion" .

      They explained how emotive mages work so its not suprising about their reactions.
      { Ya the dialogue could be better considering he's a noble and knowledge about nobles and their children is one if the most circulated but we dont know the history of his family . Id say its a 7/10 }
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      Another cliche novel I presume?
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        No. S tier for me
        I really like these type of MCs
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          This is the information...
          Quote: JameSweets
          No. S tier for me
          I really like these type of MCs


          This is how the book convey it....
          When it comes to books that truly resonate with me, there's one that stands out as absolutely top-notch, hitting all the right notes. I have no hesitation in saying that this book is S tier in my collection—it’s the kind of story that grabs hold of you and doesn't let go. It’s so well-written and captivating that I find myself completely immersed in its world. From the first page to the last, the narrative flows with a sense of urgency and excitement that keeps me turning pages long into the night.

          I really like the type of main characters this book has. They have a combination of depth, strength, and complexity that makes them incredibly compelling to follow. There’s something about their unique personalities and the way they handle challenges that feels genuine and relatable. These characters are not just props in a story; they feel like real people with real emotions, which makes the entire reading experience so much richer. They’re the kind of characters that make a book unforgettable, and I find myself thinking about them long after I’ve finished reading.
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    20 what's happening20
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      Bro it's messed up a bit cheerful
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