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Chapter 66: The massacre of Hollberg [1]
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    Phatom Px5
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    Fu#k the plots
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    прохожий
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    А ведь он только начинал становиться нормальным... F...
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    Damsy
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    Things have become more interesting. Someone needs to save Jin, either author comes to the rescue or make Kevin instantly go to Jin after he got out of his own room. Otherwise the current plot will deviate so much from the original story.
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    Newly_learner
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    It's because the mc eat something that jin have so his power was lacking
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      Duckuto
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      No Jin wasn’t supposed to have ate it yet
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    Junniebug
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    and then the book will come to save the day..?
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    HighlySelectiveReade
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    Jin's death signifies the plotline already changed. So MC's decision to stay quiet in order to prevent a change in the plotline was useless. He just allowed the death of so many people.
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      Octaire
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      The MC’s arrival is already something that diverges from the original plotline it was impossible for him to make things go exactly as they did in the novel
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    kardus315
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    damn
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    Naat
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    Jin probably wasn't be able fully recover from training and thus dying.
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    MaximumEffort
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    The author repeats way too many stuff. Like saying something then explaining it the other way around swim
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      kumb
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      What do you expect from a newbie writer?
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        Epic Of Lmaoer
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        dude its been 66 chaps since he started
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          kumb
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          Yeah, that's about a month or two of writing.
          For a newbie such mistakes are understandable, you don't just become a top tier author in 2 months
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          PandaG0D
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          Dude, you're a tsundere.
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    Natsu-gildarts
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    The MC's rival died?
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