Ranobes » The Primordial Record » Chapter 24: Red Moon » Comments

Chapter 24: Red Moon
The Primordial Record

This page is for comments only. To read the chapter, click on the chapter title.

Warning: Opening the reading page will reset your reading progress in the system!

The system only saves your last viewed page, regardless of chapter numbers.

Comments 12

  1. Online Offline
    SilentReader73
    + 0 ⋅ 0 -
    Save me. This dao is too complex, my inferior spiritual roots can't comprehend this.
    Read more
  2. Offline
    9ineSerenity
    + 1 ⋅ 0 -
    My brain is gonna fry at this rate
    What the f#ck is going on in his house bruh
    This is really hard to understand
    My comprehension is having a breakdown
    Read more
  3. Offline
    Atemeles
    + 8 ⋅ 0 -
    He cut a wall in the estate, there was a cold material there, he was pulled inside by a hand made of the material, he sees something strange, and then he finds himself in another place...What... gloom
    Read more
  4. Offline
    Shiki519
    + 3 ⋅ 0 -
    too hard to understand

    idk.. but it seems clear to me what is the problem oru2x
    Read more
  5. Offline
    Coward
    + 21 ⋅ 5 -
    This book is poorly written, too hard to understand
    Read more
    1. Offline
      Galariansith
      + 13 ⋅ 17 -
      Nah this is pretty close to published book quality. Yall read too many damn webnovels and think that those extremely poorly written and overexplained novels are "good writing" so you can't wrap your head around this more flowery writing styles.

      Even lotm falls under that. While the book is insanely good, the writing is not the best out there. It's simple and to the point. And definitely not flowery as this novel is.
      Read more
      1. Offline
        EldritchVoidGod
        + 18 ⋅ 2 -
        Nah this is pretty close to published book quality.

        This is pure exaggeration. This isn't anywhere near 'published book quality' Published books do not have such random jumps from scene to scene. In a published book, even if you took out the scenes and placed them one after another - without any separator - you would instinctively be able to feel that a new scene has started. That is not the case here.

        While I do agree with your statement about webnovels. Most of them are rather simplistic. But LOM on its own has a relatively complex plot, so its simplistic writing style perfectly matches that.

        And most people read as a form of relaxation and overly complex writing can be off-putting.
        Read more
        1. Offline
          Shiki519
          + 3 ⋅ 1 -
          technically there is no rule for publish books, unless specified by law... what you are saying is basically an opinion, by someone on how a book should be

          There's only one rule: Engage the reader. Everything else doesn't matter
          i very much agree on this one
          Read more
          1. Offline
            Jack Kaneki
            + 3 ⋅ 0 -
            Man, you just had your brain re-wired to be able to read MTL and chinese novels to the point that you can't tell when grammar and transitions are dog shite.
            Read more
            1. Offline
              Shiki519
              + 0 ⋅ 0 -
              well, maybe you're right. english is not my native language, i guess thats why XD
              Read more
      2. Offline
        Atlasb
        + 7 ⋅ 0 -
        What a lie!
        Pretty close to published book quality my ass
        This book is so hard to read
        I have a feeling it will be interesting at a point.
        But the way the author jumps from one scene to another is off-putting.
        But It just feels like I'm reading to pass an exam at this point.
        Read more
    2. Offline
      Atlasb
      + 5 ⋅ 0 -
      I thought I was the only one!!
      It's so hard to read
      But I feel its gonna be interesting at one point, that's why i haven't dropped it
      Read more