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Unfathomable Senior by Kuropon

It all started after I received that weird email…

What? Click the boxes to select the... Read more
It all started after I received that weird email…

What? Click the boxes to select the body type?

Want me to select a starting point?

Let me put in the name and be done with this, it’s getting late…

I always was bad with Chinese names… how about… Zhang Dong … Hehe…

Wait why is everything going dark…

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Author: I don’t own the art, first time writing anything and English isn’t my first language… so plz no bulli… Collapse
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    After reading till chapter 123 I think I've had enough. I might still visit this book sometime in the future. Judge for yourself whether you'd like to read it or not-


    The narration is good and those who are okay with Japanese light novels can read it without any problem. This story is all sunshine and rainbows.

    EDIT- I decided to read all of it in one go. This becomes better in later chapters. Its readable and a good choice if you want to pass time. 3/5
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    2.8
    It was all good till Vol 1 but after that it's totally going downhill i mean he's a strong guy and the leader of his clan why does he goes around being a busy body looking for trouble every where he goes
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    Dorbrim
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    Есть романтика кто нибудь подскажите пожалуйста?
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    Bad writing bro trash mc cowardly to the extreme annoying and shitty he's OP but he has no guts does nor like blood and some shits
    We know you are a beginner but man put some vibes in that shit there's no sense
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    I enjoyed Runesmith but I wonder if this one was written prior to it? Will take a look at some point anyway...
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    • 3.0
    3.0
    Compared to xianxia novels, this book a bit superior.

    The progress of storyline is quite slow. With the author focusing a lot on character development, rather than suspense and action stuff.

    If you're looking for tension and fighting fantasy, then throw away your expectations. It emphasizes inter-character dynamics more than world-building.

    And, the MC has a cowardly character (typical of Japanese isekai protagonists). But, after 50 chapters, MC development starts to pick up, so bear with it.

    Don't expect to find a ruthless, cruel, and calculative MC. But this book gives a positive vibe to moral values and healthy interactions of the characters.

    3/5.
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      I'll put it at 2.5/5 since i don't think it's superior , the entire 60ch. I've went through were the same old cliche stuffs
      and what really brings it down for me is the very cowardly mc , especially his interactions with women , Jesus Christ it's bad. It doesn't help the fact he keeps in stuttering every time he talks even tho he has

      Ah yes and
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        Ig everyone's dumb, but author does fix that "flaw" with a meta-explanation. As for MC, he becomes more ruthless as the novel goes on. As for your first problem, it's explained that
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          Yeah i know , throw fodder to weaken the behemoth strategy , but it still feels stupid. And it annoyes me , for the fact that mc could've just taken his entire clan and try to live elsewhere , or just his close family( which he has none)
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            Pretty sure he couldn’t do that bc his main system is the faction system and it’s super hard to build a solid faction while on the run
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              Well , i definitely wouldn't be going to a death trap , but i also don't have mc status so there's that..
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                Agreed, was a shitty situation, but MC did a good job then
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    • 5.0
    5.0
    Pretty good for time pass but as the author himself says he ain't a pro and going with the flow so a bit novice but kinda funny if you have experience to induce scenes anyway okish boast
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