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Chapter 1: A shooting star and a wish
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    Lord of the Nine
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    Not a bad start 12
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    Despawning
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    Start April 28th, 2026
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      Despawning
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      Caught up June 15, 2026.
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    AUTHOR
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    Now we Now how systems are made smart sigma
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    Gun Slinger
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    Is this story still in the same universe as The Eldrim Cards?
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    Milkman
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    The grammar feels a bit off, I think there might be some missing commas, but overall the actual story is perfectly fine.
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    Freespectrum
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    Actual decent writing. So hard to find these days.
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      Lord of the Nine
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      Yare yare daze sigh
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    legalizeit10
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    Todays cliffhanger was too much, and even though I have the chapters unlocked on webnovel I’m here to re-read this. Because I can adjust the colors here, and on webnovel I can’t.

    Lets f#cking go
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    Shiki519
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    In his spare time he made small video games and he only treated that as a hobby until some random online streamer uploaded a viral video raging at how horrible the mechanics of his game were.


    new fear unlocked XD
    its good that he made money out of this lol, bad ad is still an ad and it worked...

    anyways really like the novel, especially the fact that the system is presented as a treasure made by a cultivator right off the bat satisfied
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    kiwi
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    All I can say so far is I like the style and the grammar makes sense.
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    DemigodPercy
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    So far so good
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