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Immortal Path Space仙道空间

A poor orphan, who lost both parents, stumbles upon a mysterious space and embarks on the path of... Read more
A poor orphan, who lost both parents, stumbles upon a mysterious space and embarks on the path of cultivating immortality. From then on, he cultivates spiritual herbs, refines immortal pills, opens a shop, practices military formations, and establishes an immortal kingdom…

This story is about cultivating immortality and farming, with a focus on ordinary people, not horses. Collapse
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    Chapter 570-669???
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      The translator has these behind a paywall. In Patreon there are almost 1000 chapters
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    The plot seems very similar to "Journey to Immortality", "Demon's Diary" and other similar novellas. I don't like it too much, although it's better than some outright trash. But there are too many of these novels already. It would be better to write something similar to Martial World and True Martial World.
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    I really liked it.
    Mc isn't too op he has to strugle to win.
    He develops a company, but how he do it makes sens.
    He isn't some perw.
    He does not treat his fallowers like trash. His fallowers loyalty is understandible.
    He is not one man army to get over challenges he gets help from others.
    Power system, economy, tactics makes sens.
    He isn't a saint nether a a hole. His pragmatic. Good to people who good to him bad to the ones are atoganize him.
    Simply I read 403 chapters and I enjoyed it.
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    This novel starts out pretty well... and then turns to complete shit. (after currently translated chapters)

    Like the whole story is leading up to the grand retaking of the human world from the invading demons and when it finally happens the MC suddenly turns into a moron. The clever use of his attack plants, traps, poisons? Nah he forgets he has those. He is great at head on battles now, where he battles for a long time and barely wins, repeatedly.



    Anyway, I stopped reading cause it felt like being punched in the face to reward me for sticking with the story for too long.
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    I thought this will be a farming novel but Im around chapter 600 and it’s all about fighting.
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      Are you reading from mtl?
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    While this novel has some interresting ideas(like his golden finger which is a space that he can use to grow plants with time accaleration+ he can upgrade it(faster+ bigger), world building and how this cheat is implemted mc is also untalented and has to abuse his res to grow up (not realy importend past a certain point anyway) is also not bad and can be interresting) till now(current ch) it is filled with logical issues(weird amount mc earns even early, decisions made that lead to less profit (mc doesnt learn its not even mentioned) mc trying to hide his level despite having about every ability for that to not matter and alot of other minor things)has some realy retarded writting(dev problems (that are clear negative to mc yet he doesnt care and doesnt learn)and alot of things that are forced like the behavior of mc in quite a few Situation and his actions) and generaly gives strongly the typical trash fast food novel vibe(mc has like 50k+ spirit stones in mid qi level (foundation cultivater gets 1k per year btw in a sect (which are alot richer than loose cultivatiers, mc was such a cultivator(couldve used that money for alot of things) and it gets even more ridiculus after that/also mc doesnt realy try the limits of his cheat) despite it being most definitivly not that kind of novel(if so its the worst ive ever seen/doesnt hype), it could just be the that the author is stupid (like I am serios if he doesnt rush/doesnt realy invest any amount of time in thinking about the devs its the best explanation i have for some devs that happen) and/or doesnt give the novel much thought (it happens quite a bit) overall you can definitivly gain enjoyment but dont expect anything beyond some interresting ideas 5-5,5/10 wouldnt recommend might be worth a try if you can ignore those issues and treat it like typical fast food. (Btw yes mc and most chars arent that smart but its not their vault its clearly the authors)
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      Please, use [Enter] don't become mtl yourself...
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        This novel doesn't deserve more lol, nah I'm just to lazy to care about my writing on phone
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          That's exactly how bad unedited mlt grows and multiplies?
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            Well it needs a host tho
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              that's true
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      Improved with AI(couldnt see this nonsense lol) ## Improved Text:

      **While this novel presents some intriguing concepts** (such as the golden finger, a space for accelerated plant growth with upgrade potential), **its world-building and the implementation of the cheat are also commendable.** Although the protagonist is initially untalented and must rely heavily on his resources to progress (which becomes less significant later in the story), **the novel's exploration of these elements can be engaging.**

      However, **the current chapter is plagued by logical inconsistencies.** The protagonist's income, even in the early stages, seems unreasonably high. Decisions that lead to reduced profits are made without any apparent learning or consequences. The attempt to hide his level, despite possessing numerous abilities that would make it irrelevant, is another example of logical flaws. Additionally, **the writing is often awkward and forced.** Developmental issues that clearly disadvantage the protagonist are dismissed without concern, and the protagonist's behavior in certain situations can appear unnatural or contrived.

      Overall, **the novel's tone and style strongly resemble a typical fast-paced, low-quality novel.** The protagonist's possession of 50,000+ spirit stones at a mid Qi level (while a foundation cultivator in a sect might earn 1,000 per year) is a glaring example of this. The protagonist's failure to fully explore the limitations of his cheat further contributes to this impression. **Despite not being a novel of that type, the current presentation is disappointing.**

      **One possible explanation for these issues is the author's lack of careful consideration or research.** If the author is not invested in the development or does not spend sufficient time thinking about the story's elements, it could lead to the inconsistencies and forced writing.

      **While the novel offers some interesting ideas, it's important to be aware of its flaws.** If you can overlook these issues and enjoy a fast-paced read, it might be worth giving a try. However, don't expect a high-quality or deeply thought-out narrative. **Ultimately, the novel's rating remains 5-5.5/10, and I would not recommend it unless you're willing to tolerate its shortcomings.**
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        Much better.
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    #panic#chapter 240 has no content
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    #panic# chapter 225 to 230 content is missing and 226 is out of order
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      Thank you! peepo022
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        When will be able to see comments of users again? 😔
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    It’s pretty alright in my opinion. Doesn’t have the spice of exciting novels but it’s good with decent action. Try it out before deciding to throw it in the trash.
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      can u recommend me som hidden gems
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        Nah I only read junk novels so I can’t be talking
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    Boring, I read this on Mtl.


    Rank D(The protagonist is stupid, the other characters are too)
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      Can you suggest some good mtl novel
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        Doomsday: I Have One More Keyword Than Others
        It's a good work, the author is experienced
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