Chapter 5: The Inquisition.

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    First of all, this novel has a rushed start. Also lack of good motive (like choose Walker as a husband, why?). Also the MC growth is too fast, it's like this is his 2nd life (like regressor).
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      All of your question will be answered in the future chapter but
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        What i meant is. His characteristics, behavior, etc is like a completely different person. He is literally a loser a week ago. Now he turned into a chad. Is growth of raw power = to chadness?
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          Well his body is that of a loser but his personality is always that of a chad. In future chapter his friend will say something like that mc always has a strong personality but it is suppressed by his body condition so when he turned into a vampire that chadness just got a x500 upgrade
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            Ooh.... Make sense. Now the chain is no more.
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    Hahaha. Those maids crack me up 🤣🤣
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    "I doubt that would happen, he seems to have no interest in us, and Violet would probably kill us if that happened" Natalia replied again in a flat tone.

    Yeah, I think Yandere is pretty much confirmed here
    Also, I see people complaining about plot holes and MC. Bruh, nothing is perfect. Just take what you get and enjoy it. Don't just complain about every little detail, learn to turn a blind eye to stuff because mistakes are inevitable. Not to mention that this is fiction so you can just come up with some corresponding nonsensical stuff yourself to fill in the gap. Learning to deal with things you don't like will not only help you enjoy reading novels more but also spare others who are enjoying themselves from seeing your negative comments. Not to mention this is actually pretty good so far. It's just entertainment guys, there is no need to do a critical reading analysis like you are reading some kind of essay. (Wowzers I did not expect to go on this much of a rant lol)
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    The novel was so fast paced, the flow of the story was not good, even the conversation have useless information that cut the flow of it. It feels like they're not talking a serious topic. The MC is not dumb, but how he do things doesn't make sense, he feels like a SUPER AI that need few hints to know what's goin on. Even if his mom is an attorney/lawyer it doesn't make sense he makes a decision right off the bat.
    It still enjoyable to read though, but a lot of plot holes right in early chapter.
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      NANU089
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      i dont think the author is that experienced in writing novels hence the weak start but since it is so popular i guess he improve stremendously
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        I guarantee that by the 75th-100th chapter you'll be absolutely hooked.
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    kkkk essa obra fda ganhou respeito
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    I'm not going to act like an emo, and say that I'm going to put my family in danger, and because of that, I need to abandon them.


    constraint
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    Kash22
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    Half Y’all Comments Are So Negative How Bout Y’all Drop The Novel.?
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    Profound_Noob
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    Author be like : here be vampires . HERE be witches , here be inquisitors. Here be dumbass MC
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    Hmmm... Being so cocky in 3 chapters, man your character development is so bad, and BTW what's the connection between your mom defending politics and the vampire polictics? just because you saw them and your cocky right now? Bruhh make it believable.
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      D3s0l4t3
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      Politicians control the lives of everyone in their respective countries, a president controls a country, a governor controls a state and a mayor controls a city, Lucy controls the lives of people,That they're going to turn into a snack for some Count who is bored with his countess's blood
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      Kash22
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      I Guess You Dont Understand Vampires Or Politicians & He Has Every Right To Be Cocky As Fu#k Considering He’s The Most Powerful & He Inherits More Then One Power Don’t Talk Shit If You Didnt Make It Past Chapter 10
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    He better lay his hands on the maids if he's a real man lolol
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