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The Last Commander of the Red Alert红警之末世指挥官

The end of the world is full of crises, but Su Chen says not to worry because he has the Red Alert... Read more
The end of the world is full of crises, but Su Chen says not to worry because he has the Red Alert System.

That’s how confident he is.

You say you have a lot of weapons?

Sorry, I have more weapons than I can use here. Let me introduce you to the weather control device.

You say the mutant beasts are very powerful?

No problem, I have a way to deal with them… Collapse
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  1. Offline
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    Добавьте тег:
    1. Романтика или что-то в этом роде
    2.уберите от слабо к сильному и поставьте ваще неубиваемый чел с IQ минус 1000 и системой которая даёт все при этом гг не надо делать ничего
    Ну и так от себя чисто моё мнение-не читайте это,есть много чтива в разы лучше этого(если кому нужно,спросите скажу названия
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    Меня хватило на половину первой главы... Так грустно, где хорошие новеллы? crybaby
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    red alert?? lshock
    im really surprise this even have fanfic
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      There is actually a few of them about 6 to 10 that I know on different websites as this the only one I found on this site. But yeah your right this is a pretty nuance novel genre I I rarely see them myself
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    The stories doesn't go anwhere at all
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    Got to Chapter 18. It was decent enough but the way his system acts makes it so that there will basically never be a situation where the MC is unable to do something.

    At the start the system waives the requirements for summoning soldiers (having a base and the relevant buildings/facilities), reduces their cost and speeds up their summoning time to be instant. If this was just limited to this initial time, then it would be fine. But it isn't.

    At chapter 18, after he has discovered that a beast tide is about to attack the nearby gathering point where a love interest is, he receives a quest from the system to rescue her with the reward being, basically, a random lootbox. The issue is that the quest grants him an increased level of permissions temporarily as well as the ability to summon a helicopter, whilst again waiving the requirements (having an air field) as soon as the quest starts, not even as rewards.

    It feels like the system, whenever needed for the plot, will simply waive any requirements and grant him whatever it wants in the guise of a quest.

    Another small thing, which I'm not sure if it is just how his system is, or if it is translation errors, is that his system just does things as it wants without informing him or letting him choose. In the first chapter it asks him if he wants to summon the soldiers, provides him a cost breakdown and then immediately summons them without any confirmation.
    The requirement to deploy the MCV (Mobile Construction Vehicle) and barracks is temporarily waived, and soldiers can be directly constructed. The host currently has 1000 initial energy points, and each soldier requires 100 energy points. Does the host want to build soldiers?"

    "A soldier takes one minute to build. Considering the host's current situation, an additional 10 energy points are required to eliminate the construction time. The host can build a total of 9 soldiers."

    As soon as the system finished speaking, nine figures appeared in front of Su Chen.


    In a later chapter whilst he is grinding, he gets automatically levelled up to 2 without the system informing him until he asks. For some reason this also cuts the amount of energy he received from the enemies in half as well, which doesn't really make sense since the energy is obtained from the corpses of the beasts. Him Levelling up doesn't affect them in any way. If it was EXP, then it'd make sense, but this energy acts more like currency in that it is used for everything.

    Finally, there is also some weirdly phrased parts and the usual basic math problems.
    Thinking of this, Su Chen decided to make five hunting dogs and four engineers.

    One hunting dog requires 100 energy points, and one engineer requires 100 energy points. Su Chen spent 1400 energy points at once.
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      Thanks for the info share :)

      I think what you first talked about should be a translation error as can be very common when translating a lot of text at once. Sometimes only the general translation will go through but some passage will not be translated but there normally only small details. That why it is best to translate passage by passage and sentences by sentence as your less likely to miss anything
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    #panic# the 3 latest chapters are empty
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    Last two chapters are empty
    #panic#
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    I Love Chapter [NAN].
    Who Doesn't Love Chapter [NAN].
    #panic# I think your bot broke on reading chapter names
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      Thanks!
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    Red alert?!!!?
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    Indeed.
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