Dungeon of Pride, Laplace by ViciousPepper

This review is so completely bullshit that I doubt that this guy even read the novel.



He is nothing of all those but naive. He "fixes" his naivety when faced with the cruel reality. Lazy is literally the last thing I would call Simon. He is extremely hardworking and pushing himself. I don't consider him dense. I won't expect someone to kneel in front of every beauty he meets. He is a little shy at first but since he is a demon that doesn't last that much. The reason he went slow with Irene has to do with her strength and the fact that he really cares about her. He doesn't want to risk their relationship because he is rash. Also, Irene had her own insecurities and problems which resulted in keeping her distance. This very situation is also talked about between the two later down the line. He was a bit clueless and naive at the start but he changes as he experiences various situations. As time passes he becomes more focused and determined to become stronger so he can dictate his destiny. I wouldn't call him idiotic beyond being a bit naive and clueless at the start.

This is completely bullshit. The MC consistently faces people above his level and wins 9/10 times. The few times he loses are critical to changing his character. He sheds his naivety and abandons the identity of being human when he is beaten and humiliated. That beating became one of his strongest drives to become stronger. Recently around chapter 742 he actually takes his revenge. Actually, he doesn't get beaten beyond his journey to the human kingdom. After that, he consistently defeats his rivals.


This is completely bullshit. In the most recent fight, he beats the shit out of his enemy despite having 200 fewer levels and his enemy being quite talented. The MC is a Sin Holder and his enemy is an individual with an angelic bloodline. So he is definitely strong and on the path to reach the peak of power. He trains constantly and acquires skills that he shouldn't possess at his level so he can further level them up when he increases his noble rank.


A dungeon is more than just a house. A dungeon is a part of himself and represents his essence. The stronger the dungeon grows the more powerful he becomes directly. The resources that his dungeon produces are a bonus. Also, his potential and personality influence the dungeon.



A demon with or without a dungeon is completely different. Developing his dungeon is one of the most important things he can do. The very reason he can have such strength is due to the resources the dungeon produces.



How is it late? The skills he needed to build his foundation are next to impossible to acquire on a lower level. Besides he already had a relatively strong foundation. He just lacked formal training from someone knowledgeable. Which he gets from Irene. It has also been repeatedly said that Demon Earls are a dividing line for demons. He started his foundation training before becoming an Earl. So how was it late??


He isn't. He acts perfectly normal around women.


The reason he declared her his sister is due to the fact that she has just lost all her family and a lot of her compatriots. She was emotionally broken. By becoming her brother he sought to help her heal. We see how she got better as days passed and interacted with each other. Sure he could potentially abuse her and control her like she is some tool but he isn't such a person. Also considering her identity any person who attempted to do so would be dead due to Aldebaran. Nonetheless, Cecilia does help Simon quite a lot. Just the mystical veins and heart veins she helped redirect to his dungeon are of immense value. Not to mention the mana trees and all the other plants she grew. The Serenity Pond is one of the most important parts of the Dungeon to Simon. Without Cecilia, the Pond wouldn't have been as valuable. And this is when she hasn't fully awakened her bloodline. She is only going to get more important. You are probably forgetting that she is a child and awakening her bloodline will bring a lot of dangers. So having her slow down is important when Simon lacks the strength to protect her.



She was suddenly summoned from a different space and time while having forgotten most of her memories. At the same time, something is influencing her emotions. It is only logical to act the way she did at the start. Besides I said before she has a heart-to-heart talk with Simon later down the line and resolved a lot of their issues.

You are exactly the guy I mention in my comment below. Pathetic.

For other people reading his comment , he is spouting pure bullshit. Don't believe a shred of his comment. Just read further down the novel. Chapter 359 (All Thoughts to Darkness) to Chapter 365 (All Thoughts to Darkness (5)) showcase perfectly how the review of @Arcyroxx is just plain dumb. Honestly people really need to stop characterizing a whole novel just from a fraction of it. It is okay to not like it but trying to dissuade others from reading it based on pure horse shit is totally not cool.