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Chapter 1: the beginning
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In the Azraeil Empire, nestled in the Duchess’s castle of the Human realm, lay a young boy in his luxurious bedroom. The gold-adorned edges of the room provided ample space for at least seven people to live comfortably. The boy, with chubby cheeks, a cute face, and silver hair, looked no more than eight years old. It was evident that he would grow up to be quite the looker.

However, the serenity of the room was interrupted by the boy’s continuous groaning, frowning, and tossing in the bed, as if in great pain. Suddenly, he jolted up, clutching his head.

"What the hell? Why does my head hurt so bad? What’s going on?" he groaned.

The boy kept screaming in pain for at least ten minutes until he lay limp on the bed, the pain slowly subsiding. He muttered, "Wow...uff, I must have drunk a lot last night," as he lay flat on the floor. However, he soon realized that he was looking at a ceiling that did not belong to him.

"What the hell? Did I drink so much that I came to the wrong house or am I hallucinating now?" he thought to himself.

As he tried to stand up, he fell back, grunting in pain.

"Damn it! My muscles hurt like hell! Did I get into a bar fight? No, that’s not important. The question is where the hell am I?" he wondered.

While lying down and questioning himself, the boy noticed something odd- everything around him looked big. He couldn’t believe his eyes as he slowly raised his hands to see that they were small, white, and smooth. A sense of dread crept over him as he realized that he had become smaller.

"No, it can’t be real, it’s not possible," he murmured to himself.

As the boy was trying his best to push such thoughts away, a voice was heard.

[Ding...]

[Scanning the current world.....]

[Scanning completed...]

[Welcome host!!!.....to your new life]

The system cheerfully greeted him, unaware that these words had crushed all the hope within its host."

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    kurraz
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    Why grammar so bad? How old are you, really?
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    Distructer
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    Capitalization.
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    maximux
    + 38 ⋅ 3 -
    I hate those common opennings where mc relates the absurd situation he found himself in to some randome light novels he read. It's too cliche, get original. You could at the very least leave him confused for the first chapters and let him realise the truth step by step until it hits him. Also, the grammar is poor.
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      ARamdomeUser
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      What you described is literally the most cliche opening ever. The type of Isekai opening this novel uses, admiralty somewhat unrealistic, only got popular because the realistic confused and then accepting opening got so prevelent with the rise of isekai that people got extremely annoyed and sick of it resulting in people just skipping it and then missing outher important introductions. There is simply a limited amount of ways you can write that prozess and it gets respektive real quick.
      So no that most defiantly wouldn't be original. In fact the reason this is used is exactly that what you described is so generic. And you are gonna appreciate them not wasting 10-50 chapters on that by the 20.-50. Isekai you read.
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    lihkin
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    It feels like someone used speech to text for this chapter. If the rest of the book is like this, I'm prolly going to have to drop it
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    Riskh
    + 27 ⋅ 0 -
    First of all, the capitalizations are all wrong. Second, commas everywhere. Improve on those first.
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